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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AsyaManic

loved it. Cnt soon plz


Thanks...and will continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess101

Loved it please continue soon and please PM me as well :):):)


Thanks...and will surely pm you if I continued 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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One more question girl...how many times I can comment on a celebrity profile
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey miss Muffet nice story line do continue and pm me ...
I joined it ...so are you happy now
Bestie 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MsTikleNickle

One more question girl...how many times I can comment on a celebrity profile


Twice or thrice 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: HockeryDockery

Hey miss Muffet nice story line do continue and pm me ...
I joined it ...so are you happy now
Bestie 😊


Yeah yeah I am 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sasir

interesting.update soon


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys this story of supernatural and some of you might not relate to this now but i promise you all will relate to it in future
i have seen many ff/ss/0s and all those are without pics but i feel like a story without pictures is not a story and the readers also get bored to i have present this one chapter with pics so do tell me how them


CHAPTER 2

the letter was of zoya's sister humeria ...she wrote
"hey zoya nothing is fine here...
our parents are murdered ...and granny is gone out for a long time
i dont know what to do now i am really sacred ..i dont know what to do now i badly want you here please come soon zoya.i am alone here"
on reading this letter,zoya was shocked and equally tensed about her sister.zoya quickly rush outside taking her cell phone and took a flight to india.
BUT zoya dont know what was waiting for her in india this time

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while she was going to her home lots of thoughts were going on in her mind 'whether her sister will be fine what had happened to her parents and all the random thoughts'
while she reached her home she was tensed to open the door her hands was shaking and she opened the door what she saw in front of her was the dead bodies of her whole family mom,dad,humaria and her granny...
zoya was broken...she dont know what she will do now as here whole family was dead ...for somedays she was in shock she just get sitted along with her family and remembered all the good memories they all shared.zoya was a brave girl but in this manner she was feeling as the most weakest/saddest people only one question was arising in her mind that who has done this and why will someday kill her family she confused and even dont know that now who will the answers of her questions...
The night was the worest night in zoya's life yet, the night was full of fears, the night was the most fearful,shocking and the baddest night of zoyas life
that night there was huge storm going on,the fearful voices were there zoya was alone in her house with 4 dead bodies ...
and what happened next is above anyone's exceptations
it was the ghost of...

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her family was turned into ghosts and zoya was not understanding what to do...zoya cant handle this she was so feared that she rushed to the door of her house but it was locked ...
zoya's mother called her ...
zoya zoya please come here where were you we all waited so much for you zoya where were ...

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zoya was num and crying
then dilshad asked her in a very loud tone
zoya got very sacred of her own mother...
zoyas sister (humaria) her granny (badi b) dilshad and rashid all together started asking her about why she didn't came earlier she can save them why she didin't came ...

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zoya then pushed the door with her full force and raned outside she than go to a road where there were no cars no peoples nothing just a road ...sitting there zoya was crying thinking of her family
and the only peroson arise in her mind is asad ...she picked her cell and called asad ...
asad-hey zoya where are you i was calling you from a long time and your house was locked
zoya-(she is just crying)
asad-zoya what happened ...why are you crying sweetheart
zoya-asad please come to india i am in big trouble i want you ...please help asad
asad- india? but why zoya? what has happened ?
zoya- please come here asad and i will tell you everything
asad-okay i will reach there soon
zoya-okay

sitting on the roadside ...except her family zoya was just remembering asad as she thought that the ghost will kill her today


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her memories were just rotating in her family and asad


HOPE YOU ALL LIKED IT ...PLEASE COMMENT AND LIKE
AND GIVE ME YOUR VIEWS

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sasir

interesting.update soon


thank you 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice edits bestie ..update soon

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