FF: Through The Monsoon #3 - last part on pg 60 (21/9) - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Aswini-

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I love yo😆

unres

that "I love yo" is for updating at a crisis situation😆

I've already cribbed and ranted enough about the show but I feel bad when ppl like yo are losing interest in the show😭 I still love Qubool Hai coz it has been such a support for me when I was upset and alone..but I'm not supporting the current track at any costđŸ„± I wish things get better asap without any character assassination and we would comeback to the show😊 Till then lets stick to WUs😆

I loved this part..brought back memories of coffee days😭 Ah How much I miss them..😭 Thanks for recreating the magic of old QH😃Yo are the best😳




Haha I thought a crisis situation would be the best time to post it :p I hope they show some sense in the next few episodes or I'm going to lose my senses hahaha. They were sitting there with their phones and yet nobody called the police zz. I miss the coffee days too ):
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DancingDiva.

Sadddyy updatee! :(


I LOVE these lines "Let's hope I keep my cool enough after tonight's predictably brainless episode đŸ€Ł to finish writing this story haha."




Anddd I was right hahaha. Phones in their goddamn hands and yet they sat there like idiots throughout the 6 nikaahs before theirs, making no attempt to call the goddamn police. Oh my brain hurts from the lack of logic.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Chipmunks.

After knowing about Surbhi's reaction towards ZoYaan...I had lost all my hope.
This update really made me happy. I really pray that you would not get any inspiration from the current yaar.
Back to the chapter. It was ah-mazinggg. So when will Asad come to know what is bugging Zoya. He should have known it at that instance only when he said those words. Better late than never :)



I really had a little hope that at least the actors playing the characters are slightly attached to it, but I guess I was wrong. We're the only idiots attached to this show that loves breaking our hearts every few weeks. Anyway in my story Asad will figure it all out soon haha, I'm not into dragging stuff.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goingreen



Anddd I was right hahaha. Phones in their goddamn hands and yet they sat there like idiots throughout the 6 nikaahs before theirs, making no attempt to call the goddamn police. Oh my brain hurts from the lack of logic.


THANK YOU! Everyone is still going on about how it was brilliantly done. But really? They didn't notice with the first 6, that they were in line for a NIKAAH!? UGH!

I'm really wanting to pull my hair out. Please please please update soon :) I really need a distraction from exams and QH lack of logic. Your story is just sooo good. I so wish Tanveer's pardafash had been done with way.

I have more to say, but will Unres after exams are over. Just needed to tell you that I love your story, and pleas please please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti

Awesome update dr!!!!👏

these FFs are the only way to keep our mind sane else..QH has become frustrating!!!
i must admit u will need a lot of courage to continue the story after the nonsense that is gonna be shown in the episode today!!!đŸ€”



I admit that I need a lot of courage to write anything about Asad and Zoya now haha. I'm so sad haha. Glad you liked my update anyway (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -ARLover-

WHYYY? WHY SO EARLY? 😭


After getting to know that its going to end so soon, mera mann bhi nahi laga padhne mein 😭

But still, hope they dont fight and everything ends well. Because I know that goingreen loves happy endings 😳



Haha sorry, it's already 33 parts long though! Anyway I'm more into pyaar ka ehsaas type of stuff, once the ehsaas is done I'm not so good at continuing :p And yes, you know me well (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

I am sad that this story is going to end soon...amongst these crappy episodes your upates have been one good thing...ne ways may be you will start another story(but i highly doubt that given what crap QH has been letely)

Anyways coming to the upate it was amazing as usual and very beautiful...i loved how you pertrayed zoya n asad's emotions😊i loved the touch that their thighs touched when asad sat near zoya shows how close asad now considers zoya😊
the coffee is back...i missed their convo over coffee in QH...m glad you incorporated that
I loved how asad held zoya's chin and made her face him😳so sweet an romantic...

"Kyunki finally baarish tham gaayi. I was getting really sick of it anyway,"now i get why you named the story "through the monsoon"...it was a phase in asad nd zoya's lives marked by their growing liking for each other nd coming close and sharing some intimate moments but now since she has to leave that phase is about to end...was i right?
"Aapko yeh halka sa hawa ka jhoka pasand hai? Mujhe bhi pehle lagta tha kay mujhe aisa hi kuch pasand hoga. Par ab mujhe pata chala hai kay mujhe toofan zyada pasand hai,"...beautiful lines...he doesn't the monsoon to end...he doesn't the phase of his life where they shared so many beautiful moments to ever end coz he likes it now...
Awww the way he brushed her hair away😳
he knows exactly what to do..he pulls her in his arms and she spills what she has been so worried about...my he is thinking about marrying her and she is thinking she will have to leave soon
Ohk i loved the last part where asad knew exactly what will calm zoya down...that was so beautifully written...
Waiting for the next part😃



I miss the coffee scenes too haha. And yes great analysis and thank you for pointing it out!! Exactly what I was going for (: And also Asad was referring to Zoya as the toofan in his life :p Glad you liked it!! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goingreen



Haha sorry, it's already 33 parts long though! Anyway I'm more into pyaar ka ehsaas type of stuff, once the ehsaas is done I'm not so good at continuing :p And yes, you know me well (:


But I'll miss it. So will the others. 😭
Please tell me that you are planning a new story or something like that? 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Awesome up-date...God, why can't she just tell him, even yell it him that why is she behaving like that...Because lets face it that poor man can't do anything as he doesn't even know what could be her problem...for him they just make out for hours and can get married to this friday...for him everything between them is all right...So Zoya, just yell at your man so he can make everything alright...!!! 😆

Can't wait for the next up-date...Hope and pray that we will be alright after watching QH today...Amen



Haha I don't like yelling/screaming Zoya, things can always be handled civilly! But let's see what I come up with next :p I am alright even after the episode, a little jaded but mostly pissed that they both had their phones and yet no one called the goddamn police hahaha.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

absotutely Fantastic. I just loved it. Asad is really dumb to have forgotten what he said the day earlier. it's really unbelievable that he hasn't given it a thought, that she must have heard what he said to Ayaan.i hope she tells him rather than hurting alone.

I agree with you on the QH part, it actually is giving me creeps, though I still believe it'll be AsYa in the end cox Gul couldn't have fooled us with all those symbolisms & lovely moments to ruin it with ZoyAAN.
Khair i'm glad u've written the part still. I knew the story was ending soon but hopefully u'll write another one, maybe on this muqaddar thing too.
love.



He hasn't forgotten per se, just didn't think Zoya would take it to heart since it was a mutual agreement anyway, so it simply isn't striking him (: Glad you liked it!! (:

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