Asya OS Yeh Dooriyan..... Updated Last Part (Page 13) - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
continue soon
and please update the title too bye writing updated part no. there .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Superb update!!!!!!!
like the flashback...
waiting for the Asya reunion...plz continue soon...
Thankew so much for pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
beautifully penned. .
loved the flasback..cleared the cobwebs. .
phir tannu nay jaal phaykha..
aur sab ulaj gaya...
still not met...
thanks for the pm. .
looking forward to read more. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
gr8 update pm me wen u update next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
hey tis is superb...
amazing...
beautifully written...
luv it...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
awesome...hope they realize the truth soon and get together...continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
nice update
update soon
thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey friends...!!! Here is Part 3 of OS... I promised three parts but I extended my OS to another part... PART 4...

Part 3:

Zoya slept late but woke up early in the morning at 5. She sat on her bed and prayed to god to give her enough strength to face reality.. Zoya went to washroom and got freshen up. She wore sky blue salwaar suite and came out to garden and sat there taking in fresh air.. All the memories of past on that bench came to her mind with no strength to fight with them, she got up from there and came inside. She entered kitchen to make some coffee for herself

She is making coffee for herself when she heard sound of door open. She strained her eyes to see who came early in the morning.. She saw him after 6 long years she missed her hearbeat Asad Ahmed Khan Her Mr. Khan.!! No!! A voice from mind screamed saying that he no is more belongs to her.!! She heard another sweet voice calling Asad abbu!!!

Chahat " Abbu.!!!

Asad " Kya hua Chahat??!!!

Chahat " Abbu ye lace nahi kul rahe hai.!!!

Asad and Chahat were out from there morning jog. Abbu!!! Hearing that word Zoya understood that Asad is that little girls father. She couldnt feel anything.. No expression is there on her face She just kept on staring at Asad who is busy in opening lace of Chahats running shoes Chahat looked up at kitchen and saw Zoya standing there

Chahat " Ammi.!!! Abbu dekho ammi aagayi.!!!

Chahat ran into kitchen and hugged Zoya.. This created confusion in Zoyas mind.. Asad saw Zoya after many years. His Zoya!! She is wearing salwaar suite. He could see confusion on her face but could see broken Zoya with no intrest in her life from her eyes. This hurt him He is the reason for her condition whatever happened is because of him. He didnt trust her. He didnt listen to her. This brought them here Abbu started moving towards kitchen.

Chahat pulled herself away from Zoya and looked up at her who is looking at Asad.. She moved Zoyas hand to get her attention Zoya looked down at her

Chahat " Ammi aap humein chod ke phir se matt chali jayiye. Hum sabb aapko bahot miss karte hai. sabse zyada mein aapko miss karti hoon.

Asad came there and turned chahat towards him.

Asad " Princess aap jaakar freshup hokar aayiye. Ammi abhi abhi aayi hai na woh tak gaye honge. Hum unse baad mein baat karte hai

Chahat " Teekhe abbu.!! (To Zoya) Ammi mein jaldi taiyaar hoke aajati hoon

Zoya is searching answers for all the questons rose in her mind.. she know that Asad can only give her answers to get away from dilemma.. But more then knowing answers she felt difficult to stand before him and enquire him.. Before Asad turn towards her she ran to her room..

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Zoyas Room:

Zoya " Yeh sab kya ho raha hai.??!!! Chahat mujhe ammi kyu bula rahi hai.???!!! Tanveer kaha hai.???!!! Mr. Khan bhi agree kar rahe hai.??!!! Agar Mr. Khan ne Tanveer se nikha kiya hai toh usse issi ghar mein hona chahiye. Par woh kaha hai.?? Mein kis se poochu ye saari sawal.??

Whole hour Zoya was restless and desperately wanted to know answers.. Humeira woke up from her sleep stretching her hands out looking at 7 struck watch..

Humeira " Good Morning Baji.!!!

Zoya " Good Morning..!!!

Zoya (To herself) " Mein yeh baat Humeira se pooch sakti hoon..

Zoya " Humeira... mujhe tumse kuch poochni hai.!!!

Humeira " Aap mujhe baad mein bhi toh pooch sakti hai na Baji. Mein abhi fresh up hoke aati hoon..

Zoya couldnt stop her. Humeira went to freshen up.. Zoya sat there like a kid tensed for her exam..

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Breakfast Table:

Everyone is present there except Zoya

Dilshad " Zoya kaha hai.???

Humeira " Phupi. Baji ko headache ho rahi thi toh tablet kha ke so gayi hai.

Asad (To himself) " Headache.!!! Woh teekh toh hai??!!! Zoya mein samajh sakti hoon tum pareshaan ho. par ek baar mujhse baat karo. Sirf ek baar. Mein tumhe sab kuch batana chahta hoon. Mein tumse maafi mangna chahte hoon..

Chahat moved his hand on the table which brought him to senses

Chahat " Abbu.!!! Ammi kaha hai??? Mujhe unse milna hai.

Dilshad " Breakfast ke baad milna chahat. Abhi acchi bachi ki tarah breakfast complete karlo.

Chahat " Teekhe Dadi!!!

Shirin " Rashid aapne Maulvi Sahib se milke aagye??

Rashid " Ha maine unse baat kar li hai.

Dilshad " Aapne sabko call karke special invitations diya.????

Rashid " Woh kaam bhi hogaya hai.

Najma and Nikhat got up from there seats. Najma went to Shirin and Nikhat went to Dilshad. They brought them to there seats and made them seated..

Nikhat " Bahot hogayi planning..

Najma " Ab aap dono baet kar khaane kayiye..

Imraan " Hum hai na..

Farhan " Hum sambal lenge.

Asad " Ha ammi. Hum hai na hum sambal lenge.. Ayaan aur Humeira ki nikha aisa hogi ki sab yaad rakhenge.

Ayaan " Aapka nikha bhai jaan.???

Asad got up from his seat..

Asad " Mujhe kuch kaam hai.!!!

He went to his room..

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Asads Room:

Asad sat before his laptop trying to work.. He touched his laptop screen displaying Zoyas Photo.. Her heartful smile glowing eyes charming face!!!

Asad " Abb ye kushi kyun nahi tumhari chehre pe.?? Shayad iss gum ka karan mein hoon. Sabb logh mere nikha ki baat kar rahe hai. Mein unhe kaise batau ki mein sirf tumse nikha karna chahta hoon. Mein mere zindagi mein tumhare alawa kisi se nikha nahi kar sakta hoon..

Chahat entered Asads room.

Chahat " Abbu!!! Ammi kaha hai??? Woh phir se chali gay hai kya.??

Voice " Nahi.!!!

Asad and Chahat turned towards the voice..

Zoya " Mein apni pyaari si Princess ko chod kar kaise jaa sakti hoon

Zoya went on her knees and hugged Chahat. Chahat cling to her Asad stood confused..

Zoya " Hum aapko kabhi chod kar nahi jayenge.. mein ne aap ke liye Carrot halwa banaya hai. jayiye Dadi aapke liye serve karke wait kar rahi hai.

Chahat " teekhe ammi..!!!

With a wide smile on her face. She went jumping to have halwa She is really happy that for the first time she is going to have halwa cooked by her ammi.

Asad (Confused) " Zoya!! Yeh sabb.

Zoya " Mr. Khan aap jitna bhi badle jaye par aap Emotionally Challenged hi rahenge

FlashBack

Zoya went to Humeira, Nikhat and Najma who sat together in Humeiras room. Nikhat and Najma are busy teasing Humeira They were so engrossed into there chat that they didnt see Zoya there. Zoya felt that this is not right time to ask them. Humeira saw her when she set to leave.

Humeira " Baji!!! Andar ayiye..!!!

Nikhat " Tum kab aayie Zoya.?? Humne dekha hi nahi.

Najma moved a side to give her seat.. Najma saw the confused and tensed face of Zoya..

Najma " Kya hua Zoya.??!!!

Zoya " Kuch nahi..???

Humeira " Baji aapne kaha aapko kuch poochna hai..??? Kya hai Baji??

Zoya " Woh mein Chahat ke bare mein poochna chahti thi woh mujhe.??!!

Zoya stopped there

Nikhat " Tum yahi poochna chahti hona ki woh tumhe ammi kyu nula rahi hai aur Tanveer kaha hai..??

Zoya nodded in yes

Humeira " Baji. Jab aap chale gaye the Asad jiju ko kuch pata he nahi chala ki unhe kya krna chahiye.. Ek din woh jab Tanveer se milne gaye the..

Flashback Tanveers Room:

Asad entered Tanveers room Tanveer is having reports in her hand. When she suddenly saw Asad there in shock she dropped reports down.. Asad went and picked up those reports and he shocked after seeing reports.

Asad " Tum 12 weeks ki pregnant ho.. Zoya sach bol rahi thi aur mein ne unhe trust nahi kiya

Tanveer with shivering hands and swallowing gulp in her throat..

Tanveer " woh Jammy.

Asad " Kuch matt bolo tum..

Asad raised his hand to slap her but he stopped hi shand before touching her check with a thought that she is pregnant. He dragged Tanveer out of house with her baggage.

Rashid " Kya hua Asad.???

Asad (To Tanveer) " Aur dobra mujhe tumhari mooh matt dikhana.. Mein tumhe maar dalunga. Chale jao yaha se.

Asad closed door on Tanveers face.. He went to his room and we followed him. He started crying like a small boy who lost his most valuable and lovable doll.. He drowned alone in that big well of Dilshad went to him and placed her hand on his head.. Asad hugged her..

Asad " Ammi Zoya sahi thi.!!! Tanveer jhoot bol rahi thi..!!!

Dilshad " Asad sambhalo apne aap ko.!!!

Asad " Mein ne usse kho diya ammi.!! Woh phir kabhi waapas nahi gaye.!!!

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Najma " Tum jab chali gayi thi. Bhai Jaan tot gaye the Zoya. Woh toh 10 din tak apne aapko kamre bandh kar rakhe the..

Tears flowed through her eyes.. Tears filled with mix of emotions.. People say truth that Tears have 1% water and 99% of emotions. Zoyas tears are mixture of happiness, sadness and guilt.. She could feel the flowing tears on her check which she didnt even care to wipe them off..

Najma " Bhai jaan aapne aapko bahot mushkil se sambhala. Woh bilkul tumhari tarah bangaye the. Hum sabb sach mein chauk gaye the jab ammi ne bhai jaan se poocha ki ye sabb kya hai.??? Bhai jaan ne kaha..

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Asad " Mein shayad unke saath kabhi nahi rehpaungi par mein ne Zoya se seekha hai kais eek muskhurahat se saare ghum se lad sakte hai.. woh mere pass nahi hai toh kya unke yaadein toh hai mein unhi se zindagi bhar jeelungi.. Agar mein unki tarah banjaunga toh mein har pal uske saath hi toh rahunga.

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Zoya " Iska matlab Mr. Khan ke nikha nahi hua hai.!!!

Najma " Ha Zoya..!!!

Zoya " Toh Chahat kon hai.??!!

Nikhat " Kuch mahino ke baad Bhai Jaan ko call aya tha. Woh jaldi mein ghar se chale gaye the.

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FlashBack

Asad entered one hospital ward where Tanveer is lying on bed and there is 8 months baby in a swing beside her bed.

Tanveer " Asad mujhe pata hai tum meri chehra bhi nahi dekhna chahte ho. par mujhe tumhare maddat ki zaroorat hai.

Asad didnt even look at her.

Tanveer " Mein kitni din zinda rahungi mujhe pata nahi. mein chahti hoon ki meri beti iss duniya mein akheli reh kar meri tarah nahi bane. Mein chahti usse acchi parvarish mile. Woh sirf tum aur Zoya de sakto ho Asad.

Asad " yeh kya naya natak hai..???

Tanveer " Mein ne aaj tak job hi kiya sirf natak kiya par mein aaj sach bol rahi hoon. Mujhe cancer hai. mujhe bahot kum samai hai meri sirf aakhri iccha hai ki meri beti ko acchi parvarish mile. Mein nahi chahti hoon woh meri tarah bane

Asad took baby in his hands..

Asad " Aaj se ye meri zimmadari hai. ye meri aur Zoya ki beti hai.

Tanveer " Shukriya Asad.!!! Tum abhi isse yaha se le chalo.

Asad " Par??

Tanveer " Mein nahi chahti hoon uss par meri Chaya bhi pade..

Tanveer took her baby in her hands and kissed her. She kept baby near to her heart with teary eyes.. She gave baby back to Asad. Tears flowed through Tanveers eyes. Whatever the person may be but becoming mother will change them. Asad left from there with baby in his hands...

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Nikhat " Ammi ne poocha ki woh Tanveer ki beti ko ghar leke kyun aaye hai. bhai jaan kaha.

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Asad " Ammi. Galti Tanveer ne kiya hai iss choti bacchi ka kya kasoor hai.

Dilshad " Par Zoya.??!!!

Asad " Mujhe pura yakeen hai Zoya samjhegi. Kyun ki usne zindagi mein mehsoos kiya hai ki ek beti ke liye ammi aur abbu ki kitni zaroorat hai.

Dilshad " Zoya tumse baat bhi nahi kar rahi hai Asad.. tum uske liye kab tak intezaar karogi.???

Asad " Jab tak meri saase chal rahi hai, tab tak.!!! Kyun ki woh meri har saas mein hai.. Mein zinda rahoon ya na rahoon par uske liye meri pyaar zinda rahega..

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Zoya got up from her seat with flowing tears. Zoya ran out of the room..

Humeira " Baji.!!!

Nikhat " rukho Humeira.. tim aagaya ek prem kahani ki nayi shuruaat ke liye.

Najma " In dono ki YEH DOORIYAN kum hone ke liye.

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FlashBack Ends

Khan Mansion: Asads Room:

Zoya and Asad were standing face to face with tears of happiness.. Zoya banged into Asad and hugged with force Asad lost his balance and stepped back but he regain his balance. He hugged her back.. Asads hand around her waist. They could feel warmth and that heaven like feel in which they were lost.

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Thanks for reading...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome.loved it.waiting for the last one
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it😊...but why didn't asad tell zoya the truth for 6 yrs??i mean she forgave him the moment she got to know the truth...u cud hv put some reason to it...it's jst a suggestion😊,hope u don't mind...update soon

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