Asya SS: When The Past Is Revealed (Chapter 3 posted on 13/9/13)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello! I know some of you have seen my SS and are kind of surprised to see it again, woh bhi on a different account. But I can't do anything. The thing is, I lost my previous account and had to make a new one (this one, obviously) but didn't want to desert the SS, so I am posting it on my new account.

So enjoy!

Disclaimer- I own my new account, nothing else.

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CHAPTER 1

Zoya's POV

Ahh! A bad feeling. This is not what I wanted to wake up with. I wanted to wake up next to my husband, Asad Ahmed Khan. Yes, me Zoya Faroo- no, Mrs. Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan was married to him. After our nikaah, he had become less judgemental, more open, more caring and loving. It was all like a dream. A bubble I did want to break at all.

But that A-sad A-mad Khan has still not confess his feelings for me. He still stays at 'woh actually'. Donkey! He is my husband, I should be respecting him right? So he is now donkey ji.

But apart from not confessing from words, he has proved it in his actions. He takes care of every need of mine. And has gone for great lengths to find my abbu.

My abbu. Oh how much I want to meet him right now. Every clue had been met with a dead-end. Did he even care now? Maybe no. That is why I wasn't able to find him. It was all one-sided effort. But indirectly because of him, I met this wonderful family. Tamatar, phuphi and Mr.Khan. What if I lose them too? See now, with the bad feeling I have got depressing thoughts too.

Shaking my head, I got out of the bed and went to the bathroom. I tried to take of my mind of that feeling but it was increasing every second. Something was gonna happen. No, it will be a good day. Yes, it will. Repeating that mantra I came out of the bathroom. I dried my hair, wore a nice green salwar suit, put kohl and some light makeup. I was coming out of the room when...

'Zoyaaa' A voice came from downstairs.

I don't need to tell whose is it, now do I? Of course, not. What did I do this time? I just broke a very expensive vase, nothing else.

Everything will be alright. I started my chanting session, again. I came down the stairs slowly, my bad feeling increasing. Reaching down, I took a moment to read everyone's expression. Najma and phuphi had a pained expression on their face. Asad had a mixture of pain and anger. And Tanveer, was that a smirk? I didn't have much time to process as i heard Asad call out my name.

'Zoya? I have a news for you.'

'What...?' I said still in thoughts. This wasn't sounding good.

I saw him take a deep breath. 'Zoya, I have found your father.'

Father? FATHER? He had found him! Wow! But then why was everyone so sad? Was he dead? Oh no!

'Mr.Khan? Where is he?' I said, still in looking at him.

Please he can't be dead...

'Here' He said, letting me get a clearer view of him.

I saw him

Oh shit!

He was...

Ayaan's mamujaan.

Humeira's father.

The person whom had caused phuphi so much pain.

The person Asad hated the most next to his abbu.

Standing in front of me was Mr.Gaffur Ahmed Siddique.

So much for being a good day.

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Over! I again say- This is not copied. I have lost my previous account (don't ask me how) and have made a new one. You might remember I had started this SS and because it is nowhere near complete, I am posting it on my new account all over again.

So please comment.

Love,
Lauren

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Chp1- pg.1
Chp2-pg.2
Chp3- pg.3

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Seriously? No one likes it? 😭
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Hey nice update 😊
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your feeling giving you
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Very good start. I loved it! Please continue soon and pm me if you can!
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Recap of Chapter 1

Standing in front of me was Mr.Gaffur Ahmed Siddique.

So much for being a good day.

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Chapter 2

Zoya's POV

What have I ever done wrong? I came to India to search for my abbu, and met these wonderful people. Now when I was having a new start, why was my past threatening to destroy my future?

This had to be a dream. No, no, a nightmare! Or a very cruel joke.

'Mr.Khan, it is a joke na?' I said trying my very bad luck.

'No Zoya, he is your abbu.'

'Seriously?'

'Yes.' Mr.Khan said with a sigh.

Oh shit.

I was in deep shit.

Instead of sadness, I was now feeling angry. How dare he come back now?! Why now? He didn't try in the last 20 years. When I had made peace, why was my past declaring war?

I went towards my so-called-abbu and screamed with fury and anger evident in my voice and eyes.

'Why have you come here? Why now? Why when I was having a new beginning? You just can't barge into my life and expect me to accept you! And why do you think I will accept you? You left at the age of 3 and never came back! Caused phuphi, tamatar and Mr.Khan so much pain! I can't be your daughter. Never!'

'So now,' I said pointing towards the door 'Get out.'

No one's POV

They were shocked seeing her reaction. Yes, it was true he had caused them pain, a lot of pain actually.

But seeing Zoya speaking with such hatred was unsettling.

Even though he deserved it.

Gaffur's POV

This girl! How dare she talk to him like that! No one ever dared to speak to him in such a manner!

From what he had learned about her in these last 10 minutes were that she was very protective about Khan family. She had the audacity to speak to him like that.

This girl had a voice of her own.

And that's what enraged him.

Asad's POV

My heart swelled for the girl standing in front of me. She was brave and fearless.

And looking at his face, it seemed like that Zoya was the first person to speak to him like that.

You deserve it old hag.

Gaffur's POV

She had talked to me like that. ME! The Gaffur Ahmed Siddique! No one had the right to talk to me like that, not even my own daughter.

Now she has to face the consequences.

No one's POV

He raised his hand and screamed,

'You bitch!'

As Asad saw his hand go up, he knew what was gonna happen.

He had to stop him.

Asad's POV

How dare he??!?! Trying to hit my Zoya? Never!

I threw his hand down, coming face to face with him and said in a threatening manner,

'You come near her again, and you will have to face ME! Do you understand?'

I saw him nod, his eyes wide in horror.

Serves him right.

No one's POV

'Get out now.' Asad spoke in a dangerous manner.

Knowing he should not mess with him, Gaffur took off.

Dilshad and Najma were still stood rooted on their spots, trying to digest what happened.

Zoya's POV

It felt as if my world had crashed down in front of me.

Fate had played a cruel joke on me, again.

I saw him stopping Gaffur from slapping me, Mr.Khan threatening him, seeing Gaffur go out. But I could feel, nothing.

I heard Asad telling phuphi and Najma to take me to my room as I needed rest. I still could feel nothing.

They took me to my room whispering that everything will be alright.

No phuphi and Najma, you are wrong.

It wasn't and it will never be.

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Precap- Razia, the girl is still alive.'

'I know. That is why I had sent Tanveer there.'

'So what do we do now?'

'I know exactly what to do.'

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Over! And who is the caller? Nope. It's not Gaffur. He is a mystery man. So keep guessing till the next update!

I know there were many POV's. So I tried my best not to make bhatangad of them. I hope you all were not confused.

I even know that Dilshad and Najma had almost no role in it. But I wanted to keep it to Asad, Zoya and Gaffur as they are more important.

I hope you enjoyed it!

Love,
Lauren

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