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Homeslice

@Homeslice

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

*Sniffs*

I cried!

My mum thought i was mad. =(

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countingstarz

@countingstarz

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

So beautiful ! 😳 Are there any guys like Asad out there , because I want one 😆

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Hy dear its simply da best...

MEan one of da best os read dear...

THnx a lot to snd me pm n gv opportunity to read dis masterpiece

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Res for a lamba comment ;)

Ok so you're probably mad at me. Sali res karti hai aur phir bhool jati hai.

(hides)

This was utterly beautiful. The pain they both felt, Zoya for herself and Asad for her as well. The way they're so connected. He can sense her every discomfort.

When he tried to let her be independent, I knew. I knew he wouldn't just leave her on the bus. But what really threw me was that he had asked someone on the bus for help the previous day. That I totally didn't see coming.

It's was so refreshing to see him be her strength, without actually being physically there for her. And Zoya, my poor Zoya. I can understand her fear, her hesitance to love him like before after feeling abandoned. But the way you portrayed her realization was amazing! Her friend narrating everything he did for her, while keeping his distance. I can't imagine what he must have gone through seeing her yearn for his help, and then not being as affectionate with him.

But I just loved it. I literally teared up in the scene (yup this was like a movie too 😆) where she realizes how much he loves her. Her friend narrating it all, had me tearing, and her apology to him as well.

You're such a brilliant writer. I'm so happy I get to read your work

Hope this made up for LATEST of comments 😆😳

Edited by mochhug - 11 years ago

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radhika

@Radhika_ksgian

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

This was beautiful ..fantastic 👏 Aftr a long time read somethng so nice ... completely enjoyed it ..the way emotions written so perfectly .. n i really had tears reading wat Asad keep doing .one of d best it is..
i request to write more bcoz i feel u people r way more talented den CVz.n sply current track really mde loose all of us r sanity .. n nw these OS,FF,SS,TS r only left to njoy .. n think QH as these all other den.dat real one ...

Edited by Radhika_ksgian - 12 years ago

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mandarin26

@mandarin26

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Why do you do this to us??? 😭 You have no idea how hard it was fighting back my tears. My mom would've gone crazy if she saw me crying like this holding my phone. Oh I still have a lump in my throat 😭
It was beautiful. What more can I say! 👏 Another job well done. 🤗