FF Turnaround NOTE on PG150.. - Page 108

Originally posted by: Smmm

Hi !! Fist omg 3 parts in two days !! I finally just finished reading them !

God I love Asad character it's sooo hard not to fall in love with him , every thing about him is so endearing (even when he is being an ass )

I love the fact that you want them both to move forward with out him knowing the truth it's like rediscovering heir love !!!

And shit man they were married !! Its sooo shoking and unexpected , but then of course it's set in an Indian back drop .

I can't wait for asad to win her over , and San Francisco I'm sure is going to be spectacular

An other thing I loved was Asad all angry and smashing his had in the mirror I could almost imagine it as if I was watching the show !!!

On second thoughts I wish the written would higher you , the story would be sooo much more beautiful ,interesting and gripping 👏

Anyways I could go on about your storie but I don't have the time nor I want to bore you !!

Thank for the pm :)

Btw I'm from the south of Europe !! And you are from Baroda omg I'm dying to go there!! It's currently my dream city I hope someday I get a chance to visit it , I have heard sooo much about it .

Originally posted by: rosamale

Just now i read this comment😆 am i that great? (read in bold)😉😆 first in everything huh😳

Gods and Godesses are always listening to me when i ask something for others, but when it comes to mine forget about listening, they wont even look at me😆

and you are correct about ma name😃 well, nick name😆

Originally posted by: elenaa

Reserved!

finally unresrving this one!!!

well this is my happy dance for the shootout...thank you so muchhh di🤗

Asad-Zoya..it hurts...its hurts so bad..I don't know what to do...I've tried for so long to make this pain go away, done everything I could, but still it just comes back...Please take this pain away...I cant take it anymore...its killing me inside..Zoya please make it go away...I just want to feel empty inside...Zoya... he begged..as he lay his head on her shoulder..his tears oozing thorugh her sleeves.

this brought tears to my eyes...😭 felt really bad for asad😭

Zoya- Asad.. ...so jao... and with her last words Asad let go..allowing himself to be held by Zoya, as sleep steered him to his memories.

aaww...just like a kid he mechanically did wat she said n then slept⭐️

Zoya almost pushed Asad on the ground as she jumped on him hugging him tight.. yelling YES..YES..YES...kissing him anywhere she could..their audience..turning away..laughing and happy... Asad was red by the time Zoya broke off the hug...his face smeared with her lipstick..but he was a happy man. Taking the opportunity, with no one watching.Asad lifted Zoya in her arms and kissed her, she was going to be his wife...and the sound of that..elevated the joy he felt in his being.

well wat else can we expect from zoya🤣

Ayaan- Magar ammi, they need to stop...I mean baat aur bigad sakti hai..

Dislhad and Najma looked at each other and after what seemed like a decade, burst out into fits of laughter.

Najma-Bhaijaan this is normal, infact if they weren't fighting we needed to worry.

Ayaan-What do you mean, comeon this cant be for real..it seems like they are ripping each others heads off...n here you are..he shook his head in dismay..

i was shocked wen they started laughing coz i was as clueless as ayaan😲😆

Zoya- Ammi stop it..you know I hate your son...ARRGGGHH...I don't wanna see his face again..mein jaa rahi hi..Tell Mr Akdu Ahmed Khan to go rot in hell...He and is Friggin ego...Screw him..and you..she pointed at Ayaan..what are you sitting here for..mujhe ghar nahi chodna???

Ayaan stammered...as he stood up and followed Zoya to the car, looking back, asking for help, but both the ladies laughed, enjoying the brunt of Zoya's anger transferred to Ayaan.

THIS HAD TO BE THE FUNNIEST PART OF THE WHOLE FF TILL NOW!!!CUDNT STOP LAUGHING🤣

This was the last straw...Grabbing his keys and wallet Asad Stormed out of his room..walking past the concerned stares of his mother and sister. He drove off, wanting to get away from it all, away from Zoya.

ohh noo...where the hell did he go😲

loved the update asusual...i liked this part very much coz it gives a message tat we are always struggling within...with our own bitter thoughts and its very much necessary to let go of our past...amazing dis is...di at 18 aap mujhe life ke baare mein itna kuch sikha rahe ho😆

p.s well im not supposed to ask but u wrote tat ur cuurent state of mind might reflect this update...i hope everything is good🤗

So peeps I guess its that time now...Time for me to start up a new thread..n wat better update to do so..then a happy one😃..so I'll cya in the next thread with a lil something frm me..n the next update..so keep readin..liking n commentin...N THANK U ALL SO SO SO VERY MUCH FOR COMMENTIN N GETTIN THIS STORY TO PG 150🥳 CHEERS TO ALL OF U..U GUYS TRULY ROCK😎

chapter 17a...
Zoya cried lot. . asad accusation its broke her. ..
Asad know he screw up big time
it just happen his anger take worst off him..
he know zoya is crying and because of him..

Asad in zoya room so emotional sad...
went zoya found the blood trail.. to asad room
she run to his room.. terrified something happen
to asad...love that zoya pour went she
panic see the blood trail. ..

Zoya taking asad to clinic... so cute fight

she found the note from asad. .. but not ready to
give in...

Ayaan talking to asad... saying all the good things he have done and he is just normal human being. .
not to take things hard...

asad he to make it up big time start with dilshad...
and made issue way to zoya.. first challenge her
make her burst and then kiss her...

awesome update loved it yaaarr...thank you

Originally posted by: starslinedup

first of all that dance was so FRIGGING awesome...its was just ROFL...I laughed..it was the last thing I saw before I slept..n honest to god I slept like a log..a smile on my face...Its so unique...n so exclusive to u...loved it😃❤️

n read karke acha laga...I guess It makes my day that my update made u laugh..n made u cry..n made u feel..n taught u a few lessons..😆( I just hope positive lessons ho😉)..well gal I am gonna use this comment n reply to all ur comments..if thats cool..after all I need to start a new thread..courtsey u..😃

cudnt stop myself from reading😆looks like u again used ur black magic😉

here are my comments for ch 16b;

im so glad tat nikhat now knows everything n supports zoya...poor girl needs someone😭

She smiled through her tears, receiveing nods of approval from all the 3 as they closed in to Zoya taking her in for a group hug.

aww...the group hug

It had been around 10 days and Asad had still not returned, disregarding every plea from his family of coming back.

10 FREAKING DAYS!!!!!!!!!😲😡

asad thought tat she left😆

zoya is gonna stay at his place...yayayyy

What help..havent you done enough already...Zoya...u cant help anyone..a girl that only sees where her interests lie cant think of anyone else then herself. I know as I have been on the receiving end. You made all the promises in the world when we got married, made me believe in the possibility of a happily ever after and when the going got tough, and when Miss Zoya Farooqi had to deal with hard times, when I needed her by my side..what did she do?? She ran away, she sent me the divorce papers with her signatures.She couldn't take the responsibility of a marriage, the most sacred union amongst a man and a woman, she couldn't bear the weight of being Mrs Zoya Asad Khan...so she ran away..and cut all her ties...Miss Zoya Farooqi cannot help anyone..she just knows how to run...RUN RUN RUN...So no I don't need you help Miss Farooqi..I can take care of myself..I am no longer blinded by the illusion of your good heartedness. You are a selfish woman, who has no value of anything in her life.

no yaaarrr...he cant say tat...he will regret this like helll laterrr😭🤢

great he desrved a slap!!!👏

Zoya could see the immense trust Asad had for his mother and if today Dilshaad reveald the truth behind their split, then Asad would break beyond repair, she had to take the balme on herself, to save their relationship..

Zoya-Ammi aapko meri kasam aap kuch nahi kahengi..With that Dilshad's tongue stammered, unable to speak any further, her eyes filling with pain..

ohhhmyyygoddd!!!! how can anyone be so selfless...i just love n respect this zoya!😳

wonderful update...and i agree wid ur reasons for dlshaad not revealing the truth...😃

off to read next chapter😉

🤗{u will hav to bear wid my hugs}

well..atleas u read it all..n got it out of ur head..that it was pending..again..another awesome comment..with cute bear hugs ( i knw I need to get used to it...😆)..but I loved readin ur comment for sure..n m glad u liked it n agreed with me..warna...😆 JK...

ack again!😳

here are my comments for ch 17a:

a happy update!!!!FINALLY AFTER A LONG TIMEEE!!!!!

im posting this piggy again coz i loveee it!!!😉

i just want their suffering to end soon😭

he left a note for her😃

ASAD..shrieked Zoya as she ran up to him shaking him...panicking...Asad wake up, wake up...please...she slapped him a few times..

Oww..why are you hitting me?? Have you lost it woman..Asad graoned, being jerked out of his sleep..he stood up, rubbing his eyes, trying to wake up when Zoya crashed into him, hugging him tight,her tears...soaking his shirt in a matter of seconds.

😆 best part of this update!

Asad nodded, her words sinking in his soul, his mother meant the world to him and he trusted her never to steer him wrong, she would always be the cause of his happiness of that he was sure. He stood up, ready to make things right.

ohh noo...he trusts her so much...glad u will reveal the truth wen zoya wud be by his side to help him get over with wat his mother has done😃

Asad- Well in that case I better start making it up to you.. and with that he closed in the distance between their lips and kissed the living daylights out of her..his lips dominating her senses, making her melt, her anger becoming obsolete.

He let her go sensing her need to breathe, and smirked with satisfaction seeing her flustered.

ASad-So now do you forgive me??

Zoya gawked at him in shock..

Zoya- NO..n what do you mean by that..she pushed him away trying to straighten up.

Asad-Well..you always forgave me..after we..he stopped suddenly registering the missing link..Oh I see I guess I need to go all the way to get your forgivness..he walked towards her, his smile getting wider, his eyes filling with mischief, wanting to close in the distance but her hand kept him at bay...

Zoya- Don't you dare come any closer...and just get out of here Asad...you are not forgiven..she shoved him out the door and made it a point to lock it.

Asad walked away laughing, feeling damn confident in the path he had taken, to get her forgivenss.

ahem ahem... so asad's way of forgiveness is working in his, zoya and in readers favour😉

this update was awesome...i loved many things from this chapter but i guees if i quoted them toh pura chapter hi quote kardeti😆

p.s well abt me...u know tat im a punjabi n im 18...anddd my real name is natasha...and i stay in mumbai...pusuing bcom wid ca😳

p.p.s now pure 2 hours hogye tat im on dis forum reading ur updatess...i was supposed to study😭😆 now im going😉

p.p.ps sorryyy!!!last p.s this is😆...i read tat u responded to my comments...and from now how ill leave a hug for u after my every comment so tat u get comfy wid it

the piggie os cho cute..it just makes me smile..n I can stare at it for hours...😃

Well once again..makes me very happy that u liked it...n felt the emotions...n yes finally happy days are coming back...n love the fact that u loved my crazy way for Asad to ask for forgivness..indeed a win win situation for both😆...

Hey Natasha..n nice goin with ur studies..keep that up😃..n well ab tum aaraam se padhaai karo..no updates comin yet😉

N Haai,.,hugs...Bhaago...😆..Lol no all cool gal..iI guess I'll have to get used to it..so now I'll cya in a new thread with the next update..Cheers🥳