Asya SS:True Love.... Updated Part 5 (page 19) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting start!!!!! secret admirer or what??? hope to read more soon...pm me too...
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intresting so far
plz pm me
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u should cntinue and plz pm me..
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Interesting ...plsss continue 😃
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VERY INTERESTING U SHOULD DEFIANTLY CONTINUE SOON AND THANX FOR THE PM AND HOPE TO READ THE UPDATE VERY SOON :D
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u should definately continue and can u plz pm me wen u do
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Hey friends...!!! Thanks for your response... This is really encouraging... This is dedicated to all those people who commented... This is really worked as boost for my work... I am really sorry for my late update... Update became late coz my laptop was not working... I am giving this update from my mobile... Please give your feedback after reading...

Part 1

Everyone has a special day in there life when there story starts... Story of there life... Actually story written by god which change there life... Unpredictable life will become more twisted with he someone special...

Zoya with two test-tube in her two hands stood before her apparatus to start her experiment wearing her white lab coat... All colorful but dangerous chemicals around are getting used by her...

Professor (instructing students) -careful... If any chemical make there way on your body it will burn...

There first step got completed Successfully...

Professor - now it's time for second step... That color burns your skin and this spoils your dress... Be careful...

Zoya carefully looking the dropper through her lab spects... If Zoya is there something should happen with other's or her... Now it's time for her... Zoya while carefully dropping few drops into funnel with successful smile on her face she lifted her hand... Her bad luck dropped few drops of chemical on her lab coat...

Zoya - oh no...!!! Allah Miyya yeh kya hogaya...

Professor - why are y screaming Miss. Zoya...??

Zoya - sir actually I got a mark on my dress due to chemical..

Professor - I asked u people to take care... Go and clean it...

Zoya ran from there to clean her dress... She walked through the empty corridor cursing herself for stupid act... She entered women's washroom...

Zoya - meri coat...!!

She started washing the spot with water... It got spread over due to water... She removed her lab coat and got shocked seeing her spoiled dress...

Zoya - Allah miyya...!! Yeh meri favorite dress hai...

Zoya tried cleaning but her trail are in vain... She tried and got irritated with the mark which is just spreading on... She stopped washing understanding that water is helping chemical to spread more on her dress... She came out accepting her failure...

When she is going to step out of washroom with fallen face she got a liquid with a small bottle written solution with a paper under that...

Message:

Aapki problem ki solution hai yeh Solution jis se yeh daag nikal jayegi... Pani use matt kijiye...

- Your Friend

Zoya with confused face and letter in hand stood there staring at the solution...

Zoya - kya mein use karoon...!! Agar daag bad jayegi toh...?? Kisne beja hoga...??? Naam bhi nahi hai...

Zoya turned paper to see wether any name is there... She couldn't find any name but found another message...

Message

This is safe trust me...

- Your friend

Zoya - use karoon...?? Choice bhi nahi... Use kar ke dekti hoon...

Zoya went inside with solution ... She dropped few drops and rubbed it... To her surprise stain got vanished... With a wide smile on her face after cleaning her lab coat and dress she came out of washroom... By the time she came out everyone are in corridor... Making way through crowd she went to lab to collect her bag...

Zubina - daagh nikal gayi...

Zoya - ha... Pata hai hua kya tha...

Zoya explained story to her friend Zubina with excitement...

Zoya - I want to thank that secret helper...

Zubina - sure..!! But humein abhi jaana hai... Tumhara bhai aajayega...

Zoya - mujhse zyada toh tumhe padi hai...

Zubina - Zoya...!! Abb chale...

Zoya and Zubina got out of lab with there bag and books... They met all there friends in the corridor making there way towards gate...

A rude, stupid and non-sense gang sat near gate on there bikes teasing and commenting everyone... There ill behavior is irritating everyone... By they kept there heads down when they saw Zoya nearing them...

Guy 1 - Hum kisi se nahi darte hai... But iss se darna padta hai...

Guy 2 - iss se nahi... Iski bhai se...

Guy 3 - cop jo hai... Mr. Anas Abdul Farooqi...

Guy 2 - abb chup raho woh aagaya hai...

A police qualis stopped infront of college gate, Anas in driving seat... Zoya and Zubina got inside car... Car left from there...

Ana's Abdul Farooqi is best, tough and sincere cop... He is master mind... He could solve any type of case... Everyone criminal suffer from shivers hearing his name...

Anas - college kaisa tha...??

Zoya - teekh tha...!!

Anas - koi problem nahi hua na...??

Zubina - aap jaise bhai hoga toh Zoya ki problem kaise ho sakti hai...

Anas - aap jaise dost ke saath hai toh phir tension ki baat hi nahi..,

Zoya - ek doosre ko praise karna hogaya hai... Har din ki dialogues se mein bore hogayi hoon...

Zubina twisting Zoya's ear...

Zubina - accha..!!

Zoya - ha.. ha... Dialogue badal jati hai... Par concept same hai...

Anas - Zubina..!!

Zubina - aap humesha apni behen koi support kijiye...

Anas - kyun nahi support karungi woh toh meri laadli behen jo hai...

Zubina - dekh liya hai tum dono ko pyaar...!! Humesha mujhe akele kar dete hai...

Anas started smiling when Zoya went near to her keeping her hand around Zubina's shoulder...

Zoya - aisa kuch nahi... Tu akheli meri best friend ho aur yeh mera akheli bhai... Dono best hai...

Zoya giving side hug to Zubina winked at Anas...

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Thanks for reading...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice..thanks for the pm..
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Love it !!!!!! Continue soon 😃
Thanks for pm ... 😃

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