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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

wow. this is just aaa...mazing. the story was so catching. I just loved the silent talks between AsYa & the way he consoled Zoya as she felt guilty. His surprise was the best. There can be no one as selfless as Zoya, who wishes the best for others above her own desires. the ending was perfect but I wished for u to have added the parts that you didn't include in it.

well for that u can write another TS on AsYa, these stories are for now the only solace for AsYa fans.

Lots of love.

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GoodGoneWrong

@GoodGoneWrong

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
wow. this is just aaa...mazing. the story was so catching. I just loved the silent talks between AsYa & the way he consoled Zoya as she felt guilty. His surprise was the best. There can be no one as selfless as Zoya, who wishes the best for others above her own desires. the ending was perfect but I wished for u to have added the parts that you didn't include in it.
well for that u can write another TS on AsYa, these stories are for now the only solace for AsYa fans.

Lots of love.

Thanks dear...I always look forward to your comments. Asad is not much of a talker and I wanted to see a mature Zoya, one who realizes how what she does impacts others. So I wrote the second part this way.

About the other parts or another TS, nothing for now. A lot is happening in my life and I want to concentrate only on one FF. Maybe sometime later.

Thanks again

Rivs

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

wow... dats d only thing I can say.. really had nt expected asad to get married...!! wish dis was d story in d show as well...!! nd yea i really wished dat dis wud hv been an ff..! 👏 its juz perfectly written... deir emotions nd d way asad consoled zoya😳...!! Mashallah..!! ❤️ very beautifully potrayed...!! hope to see more such beautifully written, amazingly fab nd addictive ff/ss/ts..!! 👏🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Edited by asyafreva - 11 years ago

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GoodGoneWrong

@GoodGoneWrong

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: asyafreva
wow... dats d only thing I can say.. really had nt expected asad to get married...!! wish dis was d story in d show as well...!! nd yea i really wished dat dis wud hv been an ff..! 👏 its juz perfectly written... deir emotions nd d way asad consoled zoya😳...!! Mashallah..!! ❤️ very beautifully potrayed...!! hope to see more such beautifully written, amazingly fab nd addictive ff/ss/ts..!! 🤗

Awww...🤗

Thanks for such wonderful words. Well, this could not have been a FF or SS. Maybe another part.I was hoping to not have Dilshaad and Najma be there, instead when the two return, I wanted them to initiate a simple wedding talk. But that was just stretching it too much. So I tried to redeem Rashid a little by letting him call Dilshaad and Najma there.

AsYa are a perfect couple to write emotional stuff on. Esp. since Asad is not a man of words,instead he believes in action.

I do have an ongoing FF (link is on the first page), not sure if you are reading it. I have another one I am working on as and when I get time, but it won't be posted until like November or something.

Thanks for all the love...appreciate it.

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-AppleOfMaEye-

@-AppleOfMaEye-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

nice, simple n sweet TS,...

loved it
amazing

thanku

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Wow gr8 part
thanx for pm
do pm me for your next work

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Very nice Rivs! 👍🏼Although, I really wished you had pushed that temptation and come up with more😉 Next time, do so. Go with your own gut feeling!

Fate always has its own way. (True story of everyone's life. No matter how much we want to change certain situations and circumstances in our lives...fate will always play its own game)

Aaj Allah ne aapko zariya banake hum par meherbani ki hain, humein unka shukriya ada karna chahiye. (Lovely, very beautiful)

I am sure CC will love this part 😃

Oh btw..I really loved the quotes you used at the end. I am a huge quote lover and always looking for new ones. The first two are known, but the last one is new for me. Thanks for that!

We can discuss our love for famous quotes on the other side, though 😆