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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing! I liked that everyone wished Asad good luck and blessed him. It was a very nice scene. I'm glad that Asya met at last.
Thanks a lot for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4:

Zoya ran into house which gave Asad exact address of her... Asad pressed shawl on his face and stood there feeling fragrance of her... She didn't even acknowledge herself with Simran standing near dining table and calling her... Zoya ran straight to her room... Simran ran behind her... She didn't understand reason for Zoya's behavior...

Zoya entered her room and closed her room door... Zoya pressed her back to door and closed her eyes trying to stop streaming tears... But tears made their own from closed eyes... Tears are trying to find their own meaning... Why are they flowing...??? Are flowing for uncontrollable happiness of seeing love after years...?? Are they flowing for heart wrenching feelings thinking about darkest past...?? Zoya didn't understand whether to go and cuddle in his arms or to fight with him... Zoya sat down in distraught condition hugging her knees close to her heart... She smacked her head against door... Simran is knocking door continuously but she is in vain...

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Garden:

Asad sat on garden bench with brimming tears with Zoya's shawl in his hands... He is agitated... He didn't understand what to do...?? How to pacify her..?? Asad is numb... He can understand whatever happened in past is really a nightmare which is difficult to forget...

FlashBack

Asad was waiting whole day for Zoya to come... Every minute is precious for him and that every moment of life he wants to spend with Zoya... His Zoya.. Future Mrs. Asad Ahmed Khan... Asad was trying to contact Zoya but he is not able to... He became furious thinking that Zoya didn't come to him... After continuous trails her mobile got connected late at night...

Asad - Hello Miss. Farooqi...

Asad got stunned hearing Ayaan's vice from Zoya's phone...

Ayaan - Hello Bhai jaan mein Ayaan...

Asad - Hello Ayaan... tum Zoya ke mobile...

Ayaan - Bhai Jaan who Zoya washroom mein hai, Phone continuously ring ho rahi toh mein ne utaliya...

Asad - Tum kaha ho...???

Ayaan - Mein room mein hoon...

Asad - Tum room mein ho...??? Aur Zoya aaj ghar kyun nahi aayi hai...?? Usse aajana chahiye tha...

Ayaan - Bhai Jaan aapko pata hai mujhe chot laga hai... Ghar walaon ne usse bejne se mana kar diya hai... Humne unn logon ko samjhane ki bahot koshish kiya hai... Par nahi ho paya... Zoya ko yaha rukhna pada...

Asad - Par tum dono ek room mein...???

Ayaan - Bhai jaan actually ghar wale sabb room pe nazar rakh rahe hai... Mujhe chot lagi hai na iss liye... Agar mein aur Zoya alag rahenge toh unhe shak hojayega...

Asad - Shak hojayega...!!! I don't care Ayaan... Tum logon ko ghar walaon ko sachai bata deni chahiye... Yeh sabb kab clear karenge aap dono...

Asad is really very angry... He felt like breaking everything near to him...

Ayaan - Bhai Jaan... Itna aasaan nahi hai... aapko samajhna chahiye...

Asad - Mein samjhu...??!!! Aap dono ko yeh lagta hai ki mein samjhoon...??? Pata hai mein Zoya se baat kiye hue kitne din hua hai...??

Ayaan and Asad's conversation is disturbed by Zoya...

Zoya - Rabert tum mera dupatta pe beta hai... hato...

Asad heard her voice and couldn't understand what is going on there... How can Zoya come infront of Ayaan without wearing duppata... Only question running in his mind how can they be in one room...??

Ayaan - Mona, Asad Bhai jaan ka call hai...

Zoya ran to get the phone...

Zoya - Hello... Mr. Khan... Mr. Khan...!!!

Call got disconnected and Zoya became upset...

Zoya - Lagta hai call cut hogaya... Tub hi na Rabert tu pehle nahi bata sakta... Aur ek baat tu meri duppata pe kaise bet gaya...???

Ayaan - Tum kud ki cheese apni jagah men nahi rakh sakti ho kya...??? Phir se kuch hogaya toh mujh pe chilaoge... aur kal pehni hui duppata hai.. iss ke liye chid rahe ho... abhi jo duppata pehni ho woh teekh hai na... phir..???

Zoya - Oh please...!! Teekhe baad mein ladte hai.. pehle mujhe aapke Bhai Jaan ko call karne do...

Zoya looked at her phone...

Zoya - Oh no, battery katam hone wala hai... tu apna phone do Ayaan...

Zoya took Ayaan's phone and dialed Asad's number...

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Khan Mansion: Asad's Room:

Asad is furiously pacing in his room... He is not able to understand happenings in his life... His phone started ringing and when he looked at his phone it is displaying Ayaan... Asad answered call...

Asad - Abb kya hai Ayaan...???

Zoya - Ayaan nahi Mr. Khan, mein Zoya...

Asad - Miss. Farooqi aap Ayaan mobile se kyun phone kar rahe hai...??? Aapke mobile kaha hai...???

Zoya - Woh Mr. Khan meri mobile ki battery bahot low hai...

Asad - Par abhi mein ne Ayaan se baat kiya hai...???

Zoya - Ha Mr. Khan... par katam hogayi hai...

Ayaan was trying to pour some water into glass but he is notable due to pain in his shoulder... Asad was going to say something when Zoya interrupted him...

Zoya - Rabert tum yeh kya kar rahe ho...??? Mujhe poochliya hota pani ke liye...??? Ek minute Mr. Khan...

Zoya pressed mobile between her ears and shoulder, she poured water into glass and while giving to Ayaan, Mobile sliped and fell down... Call got disconnected...

Asad - Hello Miss. Farooqi.. Hello...???

Asad furiously disconnected the call and threw phone on his bed...

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Siddiqui Mansion: Ayaan's Room:

Ayaan - Oho Zoya, tumne mera phone gira diya...

Zoya - Oh god Mr. Khan ki call cut hogayi..

Ayaan - Mera phone...???

Zoya - Kuch nahi hoga... Mein pehle Mr. Khan ko call karta hoon...

Zoya reached her phone which is attached to her battery pin... Her phone is switched off... when she turned her gaze towards switch board, switch was not on...

Zoya - Rabart tu na ek kaam bhi teekh se nahi kar sakta hai... tune plug insert karke switch on nahi kiya...

Ayaan is busy setting his phone and replied...

Ayaan - Mein ne sirf switch on nahi kiya par tune toh mera phone hi thod diya...

Zoya - Rabert...!!!

Ayaan - Mona...!!!

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Khan Mansion: Asad's Room:

Asad calmed himself down... He reached his phone and dialed Zoya's number... But machine tone replied it as switched off... Asad tried calling Ayaan's phone but it is unreachable... He couldn't control his anger anymore, he broke his phone... He sat on couch with fuming anger...

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Siddiqui Mansion: Ayaan's Room: / Khan Mansion: Asad's Room:

Zoya - Abb mein Mr. Khan ko kaise call karungi...??

Ayaan - Ek din baat nahi karogi toh kya hojayega...???

Zoya - Ek din kya mein unse ek pal bhi baat kiye bina nahi reh sakti hoon...

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Asad - Mein unhe baat karne ke liye mara jar aha hoon, par unhe toh koi farak hi nahi padta hai...

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Zoya - Mein unke bina ek pal bhi jee nahi paungi, Itne din unse dur rehna, mere liye narak se kum nahi hai...

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Asad - Mein unse milne ke liye taras raha hoon, Par unke pass har baat ka wajah hota hai...

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Zoya - Mere liye Mr. Khan ke aage kuch nahi hai Rabert...

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Asad - Aisa lagta hai unhe mera khayal hi nahi hai...

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Zoya - Meri Zindagi ki har kushi unke saath juda hai...

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Asad - Isa lagta hai woh mere bina, Ayaan ke saath kush hai...

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Zoya - Mujhe Mr. Khan se zyada koi nahi samajh sakte hai aur mujhse zyada unhe koi nahi samajh sakta hai...

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Asad - Miss. Farooqi mujhe kabhi samajhti hi nahi hai...

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FlashBack Ends

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Present:

Asad with unshed tears in his eyes...

Asad - Mein galat thi Zoya... Aapse zyada mujhe koi nahi samajh sakta hai... Mein kud aapko samajh nahi paya...

Inside House: Zoya's Room:

Zoya was sitting in same position and her puffy red eyes are continuously pouring down silent tears... Zoya didn't even care to wipe those tears... Every tear narrated painful story of Zoya... She never thought that she will become alone in this world...

Zoya - Mein iss mulk mein apni abbu ko doond ne ki maksat ko manzil banakar kadam rakhi thi... Aapse milne ke baad aap hi meri zindagi ka manzil bangaye the Mr. Khan...

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FlashBack Start

Siddiqui Mansion:

Ayaan's wound is healing fast and Zoya is waiting to return to her Mr. Khan... She again started packing all her things which were placed in cupboard due to force by Dadi... She is placing all things when she came across the photo frame... Her only evidence to find her father was that photo and it got framed by Asad, which she can never forget... Staring at photo Zoya wished to meet her father... At least once she want to meet her father... When she is staring at photo she heard Dadi's call from back... Coming out of trance she lost grip on photo frame and it fell down... Frame broke and glass became pieces... Tears dropped down her eyes... Dadi came to her and placed hand on her shoulders who is separating photo from those glass pieces...

Zoya - Yeh meri abbu ki yaad hai Dadi... aaj toot gaya hai...

Dadi - Yadein kabhi toote nahi hai beti, balki insaan ko thod dete hai...

Zoya stood up holding photo when strong breeze from window pushed photo with it into house... Photo flew from Zoya's hand and dropped before Gaffur who is passing through the way... Zoya ran towards the photo by the time Gaffur picked photo but he could see only the back of the photo... Raziya seeing this from far was frightened and praying Allah that Gaffur shouldn't see the photo but her prays were disposed by Allah... Gaffur turned photo and shocked to see it...

Zoya - Maaf kijiyega... yeh meri abbu ka photo hai...

Gaffur - Tumhare abbu ka...???

Zoya - Ha... mein iss mulk mein unhe doond ne ke liye kadam rakhi thi... Afsos, mein unhe doond nahi payi...

Gaffur - Kya tumhe tumhare abbu ne koi music globe diya hai...????

Zoya with wide eyes and surprised expression looked at him... On the other side Raziya didn't understand what to do...

Zoya - Aapko kaise pata...???

Gaffur - Dikhao...???

Zoya ran to her room and brought the music globe to show him... Gaffur's eyes are filled with unshed tears... After years he saw his daughter... Gaffur's affectionate eyes were filled with happiness seeing his daughter...

Zoya - Kya aap mere abbu ko jante hai...???

Zoya excitedly asked him with brimming tears of hope...

Gaffur - Kisi ki abbu ko yeh mode na mile jaha mein khada hoon... Kud ki beti ko yeh kehne ke liye ki mein hi uski abbu hoon...

Zoya - Aa... Aap meri...

Gaffur - Ha... mein tumhara abbu hoon...

Zoya - Abbu...!!!

Zoya hugged her father after years... She was wishing to meet her father till now with a small hope of meeting him... Her hope got a light and way through which she met her father... Gaffur caressed her head... He took her to middle of the hall and called everyone... He introduced her as his elder daughter... Everyone are in shock to hear this...

Gaffur - Meri beti is ghar mein bahu banke aayi hai... zindagi bar mere aankho ke saamne rehne...

Realization stuck Zoya... Her happiness got vanished in seconds... Zoya looked at her father... She didn't understand how to react... Why again Allah brought her to the same point where she have to decide between her Mr. Khan and her abbu... Humeira was stunned sensing the moment... Zoya is her elder sister unknown truth got revealed and she know that this is going to complicate situations...

Gaffur - Beti Humeira iddar aa...

Humeira went to her father with stunned expression... Gaffur held his daughters on both sides...

Gaffur - aaj mein bahot kush hoon... mere dono betiya mere saath hai...

Zoya and Humeira looked at their relation and got tensed thinking about forth coming complications...

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Night: Siddiqui Mansion: Ayaan's Room:

After a long day of events... Zoya is trying to call Asad continuously but he is not answering her call... She didn't understand what to do...??? She felt that her world is built with plying cards which will get shattered in any second... Humeira came there hesitantly knocking door... Zoya didn't hear the knock and didn't even see Humeira standing there... Humeira didn't understand how to call her... She stood there for a moment in confusion... Zoya turned back and got surprised seeing Humeira standing there... She understood why she is calm... There recent developments in relationship changed everything...

Zoya - Humeira tum kab aayi...?? Mein ne tumhe dekha hi nahi...

Humeira - Woh Zo... Baj...

Humeira didn't understand how to call her... Zoya understanding her struggle went to her and made her sit and she also sat beside her...

Zoya - Tum mujhe Baji nahi bhulaoge...???

Humeira - Kya mein bhula sakti hoon...???

Zoya - Ha... Mein tumhari Baji jo hoon...

Humeira and Zoya smiled...

Humeira - Yeh sabb kya ho raha hai Baji...??? Humari zindagi khel kaise bangayi...???

Zoya hearing Baji from Humeira developed so many emotions inside... She grew up like an orphan with no relations... But seeing her sister she felt really happy but bitter truth about their future suppressed there happiness...

Zoya - Mujhe bhi kuch samajh nahi araha hai... Kya kare iss uljhan se bahar nikalne ke liye...??

Humeira - Humein Ayaanji se baat karni chahiye...

Zoya - Mr. Khan se bhi... Par yeh dono kaha hai yeh pata nahi chal raha hai...

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Asad and Ayaan's Meeting Spot:

Asad - Yeh tum kya keh rahe ho Ayaan...??? Miss. Farooqi... Miss. Farooqi, Gaffur Siddiqui ki beti hai...

Asad asked with a surprised and shocked expression with furious tone...

Ayaan - Hum sabb bhi waha ise hi shock hogaye the bhai jaan...

Asad - Zoya uss Gaffur Siddiqui ki beti hai, jin hone meri ammi ki jeena haram kar diya tha...

Asad after a pause...

Asad - Itna sabb kuch hogaya par Zoya ne mujhe bataya tak nahi...

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Thanks for reading... Next Part will be continued with flash back and Present...

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Edited by VindhyaMounika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
So this caused Zoya to go away from Asad😭 i never thought that these things will be there contributing to widened gap between them how can Asad misunderstand Zoya🥺 but i wont blame him though, he is also suffering Ayaan how selfish😡 Badi bi🤢 i cant even stand the mentioning of her name🤢😆
I hope AsYa reunite soon in this story😳 my bechare bachaas.😭 loved the update👏 thanks for the pm.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So this was what makes Zoya go away from Asad.,
Asad misunderstand Zoya,well i cnt blame him though
Ayaan is so selfish nt to talk of Badi Bi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow ywr loved the flashbacks
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Loved it
Keep up the good work
Add more present scene in next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update and I loved the flashbacks. Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Flashbacks very well explained..
Between the past and the present...
Is this the reson for asad and zoyas seperation..
Being gaffurs daughter..
Or is there more to it. ...
Loved this update...
Thanks for the pm. 6
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So many complications ... with everyone.. just adding more and more
where is the end... its only growing bigger




Edited by Linsie - 11 years ago

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