AsYa OS: DaNce In RaIn

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello everyone😊
Yesterdays Episode has made us all heartbroken so to light up your moods i wrote this😉
Dance In Rain

Asad Had Planned a Dinner date for Zoya in backyard of their house...

Its been 20 minutes, Asad has been waiting for her

Asad:Is Ladki ka mein kya karoon,she know i dont like waiting .

I told her to get ready and be their At 8:00pm sharp but Vo to vo hai apni manmarzi karti hai

Asad was busy talking to himself when he heard or may be felt her coming...

He didn't knew why but he could always fell her presence...

He turned around and their she was, looking Stunning in the pink saree gifted by Him...

According to him she always look her best in saree...

He just took a deep breath and said Oye Hoye!!!

Silence All Around...

The chilly breeze Start Flowing which smelled of roses and fresh rainfall. Drops of water fell to the earth, Forming rythamic beats

Asad(Holding her hand) Lets go inside the shed

Zoya : No lets Dance in Rain

Asad:Miss Faroquie ap beemar ho jaenge

Zoya: Mr Khan apko jana hai to jaeye let me enjoy the rain

She spread her Arms wide,talking all the blessings of Rain,she started dancing
Carried by the wind, into each step--spinnign as if she were as light as a feather. Her steps were presice; accurate--as if she had done this dance before

Asad was Standing under the shed admiring her beauty , more beautiful than the storm around them. .

As the rain drops hit her body, her curvy figure looked so perfect...

Her eyes have caught his eyes and he can't bring himself to look away. We smile, captivated by each others presence

He could not control himself but go and dance with her in the rain...

Asad:May i have the pleasure to dance with you?

Zoya:MrKhan but u hate rains why are u standing here??

Asad:Because I Love you more and my love for u is more than my hate towards Anything

Zoya (blushing): ok than lets dance,but where's the music???

Asad: He placed his hand on the low of her back.Ummm "The music" Cant u listen it??

Zoya: wrapping her arms around his neck, "Can you dance with no music?"

Asad: But its here only can't you listen Voilen Playing...

Zoya(Making a pupy face):No Asad i Can't hear it,where's it

Asad:"Its Everywhere" and when i seee your beautiful face it automatically starts playing

Zoya: Oh Really??

Asad: "Shhh..." he brought a finger to her lips, "listen.",twirkling his hands in the air

Now can u fell the raindrops creating music

Zoya:hmmm

They began to dance feeling thae rain and the music produced by it

He looked at her lovingly, as they danced a bit longer, they danced for what seemed forever.

A wonderful forever, and eternity worth waiting for.

The Breeze along with the rain was creating sensations in their body

It was then that the music stopped. For it was then that the rain turned into nothing more than a light drizzle.

Zoya stood still, stopping the dance. Asad was about to ask her what was wrong when he was suddenly pulled into a lovely, long kiss

They never had a moment been so perfect, never have two lovers shared such an amazing scene. They get closer, thunder roars in tune with the beating of our hearts.

They embrace each other, wet from head to toe,

It was the greatest moment of their lives...

None of them wanted it to end...

Zoya moved her hands off his chest and they both hugged each other tightly and it lasted for another eternity...

"I want to have you every day. You tell me you want me forever, but, that's not long enough. We will be together after our time here has ended, in a place where we can experience this every day. I promise its true, I promise to stay... just give me, one more kiss in the rain"..

Hope u all like it

Please hit like button and leave your valuable comments

This os is dedicated to Mjhtfan_mahima coz she loves rains and so do i and mrina di coz i love your writings and they inspire me to write 😳
Luv ya both🤗
P.s the very first os I wrote was on rain and it was on asya only
P.p.s-All chappals and tamatars are welcomed😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love in rain with asya hayye !!!!!
Sooo romantic ... Love ur OS 😃
And plsss update ur FF 😆
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hey it is so beautifull...
so romantic...
asya dancing in the rain so romantic...
imagine the whole scene its so lovely...
thx fr the pm...
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hey it is so beautifull...
so romantic...
asya dancing in the rain so romantic...
imagine the whole scene its so lovely...
thx fr the pm...
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MISSING THIS SO MUCH!!!!! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️



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Lov in d rain Asya hayeee so romantic nuts!!
😉

Hug 4 ya 🤗
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Great job! It's so romantic and beautiful!
I loved this line: I Love you more and my love for u is more than my hate towards Anything!

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