SS: ASYA Destined For Each other--- PART 12 UPDATED - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I logged in after loads of time...I was desperately finding. For some some fictions...I was literally like searching and searching ...and this caught my attention...I was waiting for ur parts
I just love it...I m despo to read the future parts...I m longing to read it further...it is so beautifully,so serene,so amazing...that I read it for almost three times...ur pace...ur small things...everything is just perfect...I m in love with this piece of writing...AMD u r an excellent and amazing writer...


I cud actually imagine everything...and the bonds u described r so beautifully...I love u for writing such an amazing fictio...u r just splendid...I have no worrds
I have my boards so I can't logg every now and then...so wid love if u pm me so I can read ur parts whenever I m stressed...I read ur parts again after I studied for almost fifteen hours...and it was so blissfully to read it...pls pm me
I don't know there occurs a problem with my is and so I can Nat send u buddy request so pls pm me...pls...pls...pls
Sorry for typing mistake
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Posted: 12 years ago
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devika...
this is tooo gud...❤️
i am loving all the characters...asad is so nice ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi. Lovely story... Read all the parts in one go.
I'm not very good in hindi, English my first language but still i think i understood most of it...
If possible please pm me when you update would love to read the story right up till the end...:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: suchishah



I logged in after loads of time...I was desperately finding. For some some fictions...I was literally like searching and searching ...and this caught my attention...I was waiting for ur parts
I just love it...I m despo to read the future parts...I m longing to read it further...it is so beautifully,so serene,so amazing...that I read it for almost three times...ur pace...ur small things...everything is just perfect...I m in love with this piece of writing...AMD u r an excellent and amazing writer...


I cud actually imagine everything...and the bonds u described r so beautifully...I love u for writing such an amazing fictio...u r just splendid...I have no worrds
I have my boards so I can't logg every now and then...so wid love if u pm me so I can read ur parts whenever I m stressed...I read ur parts again after I studied for almost fifteen hours...and it was so blissfully to read it...pls pm me
I don't know there occurs a problem with my is and so I can Nat send u buddy request so pls pm me...pls...pls...pls
Sorry for typing mistake



Thank yo so much suchi !! I am happy that you liked it.. All the very best for your board exams.. I will definately PM when I update the next part... I will also provide the links for my earlier posts.. Hope you like them as well !!
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PART 6:
The next day, the freshers were allocated desks and they were informed that they would be in a class room training for the next 6 months for 3/4th of the day and the rest 2-3 hours had to be spent with their development team to understand the process and also the projects which were ongoingPiyush had made Zoya TL of the Fresher group.. much to the happiness of Farhaan and Nupur but it only angered Tanya more
Asad wanted to meet Zoya and tell sorry to her personally but the group were busy with the training and finally when Zoya had come to her desk, he had to find a way for her to come in to his roomAs the group were sitting with their technical buddies and trying to understand the things, Asad joined them
Asad : So team .. how is it going??
TL (Shekar) was surprised to see Asad over there since there had not been much of an interaction with Asad during the past 1.5 Yrs..
TL : Sir.. it is going on fine
Asad : I want to ensure that the fresher team is trained properly since I have high expectations from them.. I rely on you to provide them the best possible knowledge..
TL: sure sir
Asad also knew that Piyush had made Zoya the TL of the fresher group
Asad looking at Farhaan : To aap mein se TL kaun hain.. woh mere cabin me ayiyeand before hearing the reply, he walked back
Zoya : Farhaan.. main nahin jane wali.. tum jao na
Farhaan : Main TL nahin hoon.. tum ho na.. to phir.. jao..
TL Shekar : Zoya.. gharao math.. woh bahut hi strict hain.. hum sab bhi aise hi ghabrathe hainaaj bhi.. jao warna gussa karenge.. He is very particular about time
Very reluctantly Zoya knocks and walks into Asads room
As soon as Zoya enters Asads cabin, he gets up and goes to her.. : Zoya muje maaf kardo please.. tumne mera message ka jawab nahin diya.. phone bhi nahin utha rahi hobaath karo pleaseand he catches hold of her handZoya immediately closes her eyes in pain and the hurt sound comes out from her mouth.. Asad looks at her hand where he had held and notices that it had turned red and bluish in colour and his finger prints were on her hand due to his yesterdays anger outburstHe takes her hand softly and runs his fingers on the marksIt brought tears in his eyes as well He was so ashamed of himself for hurting her like that
Asad : Zoya please muje maaf kardomain bahut sharminda hoon..muje aise nahin karna chahiyehta
Zoya : Thats fine Mr. Khan.. Shayad apne hi kal kaha ki humein Personal aur professional life alag rakhna hainNow if you could please excuse me..
Asad : Zoya please aise math maro muje main nahin sehsaktha hoon apki yeh berukiaur naarazgi
Zoya : Mr. khan please..
Asad : Teek hain Zoya agar aap ziddi hain.. to main bhi ziddi hoon main yeh bhi batadoon.. ki main apse mohabat karta hoon.. main bus yeh chatha hoon ki aap mujse uthnahi pyaar karein..jaise aap janti hain main akela hoon aur aapko dekh kar aisa laga ki aap meri zindagi kushi se bhardegi.. itne din ke dosti ke baad bhi aap ne gusse mein dosti thodne ki baat ki aur main aapko khona nahin chatha hoon.. isliye main bhi gusse se patha nahin kya kehdiya...aur haan main yeh bhi manta hoon ki maine apko aaj tak mere barein mein aur is company ke barein mein nahin bataya tha?? Muje aisi saathi chahiye jo mera saath de is company ko chalne mein.. aur muje maluum hain aap college ke topper ho.. and I thought you will be a perfect partner to me ab aap yahan se chalejayiye.shukriya.. yeh sab sunnekeliye
Zoya was disturbed with Asads confession..She was trying to digest the information and with a worried look came out of Asads cabin and joined her team..
Two days had passed and Asad had not made any effort to either speak to Zoya nor to even call her in his cabin . In fact she had not seen him as well.. Adya was also pestering her to invite her dost.. since Zoya had told her that Asad had returned..Aslam was also worried about Asad .. He had called up Asad both the days to find out if the tension had eased and hearing Asads voice, he could sense that the matter was still not cleared out between Asad and Zoya and he was also thinking of a way to unite this couple .. but he had to meet Zoya before taking any step further
Farhaaan wanted to go out and spend time after office that day along with his gang of college friends"Arjun, Ayaan , Zoya and Nupur. Though Zoya was not in mood, she promised that she would join them later since she wanted to spend some more time in office.. So Farhaan and Nupur had left early .. The only reason she stayed back was she wanted to find an opportunity to go and speak to Asad..She did go to her Manager Piyush and requested if she could get an appointment with their MD
Piyush : Kyun Zoya kya problem hain ??.. batao ??.. Sir aise sab se nahin milthe hain.
Zoya : koi problem nahin hain.. ek baar unse milna chathi hoon
Piyush : Muje bhi permission nahin hain.. aise unke kamrein mein janekeliye.. agar mulkat hoti hain to batadoonga teek hain ??
Tanya and her gang of friends were still in office and Tanya had all ears to the conversation going on between Zoya and Piyush.. The only thought that came to her mind was that Zoya was deliberately trying to impress their MD to grow up in the corporate ladder and she felt that it was only because of this she might have got the TL post though Tanya knew that Zoya was extremly intelligent... Tanya started making plans to impress Asad
Zoya was disappointed since she had not got a chance to speak with Asad..She did not want to ring up either since she felt that a face to face talk would be better.. With these thoughts going on in her mind, Zoya started her scooty and moved out of the office campus.. Karan and Tanya had also started around the same time from office and Zoya was on her scooty just few steps ahead.. Just then , a speeding bike had come towards her and had knocked her down.
Karan stopped his bike and ran towards Zoya to find her lying in a pool of blood.. She had hurt her elbows and also leg Luckily there was no head injury..
Karan : Tanya.. tum Zoya ke bike ko paas mein park karo.. aur haan .. mera bike bhi..
Tanya : Chodho Karan.. Hum ambulance ko bulakar bhejdethe hain isse.
Karan : Tanya.. How can you be so in human ??.. She is a friend of ours..
Tanya : Accha to yeh ladki tumhe bhi pagal kiya hainI dont believe this Karan !!
Karan : Tanya stop it please.. Tum jao.. I will manage.. Hum baad mein baath karenge iskebarein mein
Tanya was very irritated and angry with Karan now and so she just got into an Auto and went away.Karan managed to pick up Zoyas belongings and he requested somebody in the crowd which had gathered by now to park both the bikes He took Zoya to the CITY HOSPITAL by taxi.
Dr. Aslam was on duty when Zoya was taken to the hospital.. After the examining her, he got to know that it was not very deep wounds.. but she had to regain consciousness soon.. He came out to find only one guy waiting outside.
Dr. Aslam : Excuse me.. Aap patient ke saath hain.??
Karan : Ji Doctor.. I am Karan .. aur patient ka naam Zoya hain.. meri colleague hain. and he explained how she had got hit by the bike

As soon as Zoyas name was mentioned, Aslam wanted to know if it was Asads Zoya.
Dr. Aslam : aap sab kahan kaam kartein hain.. ?? aur inke gharwalon ko khabar dena hain
Karan : Ji Doctor.. Hum AAK Software and Services main kaam kartein hain.. muje inke gharwalon ke barein mein patha nahin.. haan inke dost Farhaan aur Nupur ko call karke batadoonga.. shayad woh Zoya ke ghar ko bata denge
Aslam got worried now .. He excused himself and rings up Asad
Asad was still in office.. He was working on something important and he had lost track of time as well. He was surprised to see Aslam calling him at this hour.
Asad : Salam Walikum Aslam.. kya baat hain itni jaldi kaise phone kiya aaj ??
Aslam : Asad Zoya ke barein mein and Asad immediately cuts him short
Asad : Aslam please.. maine kaha na.. ki main maafi maang chukka hoon.. dekhtha hoon kitne din tak baat nahin karegi
Aslam : Asad .. Zoya hospital main hain.accident hua hain
Asad almost fainted hearing this..: Aslam kahan hain Zoya ?? kaisi hi ab.. ??
Aslam : tum yahan CITY HOSPITAL aajao Asad
Karan had in the mean time informed Farhaan and Nupur who had also informed Zeenat and Salim As Asad got out of his cabin and he was rushing towards the lift, he noticed Salim also waiting for the lift who was almost in tears..
Salim : Sir.. meri behen Zoya hospital main hain..
Asad : Ji.. janta hoon.. muje bhi call aya thachaliye.. saath mein chalthein hain
When Asad and Salim reached the hospital, Zoyas gang of friends , Zeenath and Adya had already reached
As soon as Adya saw Asad She ran towards him and hugged him.. shocking Salim and also Zeenath
Zeenath : Ji Aap kaun ??
Salim : Zeenath yeh humare boss hain Asad Ahmed Khan..
Adya : Yeh to humarein dost hain.. Asad !!
Asad picked up Adya in his his arms.. : Ji Babhi.. mera naam Asad Ahmed Khan hain.. aur main apke Adya ka dost bhi
Adya : Poophi teek hojayegi.. na dost ??
Asad : unhe teek hona hi padega...
Salim : sir.. aap Adya se..
Asad smiles at Salim and Zeenath and he tells both of them how he had met Zoya and how they had become friends including Adya He however did not disclose on his attempt to get her to his office, their current rift etc
Zeenath and Salim sensed that there was more than Friendship.. So Zeenat tells him about Zoyas parents and how they had passed away in an horrible accident.. Zoya was very attached to her parents and she had also got hurt in the accident and the shock of loosing her parents was so much that she was in coma for nearly a month or two.. It was her dads dream to see her as one of the best Software Engineer and that was what had made her take up the subject so passionately and she did achieve her goal to a certain extentShe wanted to prove herself as a good professional before getting marriedAsad was quietly nodding his head though he knew most of the information.The only additional information which he got was on why Zoya was not ready for marriage so soon It did make sense from her POV.
Farhaan was surprised to know that their MD was the same Asad about whom they used to tease to Zoya..
Aslam came out of the ICU and finding Asad over there, moved towards him
Aslam : Asad.. Zoya ke ghar se kaun aya hain ??
After the introductions, Aslam informed the entire family that though her hands and legs were hurt, there was no fractures..and they did not find any external injury as well.. but even after 3 hours, she had not gained consciousness. So that was the only factor bothering currently
Asad : Aslam.. kuch to karo .. please
Aslam : Aao Asad and he takes Asad along with him to his room..
Aslam : Asad .. lagta hain.. Zoya bahut pareshan thi.. usse ghera sadma pauncha hain shayad.. isliye woh uth nahi rahi hain..
Asad :Aise math kaho Aslam.. main ji nahin paoonga.
Aslam : Apne aap ko sambhalo Asad.. Zoya teek hojayegi
As they were discussing , nurse comes running to Aslams room
Nurse : Doctor us ladki ko todha hosh aya shayad.. kisi ka naam lerahi thi.. aur phir se bhehosh hogayi
Aslam : Chalo chalthein hain.. Kiska naam lerahi thi ??
Nurse : Shayad Asad kehrahithi
Asad : Kya kaha aapne??
Nurse : Asad.
Asad also goes to the ICU along with Aslam.while the others waiting outside were seeing through the glass door
Asad sat next to Zoya and he gently takes her right hand in his.. The red and bluish marks on her hand had lightened but still there was traces of the marks.. which made his eyes start wateringHer both the elbows were bandaged.. Aslam was checking if there was any variatons in her breath and if she was fine
Asad : Zoya please uth jao.. mujse naraz hona..isliye nahin uth rahi ..aisi saza math do Zoya.. please uth jaomain tumhare bagair nahin jee saktha hoon
Asad felt her fingers move a little and also there was a little variation in her breath.and very slowly Zoya opened her eyesAsad was overjoyed Aslam was also happy to see the love they shared .. Asads touch and words had forced her to open eyes.The joy of seeing Asad in front of her was evident in her eyes.. She was hurt badly when Asad had avoided her for 2 whole days not giving her a chance to explain Now that she saw him in front of her eyes, she felt that she had to speak.. She tried to get up
Aslam : Zoya..lete raho.. please
Zoya : Please doctor.. muje uthna hain.
Asad helped her to sit up.. and without even thinking about who was around, Zoya hugged Asad and started crying.Asad got worried thinking what has upset her so much for her to cry unconsolably
Asad : You are fine Zoya.. kyun ro rahi ho ?? Please sambhalobatao kya baath hain ??
There were tears of joy in Zeenat and Salims eyes as well as they saw through the window.. Adya was clapping her hands to see her poophi up.. While her gang of friends and Karan had a smile on their faces
Zoya slowly comes out of Asads armsand looks into his eyes.: I am sorry.. maine do din se aap se baath karneki koshish ki.. lekin aap mile nahin.. aur maine aapko dekha bhi nahin.
Asad : To aapki pareshani ki wajah mein tha.. itna pyaar hain tumhare dil mein mereliye aur phir bhi chipana chaha.. mujhe bhi dard diya.. aur apne apko bhi.tum pagal ho Zoya.. I love you so much.
Zoya : I love you too Asadand the couple hug each other again.. thanking allah for blessing them with each other.
Aslam : Haan Haan.. Tum dono ek dusre ke liye hi bane ho.. allah tumhari Jodi.. ko hamesha har kushi de.
The group of near and dear ones waiting outside.. now joined them in the room by clapping and expressing their joy While Adya ran and sat on Asad lap
END of PART 6
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fabulous update
tussi chha gye ji
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^ i second her. Tussi chaaa gaye 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww.loved it alottt.plz update soon
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Hey...welcome...I don't know why bit I had a staunch feeling that u will update so I logged in between doing magnetism...ahhh...its so refreshing and serene...that I had read it second time and is posting u cmnt now...I just loved the confession...omg...its so spectacular...I lbw ur writing way...I just luv all ur characters...they r beautiful...specially adya...thanks...pls pm me next time too ...puppy face
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Hey...welcome...I don't know why but I had a staunch feeling that u will update so I logged in between doing magnetism...ahhh...its so refreshing and serene...that I had read it second time and is posting u cmnt now...I just loved the confession...omg...its so spectacular...I love ur writing way...I just luv all ur characters...they r beautiful...specially adya...thanks...pls pm me next time too ...puppy face

U just rock...

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