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Posted: 12 years ago
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I told u na i want war 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jujube

I told u na i want war 😳


war is something that they cant escape like love!
wait and watch!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just read both parts. Very nice. Pls continue but pls dont seperate ASYA.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one
plz continue dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Read both the parts!! :) :)
Really nice.. wud likebto read more continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sowmy18

Its actually my version of Yesterday's epi!
i have edited the part where the new guy enters!
ill mention it in the later part if u like it!😳

This is my first ever piece of work! please bare with me if its bad or if there are any mistakes!😃

part 1:


zoya was walking along the deserted streets feeling all alone,miserable and quite afraid of the situation she is in.
There are no veichles and not a single person to be seen anywhere near.She was feeling really afraid but was ignoring the fear and trying to think of some way to get back home.But as the seconds tick the panic in her is rising up a notch!So she started talking to herself to reduce her loneliness and fear!

"Allah miyan!whats wrong with all the people and vehicles in the world!Its like they have shifted to another planet or something!"
"ya allah! you should only save me from Mr.Khan today! He will be so angry!"

"anyways everything was my fault!I should have called him atleast once before coming here!But i thought that he will not let me go so i didn't tell him and now see the situation i am in!"

As she was chattering to herself and walking alone on the deserted streets she noticed some veichle coming this way and hoped its a bus or something!

But it turned out to be a car and there's a man driving it.


On the other side Asad was worried as hell as to where zoya has gone and was extremely angry because of her irresponcible behaviour this time.
As the time is passing he is getting more and more anxious for zoya.All stupid thoughts started entering his mind!
what if zoya was in some danger!
what if the bus she was in had an accident!
what if someone kidnapped zoya!

And with that he started to walk towards the door and as he opened it there she was smiling a wide smile at him completely non-chalant of the situation and also looking a bit afraid and relieved at the same time,

As soon as he saw her a wave of emotions coursed through him.
Relief that she is safe and sound.
Angry that she had been so irresponcible.
But above all happiness on seeing her smile and seeing her safe.

But he was too angry to consider that.
He let her inside and waited silently fuming for some sort of explanation from her.

But he lost all thepatience and started scolding her without even giving her a chance to speak.
"Ms.faaroouqui!yeh kya battameezi hai! Why didn't you inform me before you went?
and why are you not lifting your phone!do you know how much worried i have been?God!I cant believe you are so irresponcible!
And anyway if you know there was astrike in the town what was the need to be in such a haste and go all by yourself!



Zoya could not take it anymore and she also started shouting back!
"Mr.khan!Im not a kid you know!
And why are shouting at me like a big disaster has happened!Im here infront of you all safe,aren't I?"

and this goes on and soon the thigs wre like this:


ASAD:"I dont want to talk to you Ms. faarouqui!Anyways aren't you tired after jumping up and down in the stadium;wandering all o the outskirts of Bhopal at a time like this and now shouting at me with all your might!
Just go and sleep!"

Zoya was utterly furious now!she wanted to ram her fist into something!she was that frustrated by his words!

"Mr.Khan!I already told you that im not a kid! You don't tell me what to do and what not to do!
and anyways even i dont have any wish to talk to you either!"

with that both of them went into their respective rooms.

Its been a week and both asad and zoya are still angry on each other and both of them are too egoistic to apologise first!
They have been cold to each other the whole week.

Asad could not take this anymore and that night after dinner he went to zoya's room to apologise.


On the other hand zoya went into her room and had tears in her eyes!He didn't talk to her properly even once this whole week!
she missed him somuch eventhough she can see him daily!

As they say we can't be peaceful when our loved ones are angry on us.She tried to ignore him but it was not possible!

Finally she was fed up and was about to go and apologise to him.
As she opened the door there he was standing infront of her looking all anxious,worried and a bit guilty!

p.s:-Is the title lame!

Love it!!😊... Can I share it on ma page?



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love it!!😊... Can I share it on ma page?


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Posted: 12 years ago
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