some lines for ASAD & ZOYA.......

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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok so wrote something for AsYa after long time...though i am literally numb after current episodes and for me its not my cup of tea,coffee😆
anyways i don't want to discuss about show and spoil my mood.
as i told i was very emotionally disturbed with all nonsense so i tried to divert my mind as my friends shruthi ,anu and others suggested ..
and i love writing poems here they are...😃
wrote in 10. minutes so bear with me😆
hope you all like it😳

ZOYA POV-

khata jo huyi hai mujhse uski itni badi saja kyu,
tu chala hai mujhko karne auro ke liye fana kyu.

main kitni adhuri hoon tere bina janata hai tu,
fir chala hai mujhko khud se karne juda kyu.

main kaise de doon kisi aur ko jo teri jagah hai,
ek vajah bata de maan lu ye tera faisla kyu.

karne ko kahta hai mohabbat pe yakin hamari,
fir mohabbat ka apni aaj kiya sauda bata kyu.

maine suna tha ki mohabbat likhti hai khud ka mukaddar,
fir aaj zamane ko bana diya mere ishq ka khuda kyu.

main teri hoon tujhse hoon tujhme hi rahoongi qayamat tak,
fir aaj tere mere umar bhar ke faasle aaye darmiya kyu.

na teri wafa me kami thi na meri wafa me ae yaar,
fir nikli hamari mohabbat ki kismat hi itni zaalim bewafa kyu.



ASAD POV


fir aaj vaqt ne laa kar diya khada mujhe us mod pe,
jis raah chalna mujhe hai apni khushiya chhod ke.


tera gunegaar hoon main ye jaanta hoon ,
par kuchh nahi tha raasta mujhpe iske siva chhod ke.

teri jindgi ko aaj leke haatho me apni is tarah,
de diya maine ek pal me haatho me kisi aur ke,

kya sahi hai kya galat ye toh vaqt hi bayatega ,
ek di joda hai maine aaj kisi ka ,do dilon ko tod ke,

ye vaqt hai tufaano ka meri kashti banana hai tujhe,
tera saath raha to ye bhanvar bhi chale jaayenge rukh mod ke.

tu meri hai main tujhse hoon ye sach kabhi na badlega
ham milege fir yakin rakh rasmo ke ye jhuthe bandhan tod ke.






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-Anitha- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Suja di awesome post👏
Its a good way to divert the mind from being emotional... Super di
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Posted: 11 years ago
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U are amazingly talented...👏
If you write so well in 10 mins...I can't even fathom how well u can write with more time...
Suju...mazaa aa gaya...yes serious and sad tha but dil ko chu gaya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rivya

U are amazingly talented...👏

If you write so well in 10 mins...I can't even fathom how well u can write with more time...
Suju...mazaa aa gaya...yes serious and sad tha but dil ko chu gaya

thnks rivi

aaj main better hoon

aaj meri sister trollbeth MOTW bani hai😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice 👏
😭 l am feeling so sad for asya.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Suja di..Amazing post :D

You wrote it in 10 mins??? Wow...I can't even write it in a day 😆 okay datwas lame :P

And its a great way to divert ur mind too...I'm still not over yesterday's epi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awwwe. Come here 🤗.

That's beautiful sweetheart. Very well written n brings out AsYa's present state of mind. Proud of you. 🤗

Don't be so attached to a stupid fictional show n it's characters Suja. It's not worth it n u r too precious!!!

Here's to many more such shayaris fm u in future n happy ones too 😆.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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di it was superb
u made me emotional di
post it on forum 32...
write more di... u r extremely talented.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ani-asya

Suja di awesome post👏
Its a good way to divert the mind from being emotional... Super di

thnks ani😳
yes i needed to get a way to diver my mind😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnks😳
m glad you liked it😃

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