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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

^ i have a smile like that now 😆

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

OMG...this was so beautiful and heart wrenching...I wish the scene would have played out like this...
It would have been amazing to watch...I wish CVS learned a few things from you like how to treat a woman like one nd not as some commodity...
Beautiful 👏

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: anushreemishra
OMG...this was so beautiful and heart wrenching...I wish the scene would have played out like this...
It would have been amazing to watch...I wish CVS learned a few things from you like how to treat a woman like one nd not as some commodity...
Beautiful 👏

Aww thanks! 😳 I agree it was poorly done. Very flattered that you think the CV's should learn from me 😆😳

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Rupali

@HamariAduriKahn

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

res 😊

unres.
do u have superpowers or something? I can't even think of enough creativity to update my story in a couple of weeks and u came up with two amazing os's in one day! ur a fantastic writer and I just loved both the stories!

Edited by Love-AsYa-4ever - 12 years ago

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

^ i have a smile like that now 😆

Hayeee! Mein mar jawa!

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: webuser7

You completely deserve my comments and more for both your OSes! If I wasn't so tired and sleepy, I would have written more. You are excellent with emotional scenes! 😊

Thank you! Aw that's ok. I think any more and I would be permanently red in the face 🤣

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

very well written...simply beautiful...😊

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antiquegold

@antiquegold

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Heartbreaking. Beautiful. Brava! 👏

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jasmine

@Reyansh23

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Super saddd...
I hate d ongoin track...

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Ranee Bhattacharya

@raneeb

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Gosh how do you manage it---two in a row on Asad's thought process! Fantastic! I have always loved the written word to the visual because of just what you are doing---getting into the mind of the protagonists! Love it- Thankyou!