AsYa OS:Love And War Part 2 updated page 2!

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Its actually my version of Yesterday's epi!
i have edited the part where the new guy enters!
ill mention it in the later part if u like it!😳

This is my first ever piece of work! please bare with me if its bad or if there are any mistakes!😃

part 1:


zoya was walking along the deserted streets feeling all alone,miserable and quite afraid of the situation she is in.
There are no veichles and not a single person to be seen anywhere near.She was feeling really afraid but was ignoring the fear and trying to think of some way to get back home.But as the seconds tick the panic in her is rising up a notch!So she started talking to herself to reduce her loneliness and fear!

"Allah miyan!whats wrong with all the people and vehicles in the world!Its like they have shifted to another planet or something!"
"ya allah! you should only save me from Mr.Khan today! He will be so angry!"

"anyways everything was my fault!I should have called him atleast once before coming here!But i thought that he will not let me go so i didn't tell him and now see the situation i am in!"

As she was chattering to herself and walking alone on the deserted streets she noticed some veichle coming this way and hoped its a bus or something!

But it turned out to be a car and there's a man driving it.


On the other side Asad was worried as hell as to where zoya has gone and was extremely angry because of her irresponcible behaviour this time.
As the time is passing he is getting more and more anxious for zoya.All stupid thoughts started entering his mind!
what if zoya was in some danger!
what if the bus she was in had an accident!
what if someone kidnapped zoya!

And with that he started to walk towards the door and as he opened it there she was smiling a wide smile at him completely non-chalant of the situation and also looking a bit afraid and relieved at the same time,

As soon as he saw her a wave of emotions coursed through him.
Relief that she is safe and sound.
Angry that she had been so irresponcible.
But above all happiness on seeing her smile and seeing her safe.

But he was too angry to consider that.
He let her inside and waited silently fuming for some sort of explanation from her.

But he lost all thepatience and started scolding her without even giving her a chance to speak.
"Ms.faaroouqui!yeh kya battameezi hai! Why didn't you inform me before you went?
and why are you not lifting your phone!do you know how much worried i have been?God!I cant believe you are so irresponcible!
And anyway if you know there was astrike in the town what was the need to be in such a haste and go all by yourself!



Zoya could not take it anymore and she also started shouting back!
"Mr.khan!Im not a kid you know!
And why are shouting at me like a big disaster has happened!Im here infront of you all safe,aren't I?"

and this goes on and soon the thigs wre like this:


ASAD:"I dont want to talk to you Ms. faarouqui!Anyways aren't you tired after jumping up and down in the stadium;wandering all o the outskirts of Bhopal at a time like this and now shouting at me with all your might!
Just go and sleep!"

Zoya was utterly furious now!she wanted to ram her fist into something!she was that frustrated by his words!

"Mr.Khan!I already told you that im not a kid! You don't tell me what to do and what not to do!
and anyways even i dont have any wish to talk to you either!"

with that both of them went into their respective rooms.

Its been a week and both asad and zoya are still angry on each other and both of them are too egoistic to apologise first!
They have been cold to each other the whole week.

Asad could not take this anymore and that night after dinner he went to zoya's room to apologise.


On the other hand zoya went into her room and had tears in her eyes!He didn't talk to her properly even once this whole week!
she missed him somuch eventhough she can see him daily!

As they say we can't be peaceful when our loved ones are angry on us.She tried to ignore him but it was not possible!

Finally she was fed up and was about to go and apologise to him.
As she opened the door there he was standing infront of her looking all anxious,worried and a bit guilty!

p.s:-Is the title lame!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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udhar tak hi? 😆
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will continue if u like it!
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And????? Wht happen next plz continue..
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continue .. oh nice title .. i want warrr😆 bring it on ..
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please do continue!! and ya perfect title😉 suits them
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Nooo not at all... so fun continue... and pm me..





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Nice continue please 😊
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Thanks for liking it!
So here's the next update!

PART 2:

Zoya was shocked to see him at her door.she was about to go and apologise to him and there he was looking as handsome as he always is in his night clothes.

"What do you want Mr.khan?Why are you here at this time?" she asked.

"I..uh..actually.." he came forward into her room hesistantly making her back up into her own room.
By this time zoya lost all her patience and she was utterly frustrated.
and so she started her rant in shouting!
"I..uh..actually... what Mr.khan!Why cant you do anything else but shout at me perfectly!First of all you just pounce on me immediately after coming on that day without even considering my point of view and then tell me that you dont want to talk to me and then now after one week u come to my room and do nothing but stare at me and form incoherent words!"

she paused at her while asad was staring her with eyes wide and full of anger and then beore he even had a chance to talkshe started again!

"Allah miyan!What's wrong with you!You know Mr.Khan you think that im an irresponcible brat who doesn't think of anybody else but me!But you never understand my point of view!
I was all alone on an empty road with a phone that has no network and full of fear for me and thinking about what you must have been going through!There was not a single soul on the road and i was so panicked!"
She was close to tears by now.
"And somehow by god's grace i came back home hoping to get some comfort and strength from you but instead you were making me more guilty and more panicked by shouting at me with all your might!"

Seeing her in that situation Asad feels guilty and tries to hug her but she pushes him away.
"And! and after all that you stop talking to me for one whole week as if i did a grave mistake and im the one who should be punished!" she said hiccuping with tears flowing down her eyes.

Asad was almost in tears now and this time eventhough zoya did try to push him away he didn't let her and hugged her tight telling over and over that he was sorry!

"You were afraid just for me,Mr.khan.But i was afraid for me,for you and for us! And i missed you so much!" she wishpered into his shirt.

Asad just hugged her even tight if that was possible and buried his face in her neck with tears in his eyes.


Zoya didn't know how much time it has passed with her being in asad's arms! But it absolutely felt like heaven!

As she stepped back he kissed her forehead sayinng "Im sorry" again.

"Its okay" she said smiling a little.
"Im sorry too Mr.Khan." she said after a moment looking down.
"You actually gave me a heart attack on that day you know!" said asad very intensely holding her face.
"I was soo worried and afraid.It was like i almost lost my life!"

"I know Mr.khan! I was also very afraid" she said.
"Then why do you keep doing these things when you know how much it affects me!" he asked frustrated.

"Its good to know that you care about me somuch" she said smiling and blushing a little.

"Good for me that you know!So dont do these kind of things again." he said smiling.
"yes boss! Your wish is my command!" she said smiling.

They looked at each other with him holding her face and zoya felt like a she is relieved of the biggest burdens of her life now that Asad is with her.


Note:- Guys should i continue this with the new guy track or should eye end it here!please share your views!

Edited by sowmy18 - 12 years ago
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Continue 😃
and nice udapte 😊

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