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Posted: 11 years ago

#831

ohh asad you deserve it man😡

beautifully written

thanks for the pm

continue soon😃

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-StarsLinedUp-

@-StarsLinedUp-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#832

Originally posted by: maha2012
Aashnaa aapii😊
i knw i havent been commenting since a few updates

busy with university projects😭

u dnt update frequently anymore😒

plzzz update next part!!!

love you n ur story🤗❤️

Hey gal..I was wonderning where u've been..but hey its all cool..get ur projects taken care of...n wen u get the time..comment it up😃..I knw I havent been updating frequently..its just that I lack inspiration sometimes..n I feel bad if I post a half hearted update..so I just wait for wen I feel I can write..workin on it though..😕😃..n hey I updated so if u get the chance read..like n comment..hope to hear frm u soon...n thanks a lot for droppin by n lettin me knw..😃..Thank u..😃

Edited by starslinedup - 11 years ago

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Mayee2217

@Mayee2217

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#833

Ufff...sooo emotionally powerful update👏please update the next part soonnn and PM me😊

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akaswan

@akaswan

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#834

Great udapte continue very soon please 😊😊

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Mehvish Fatima

@MissSparkling

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#835

away from Zoya. wht does he mean?

awsm update

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#836

it was freaking awesome!!!!!
i just loved asya's fight!!!
why is dilshad hidding the truth...n again asad is going somewhere...oh plsss dont make him disappear!!!!
eager to read further...continue soon

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princess101

@princess101

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#837

I hope Asad regrets wat he is doing soon I loved the update thanx for the PM and UPDATE SOON PLEASEEE😃

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#838

Reserved!

finally unresrving this one!!!

well this is my happy dance for the shootout...thank you so muchhh di🤗

Asad-Zoya..it hurts...its hurts so bad..I don't know what to do...I've tried for so long to make this pain go away, done everything I could, but still it just comes back...Please take this pain away...I cant take it anymore...its killing me inside..Zoya please make it go away...I just want to feel empty inside...Zoya... he begged..as he lay his head on her shoulder..his tears oozing thorugh her sleeves.

this brought tears to my eyes...😭 felt really bad for asad😭

Zoya- Asad.. ...so jao... and with her last words Asad let go..allowing himself to be held by Zoya, as sleep steered him to his memories.

aaww...just like a kid he mechanically did wat she said n then slept⭐️

Zoya almost pushed Asad on the ground as she jumped on him hugging him tight.. yelling YES..YES..YES...kissing him anywhere she could..their audience..turning away..laughing and happy... Asad was red by the time Zoya broke off the hug...his face smeared with her lipstick..but he was a happy man. Taking the opportunity, with no one watching.Asad lifted Zoya in her arms and kissed her, she was going to be his wife...and the sound of that..elevated the joy he felt in his being.

well wat else can we expect from zoya🤣

Ayaan- Magar ammi, they need to stop...I mean baat aur bigad sakti hai..

Dislhad and Najma looked at each other and after what seemed like a decade, burst out into fits of laughter.

Najma-Bhaijaan this is normal, infact if they weren't fighting we needed to worry.

Ayaan-What do you mean, comeon this cant be for real..it seems like they are ripping each others heads off...n here you are..he shook his head in dismay..

i was shocked wen they started laughing coz i was as clueless as ayaan😲😆

Zoya- Ammi stop it..you know I hate your son...ARRGGGHH...I don't wanna see his face again..mein jaa rahi hi..Tell Mr Akdu Ahmed Khan to go rot in hell...He and is Friggin ego...Screw him..and you..she pointed at Ayaan..what are you sitting here for..mujhe ghar nahi chodna???

Ayaan stammered...as he stood up and followed Zoya to the car, looking back, asking for help, but both the ladies laughed, enjoying the brunt of Zoya's anger transferred to Ayaan.

THIS HAD TO BE THE FUNNIEST PART OF THE WHOLE FF TILL NOW!!!CUDNT STOP LAUGHING🤣

This was the last straw...Grabbing his keys and wallet Asad Stormed out of his room..walking past the concerned stares of his mother and sister. He drove off, wanting to get away from it all, away from Zoya.

ohh noo...where the hell did he go😲

loved the update asusual...i liked this part very much coz it gives a message tat we are always struggling within...with our own bitter thoughts and its very much necessary to let go of our past...amazing dis is...di at 18 aap mujhe life ke baare mein itna kuch sikha rahe ho😆

p.s well im not supposed to ask but u wrote tat ur cuurent state of mind might reflect this update...i hope everything is good🤗

Edited by elenaa - 11 years ago