AsYa (TS): His Beautiful Dancer *UPDATED* LAST PART pg.28

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#191

hey tis is an amazing update...

luv it...

wow asad dance with zoya for her rehersal n he is really concern for her...

beautifully written...

hopefully u will continue it...

thx fr the pm...

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Gudduluvs

@Gudduluvs

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#192

qow...awesum ebd...luvd it..thnks...do pm me wen u cintinye it..thnks...

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

I am sure each one of us would like you to continue with it, because honestly I can't get enough of this!😳

I just don't want this to end. I love it! Who had thought that Mr. Khan would be so generous and helpful. However, I thought that Mr. Khan himself would dance with Zoya 😉 But hey, I am not complaining at all.

Please continue and keep up the good work! 😃🤗

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Beautiful ...

LOve da part whr asad n zoya r in private room... n planning further. ..

So gud..

Such a beautiful writer u r...

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

you need to continue

this part was fab

i thought AsYa would perform together

but actually it was different

love your style of writing

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

awesome...well written.
if u continue it plzz pm me!!!!

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

that was breathtakingly beautiful!!!!!❤️

i love ur writing!!! muah!🤗

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

I love the fact that even though Asad didn't like Zoya dancing with Mark, he made sure Mark gets better in time for the fund raiser so that Zoya's dream can be fulfilled. Also loved the end when Zoya says she wouldn't mind being Asad's. If you ever do continue the story, please do PM me !!

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reenah

@reenah

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

I love the how you ended the story.
As always brilliant work candy.
Reading ur stories always put a smile on my face 😊

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...MonaCo...

@...MonaCo...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Loved it, as always. So what is new there!!! But my favorite part was -
His voice was so gentle and it was so out of character for him that she cracked one eye open and peeked up at him.

When I imagined that , I could so so so feel I was right there in that very Zoya moment (with the te-te-te music in the background, lol).