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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys this is my first time that i m writing something and i m really exited and scared right now. Hope u like it


\\So the scene here right now is Tanveer is out of town as her mother is on deathbed and of course she made some execuses and got out of the house. Nikah is to be held in 4 days.//


Scene 1

Asad is in his room talking to Tanu and is concerned abt her. Zoya is on the door and is very jealous and fuming visibly. Then she calms herself down and sits on the floor by the door.Asad ends the call and is shocked to see Zoya sitting on the floor. He swiftly approaches her.

Asad:(panickly) Zoya tum theek toh ho na tumhari tabiyat kharab hai kya, fever, oh fever toh nahi hai maine kitni bar kaha raat ko bina shawl mat...


Zoya:(cuts him of) oh Mr.Khan itne tension lenge toh ap Jahapanah six packs se Jahapanah one pack ban jayenge (giggles) well i m as fit as a horse; maine socha aap apni 'tanu' se baat kar rahe hai toh i should wait but u know meri tange lifelong warranty main nahi hain so i thought better sit than sorry


Asad: Bataiye kya kaam tha aapko


(Zoya thinks: Agar yahi tanu hoti toh 'andar aao na tanu tum pareshan ho kya come on main tumhare pare daba do' mera man toh karta hain uska gala daba doon...)


Asad clears his throat to get back her attention


Zoya: Haan vo main... main ne ummm haan vo aapse ek baat karni thi


Asad: Farmiyah


Zoya: Vo darasal main apne past ke baare mein soch rahi thi. Mr. Khan main jaanti hu ki mere abbu ko paane ki har umeed khuda ne mujhse cheen li hain par iska matlab ye toh nahi ki main apne past ko janne ki koshish bhi na karo. Mere vo sapne, aag ka phobia kuch toh hai jo main nahi jaanti.


Asad usko bed par baithata aur khud uske side main baithta haon


Asad: Zoya aap janti hain is pal jo present hain vo agle pal past hota hain aur us past par hamara koi control nahi hota toh bar bar usko dekhna waqt aur dimag ki fizulkharchi hai.Waise bhi U know aap tni emotional aachi nahi lagt, jab jealous hoti hai toh zada adorable lagti hai.


Zoya opened her mouth to deny but asad cut her off


Asad: Now don't deny it remember aapne khud admit kiya tha



Zoya: Allah miya whats wrong with u Mr. Khan, main kon si Salman Khan hu jo apni commitment se peeche nahi hat sakti, waise Salman jaise body toh aapki hai lekin Salman kitna Sweet hai aur aap kitne akru hamesha sabko order dete rahte hai jaise Allah ne sabke hisse ki akal aapko hi de di hoon u know what u r very demanding, emotionally challenged, cold blooded...


Zoya was now back to bubbly self and Asad was delighted to have done it

Zoya: Ya allah main aapse complain kar rahi hu aur aap has rahe hai. HUH!!!


She exits the room


(Asad thinks: shukra hain allah ka ki Zoya distract ho gayi, pata nahi agar uni investigation shuru kar di hoti toh kya hota. Us bechari ko uski ammi ki death witness karni padi na jane kya hua hoga aisa jiska anjam itna disastrous tha par Zoya main tumhe kabhi tumhari ateet ki aag mein doubara jalne nahi dunga. Tum tak aane waali har hawa ko Asad Ahmed Khan ka samna karna padega)



(Zoya thinks: Mujhe ek baat toh clearly dikh rahi hai ki Mr. Khan nahi chahte ki main aapne past ke baare mein jaanu aur vo iss kaam mein help karna toh door iski permission bhi nahi denge. Toh ab yeh kaam mujhe secretly karna padega but abhi mujhe Tanu ka sach bhi janna hain. Agar Tanveer ka sach jaldi pata nahi kiya toh bahut der ho sakti hai. Zoya 4 days and 2 tasks you have to really buck up)


Scene 2

Zoya, Najma and Dilshad were in Dilshad's room choosing a dress for Zoya's mehandi. Colourful dresses were scattered all over tthe bed. Najma had putting a bottle green saree on Zoya's shoulder.


Najma: Wow Zoya oops I mean 'bhabhijaan'(wink) aap kitni khubsoorut lag rahi hai


Dilshad: Vakiya chand ka tukda lag rahi hai mer would be bahu. Beta u are looking ummm ha MA


Najma: Ammi MA?????

Najma questionngly looks towards her


Dilshad: Oho Najma MA matlab...


"MARSHALLAH" Zoya and Dilshad say in unison

Three of them starts laughing. Right then Asad enters and he saw Zoya laughing and looking gorgeous with that light blue saree over her shoulder. Zoya looks at him and they had an eyelock.(Mitwa moment)

Dilshad notices this and clears her throat and they both are embarassed


Dilshad: Umm Najma lagta hai hamari yaha koi zarurat nahi hai chalo caterers final kar lete hai.(sigh)


Asad: Ha ammi (Zoya glares at him and amu****t is clearly visible on Ammi's and Najma face) mera matlab hai nahi ammi vo... actually main aapse hi baat karne aaya tha. Aap logo ne jo fashion designer final kiya tha vo aaj aa rahe hai.


Najma and Zoya jumps with joy


Najma: Bhaijaan you are the best.YES!YES!YES!!!!


Asad: Tamatar calm down. Looks llike tumpar tumhare 'bhabhijaan' ka kuch zada hi jaldi asar ha raha hai.

He sliightly smiles and then leaves the ladies.


Dilshad: Kya baat hai Zoya tum bahut chup chup ho.


Najma: Zoya tumhe dekhkar toh aisa lag raha hai ki tamatar mera nahi tumhara naam hona chaihye.


Zoya: Accha bachu Zoya ki tang kichiyye abhi batati hu...


Najma runs around the room, Zoya behind her, both laughing and having fun

(Dilshad thinks: Allah kare mere bachheh hamesha aise hi khush rahe. Zoya ke aati hi aisa lagta hai jaise meri family complete ho gayi hai jaise un satron salon ki khamoshiyon par Zoya ne apni muskruhat se saare gam dur kar diye ho)

Then she hears Zoya's loud laughter. She was having fun with Najma. She smiles at her children.





Scene 3

Zoya was now sitting in her room with pen and paper and was making a schedule

Zoya: Subah 9 se 11 meri familly investigation phir us Tanu ki bacchi ka hisabh kitab karungi(angry face) phi baaki kaam nipta lungi. Waise abhi mujhe kya karna chaihye

She looks at the clock


Zoya: OMG ye toh yeh Jammy ke Tannu ke investigation ka time hai. Kitna aacha hata na agar Mr. Khan bhi iss investigation mera saath dete toh. Jab Mr. Khan aur maine ek saath us shooter ki investigation ki thi toh...

She remembers all the Mitwa moment of their one and only investigation. Then the clock tolls and she is back to reality.

Zoya: Zoya you are insane, ye sab kya faltu ki bate soch rahi hai. You better focus on your investigation. Hmmm kaha se start karu. Oh well i guess my lone and solitary option is Tanveer's room.

She heads to Tanveer's room. There she checks the drawers, under the bed, under the bedsheets, checks the wardrobe but finds nothing of consequence.

(Zoya thinks: Of course Tannu bahut chalak hai why would she leave any evidence at home. But ab main kya karu uss par toh attacks ghar par hi hue the...ek second Tanveer mere sangeet par jal gayi thi aur hai jhumar bhi toh gira tha aur purvi ne bataya tha ki vaha par vo stone-eyed person bhi present tha. I should go there baaki saach vahi pata chal jayega)

Zoya opened the door to go to the hotel where sangeet was held but there in front of her was a very handsome man, he was tall with charming looks and introduced himself


Jiyad: Hello I am Jiyad aur main yaha Asad Ahmed Khan aur Zoya Farooqui ka nikah plan karne aaya hu

Zoya: Salam allukum main hi Zoya Farooqui hu. Nice to meet you Jiyad.

Jiyad: The pleasure is all mine Zoya.


Zoya: Aiyye main aapko baaki logo se milwati hu.(Dilshad and Najma arrive at the seen)

Zoya walks to Dilshad and says


Zoya: inse miliye ye hai meri phoopi aur Mr. Khan ki ammi


Dilshad: Salam allekum


Jiyad: Waalekum Salaam


Zoya: Aur ye hai Mr. Khan ki choti behen Najma


Najma: Hi


Jiyad: Hello


(Zoya thinks: Ab toh Jiyad aa gaya hai isliye phoophi mujhe kahi jane nahi dengi aur kuch der mein andhera ho jayega toh phir Mr. Khan ka curfew ufff. Ab toh mujhe sabke sone ke baad hi nikalna hoga)

Zoya smiles evil


Dilshad: Arey Zoya beta kya soch rahi ho? Idhar aao mere colour selection mein help karo.


Zoya: Yes Phoopi abhi aayi





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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice, you should continue 😊

ps, change the title, like add "SS" to it so ppl know it's a story
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Very good! You should continue 😃
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thanks it means a lot 4 me
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Scene 4

Its 1 in the night and everyone is sleeping soundly for they were very tired after doing the preparations. Only Asad was tossing in his bed thinking about the nikah after 4... looks at the clock no 3 days. He was remembering all the Mitwa moments. He smiled a little then chided himself.

Zoya was following her plan and getting out of the house. She took extra precautions while passing Asad's room. Although he could sense his Zoya was nearby. Then he shook his head and thought his imaginations had run wild. Zoya was out of the house and let out a sigh of relief.


Zoya: Thank you Allah Miya. Ab mein fatafat apna kaam shuru karti hu isse pehle Mr. Khan ka soya hua bond jag jaye.

She hurries to the factory and approaches the manager.


Zoya: Salam allekum Mr. Manager, I am Zoya Farooqui.


Manager: Hello Ms Farooqui. How can i help you?

(Thinks: At this hour of night and mentally rolls his eyes)


Zoya: Actually yaha par mera sangeet hua tha kuch din pehle and i wanted its footage.


Manager: Madam yaha par roz bahut se functions hote hain apka kon sa wala tha.


Zoya: Ummm ha wahi jisme jhoomer gira tha..

he cuts her off


Manager: OH vo wala ya i remember. But ma'am abhi humne video edit nahi ki hai so sari footage alag alag cctv camera mein hain.


(Zoya thinks: Yeh toh aur bhi aacha hai. Edited form mein shayad kuch miss ho jata)

Zoya: Its okay vo I'll manage aap bas mujhe voh tapes de dijiye.


Manager: But right now it's not possible ma'am. I have to ask my seniors.


Zoya: Please aap meri help kar dejiye. Mein apne hone wale unko (acts to be shy) tohfa dena chahti hun aur agar aapne voh tapes mujhe abhi nahi diya toh mera dil toot jayega.

She makes a puppy face then says "please" and repeatedly blinks her eyes

Manager is mesmerized by Zoya's beauty and says

Manager: Okay Miss I will be here in a minute.


Zoya waits for him eagerly and then he returns with 40 CD's

Manager: Here you go. I hope they will help you.


Zoya is wide eyed after seeing so many but quickly recovers herself and says

Zoya: Thank you so much you are the best manager i have ever met (He smiles delighted) and one more thing don't tell anyone about it since it's a surprise.


Manager: OF course and i am more than happy to be in service. (He smiles at her)


Zoya starts to get uncomfortable then.

Zoya: Okay then Khuda Hafiz.

She smiles and leaves

(Manager thinks: what a beautiful lady but sadly she is getting married. OH **** what am i going to tell the seniors they are going to screw me)

All while his expressions turned from admiring to horrible



Scene 5

At Khan residence

Asad had had given up sleep since he was now frustrated as to why he saw Zoya everytime he closed his eyes.He decided to work since so much was pending and due to Nikah functions he was bound to overlook them.

Zoya had successfully reached the Khan mansion and opened the main door. Asad heard the sound and came out. He saw Zoya closing the door, dressed in jeans top and had a polybag in her hands.


Asad: Ahem (She looks towards him and now was terribly nervous and frightened for she hadn't thought what reason she was going to give Mr. Khan) aap itni raat ko kaha gayi thi??

Zoya: Mein...mein toh Mr. Khan kuch nahi bas aise hi ghum rahi thi Mr. Khan.

Asad: Fully dressed??

Zoya: huh


Asad rubbes his forehead

Asad: (little louder and clearer) Aap raat ke (looks at the clock) 3 baje jeans pehenkar kya kar rahi hain?


Zoya: Jeans?? (looks down) haan vo deresal kya hua ki aisa hua na ki... ummm (then her eyes shines)

pata hai mere sapne mein Dhoni (blinks dreamily) aaya tha toh i thought ki agar vo sach mein mere samne aa gaya toh i should look presentable that's why maine jeans pehan li. Voh kya khelta hain...he so handsome and hot!!! and ****y...


He cut her off

Asad:(angrily) ZOYA go to sleep right now.


She runs to her bedroom

(Zoya thinks: ufff Allah miya aapne Mr. Khan se toh bacha liya then ,her eyes reach the packet, but in CD's se Kon bachaiga mujhe)


Then she hears a knock on her door and the door opens with a curious and suspicious looking Asad


Asad: Aapne yeh toh bataya hi nahi ki aap ke saath vo packet kya kar raha tha .


Zoya: Ummm well...(then something kicks in her mind and she smiles) i am not answerable to you Mr. Khan


Asad: Of course you are. here you are my responsibility and if anything goes wrong...

Zoya: (cutting him) Not anymore kyunki meri Aapi bhi yahi hai and if anything happens to me, you or your family will not be blamed. And bye the way mein aapki begum nahi huin jo aap mujhse aise baat kar rahe hain


Asad: You will be after 3 days

Asad: You will be after 3 days

He then smiled a little and Asya had an eyelock. Asad comes closer to Zoya and says


Asad: Agar aapko kuch ho jata toh uska responsible main nahi hota lekin uske baad mujhe jo hoga uski responsible aap hi hongi.

Zoya smiled understanding the depth but still to blurt the truth out of him asked


Zoya: Kyun Mr. Khan.


Asad: Aapko nahi pata kyun.

Zoya acted innocent

Zoya: Allah miya what's wrong with you,agar pata hota toh mein aapse kyun poochti Mr.Khan.

But then Zoya yawned


Asad: Okay ab bahut raat ho gayi hai aapko so jana chaihye

He then goes to his room and sleeps peacefully.


Zoya stands there and smiles. Then her eyes reached the CD's and she groaned. She started watching the CD's for any clue and reached till 10 CD's but found nothing of substance. She got tired and was going to hit the pillow when her alarm rang loudly


Zoya: Urghh I should get ready today i have to do tons of work.

She took a quick shower and got ready in jeans. Today She wanted to do her Family investigation and decided should leave as soon as possible. She skipped the breakfast saying she to go to Friend's house and she will have breakfast there.


Asad: Come I will drop you


Zoya shouted "NO"

Zoya: I mean that you are going to office, right (He nodded) lekin mein opposite direction mein jaa rahi hun. Don't bother main chali jayungi. Waise bhi nikah ke baad to allah jane kya hoga but uske pehle ki freedom toh enjoy kar lu.(she giggled and Najma joined)


Asad rolled his eyes

Zoya headed towards the house which she had discovered with Asad. She while sitting in the cab further watched the videos. After some time she reached her destination and all the previous memories flooded back including their first hug. She thought to further investigate the house and went to check all the rooms which held some old furniture, curtains and not to mention lots of spiders and webs. She then saw a very expensive male gold ring. She kept it with her and thought to ask jeweler's help and despite searching for hours found nothing other of consequence. It was 3 in the afternoon and she had to reach early so she took a cab and in the way slept peacefully after being sleep deprived. When she opened her eyes she found herself in a room. First of all she took her mobile and turned it to silent. She was very terrified and was wondering what to do next when some goons came to check on her while she pretended to sleep. She clearly heard they were planning to rape her but wanted fun so were waiting for to wake up. Then they left leaving a pale Zoya behind, she was rooted to spot and started shivering. Then only one name came to mind ASAD. She picked her phone, if she called him the goons will listen so she texted him, "Mr. Khan pls meri help kijiye mujhe goons ne pakad liya hai aur mujhe nahi pata mein kaha hoon and mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai aur pls call mat karna varna vo log sun lenge. Reply fast.

Zoya"

Asad was in his office when he got the message. He read and was shocked and scared and panicked. He thought how will he find Zoya, kaha hongi voh aur theek toh hongi nahi mujhe jaldi kuch karna hoga. He had an app through which he can locate Zoya and through which he found out that she was 15 mins far from his office and ran towards his car but in his panic he forgot to reply Zoya. Zoya on the other hand was becoming tensed as to why Mr.Khan wasn't replying maybe he was in meeting or busy or HE DIDN'T CARE. The goons sneaked and and found Zoya was no more asleep so they came in asking


Goon1: Uth gayi aap mohtarma bahut intezar kiya humne aapka.


Goon2: Haan lekin kehte hain na intezar ka faal metha hota hai.

There were 4 goons and they looked towards Zoya greedily.They started coming towards her.


Zoya:(shouted in a shaky voice) Door raho mujhse nahi toh pashtaoge.


Goon 3: Hum pashtana nahi chahte tabhi toh tumhare paas aa rahe hai.

All of them bursted into laughter. Zoya found a vase and threw in in their direction which damaged his arm. In the meantime she rushed out of the cottage but one man caught her and slapped her tight. With its force she fell on a rock and became badly injured


Asad witnessed Zoya being hit and screams ZOYAAA and runs towards her. She is subconscious and mumbles As...Asa...Asad vo mein...by then the goons were coming to hit Asad by rod behind his back but Zoya saw it and pushed Asad aside took the attack on herself and then she she lied on ground unconscious. Asad screamed loudly ZOYA!!!!!! and he was now mad seeing Zoya like this. The goons were afraid to see a lion(Asad) in front of them and they ran from there to save their lives meanwhile Asad drove Zoya to the hospital. Asad reached the hospital carrying Zoya in his arms and was getting more panicked every passing moment.

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awesome👏...update fast plzzz 😊
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Hy it nice..
PLz pm me wen wen update
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Nice ss plz cont loved all parts...
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wow
red it in 1 go amazing
cont soon and plz pm me
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Nice part amazing cont soon and pm me

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