AsYa TS: The Dawn of Togetherness - completed Page 5 - Page 5

Originally posted by: me2you

Very nice Rivs! 👍🏼Although, I really wished you had pushed that temptation and come up with more😉 Next time, do so. Go with your own gut feeling! I wanted to push the temptation, you know I am in favor of them doing it, lekin I will not/ cannot write that part.(One horrific experience was enough). I did want to include a Dilshaad ko manao scene, but then I was not able to stop at QH.

Fate always has its own way. (True story of everyone's life. No matter how much we want to change certain situations and circumstances in our lives...fate will always play its own game) Sab Muqaddar ka khel...

Aaj Allah ne aapko zariya banake hum par meherbani ki hain, humein unka shukriya ada karna chahiye. (Lovely, very beautiful) Thanks...the word Zariya was not coming to me...took like 2 hours to remember it. Urdu makes me fall in love with itself over and over again. Yesterday when Asad said Meri Arzoo aap hai to Zoya, I was like awww...😳 Arzoo is so much better sounds that iccha.. or tamannah... the whole sentence becomes enriched by that one word and the meaning too..

I am sure CC will love this part 😃 I sure hope so...need to PM her the link to the TS. I have not yet heard from her and am starting to worry. She had said she usually is on IF when she is bedridden. So now I am sure her surgery is done.

Oh btw..I really loved the quotes you used at the end. I am a huge quote lover and always looking for new ones. The first two are known, but the last one is new for me. Thanks for that!

We can discuss our love for famous quotes on the other side, though 😆 Thanks...I love reading quotes, I just cannot always remember them. Doondhte rehne padte hain

Originally posted by: rivya

Originally posted by: princess101

Can u become like a writer at Qubool Hai like this was amazing ( Qubbol Hai Team learn from these ppl how you should portray the story) anyways sorry for my mini rant this was FAB thanks for the PM and keep on writing :D

Originally posted by: skavya

Wow !!!!!! Awesome !!!!!!

just loved it...

loved the every moment they share...their silent speak...togetherness just perfect...

like the surprise asad arranged for her...

just speechless story...

thank u so much for pm 😊

Originally posted by: me2you

Horrific experience...? Did I miss something? Well, joh bhi ho, I am sure it was something good 😊 This is back in the KS times, when readers really wanted a mature scene...It was not fun writing but I was younger and gullible. Now I am old enough to say no thanks...Gutter talk is okay...but having to write mature stuff is not. See I like to visualize a scene when I write it and this is not fun,not with two fictional characters played by two very real people...KWIM😕

Yes, Urdu is indeed a very beautiful and rich language. I can understand it must be difficult for you to switch to Urdu and fin the right words...but if you need any help, you know where to find me! (I might not speak Urdu, but a majority of the words in Farsi/Dari are the same) Will do next time I am stuck, but I know u r busy too...

I PM'ed CC, but no reply yet. Hopefully she is doing better now. Amen

Hahaha, yes its a never ending search for those quotes 😆 Exactly...when I was younger like a teenager, I used to write quotes and shayaris I liked in a book. Was easier when I wrote school essays. Ab nahi time😆 aur google available hai.

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa

i just logged in ... to tell u tht now I feel special...you logged in for me???

i read d 2 parts in a go...

n beleive ME they were AWESOME... thanks..😳

veryy nicely written... olthough it hd nthng like cuchi coo moments but its decency was moore luring... Yeah...but then they are not teenagers...also, Asad ko maloom tha na...kalnikaah hoga, so if he has waited so long, why not some more...its only one more day...

zoya's concern 4 d family... n asad's ol sorts of thoughts n concern...

thier secret nikah..

evrythng was PERFECT!!!!👏 Thanks again...

I TRUELY LOVED IT...

TFS... now gimme a hug U TALENTED WRITER..🤗Here you go, you awesome reviewer.