'the other part of me' an asya fiction part 14 11/11 updated - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: ashikakapoor

i'll update on this saturday or sunday



What happen to the update friend...😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
I read ur ff in one go
brilliant is the word for ur writing
tooo awsume
best part is their childhood connection totally loved that part...!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Plz update soon dear..
And dont forget to PM me
Awesome FF..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for ur wedding... 🥳
Plz update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
today or 2moro i'll update i started writing

i'm really sorry i'm very busy these days so couldn't update 😳😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: ashikakapoor

today or 2moro i'll update i started writing

i'm really sorry i'm very busy these days so couldn't update 😳😳😳



thank you.. 🥳 pm me 🥳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: ashikakapoor

<font size="6"><font color="#CC6699">today or 2moro i'll update i started writing

i'm really sorry i'm very busy these days so couldn't update 😳😳😳</font>
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It's ok update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chapter 9:-love is such a strange thing

In the morning
dilshad,najma and asad were seated in dining table n asad looked around and was searching for zoya but couldn't
find and asad turned towards dilshad and asked "ammi!! wo.."dilshad even though she understood that he was
askin about zoya "tanveer is in her room"replied dilshad but asad continued "wo..actually" and dilshad replied
"najma is here asad" asad was now frustrated as he did not see zoya and was not getting answer that he wanted
and stopped asking question to his ammi n concentrated on news paper


after few minutes of silence dilshad broke her silence and said "zoya is in her room she'll be coming in few
minutes" asad was happy and was hiding smile behind news papers which was noticed by najma and dilshad
asad "ammii!! zo...i mean i did not ask about Ms farooqui and why are you telling me about her" asked dilshad
and dilshad replied "i mean you were asking about everyone so i thought of telling you about zoya"
just then zoya enterd into dinning hall and najma excitedly replied "zoya came" asad who was busy with mom
turned towards zoya and was smiling at her and zoya was staring at Mr khan with a smile

"good morning everyone"said zoya with huge smile on her face and everyone smiled at her but asad was lost in her
and was staring dilshad turned towards and saw her son and signaled najma and both of them smiled at how asad lost
in zoya "ahem"coughed both dilshad and najma at same time and asad broke from his trance and concentrated on cereals


after few minutes dilshad and najma decided to play with bith zoya and asad.."ammii!! what happend in that 7:30
serial, i couldn't watch it last night since i had assignments" asked najma and dilshad replied "you remember that
hero fought with heroin but last night he went inside heroin room and hugged her tightly looks like both are in
love" lisenting to this zoya coughed water which was in her mouth and asad just droped his coffee mug on the table

dilshad askked "how come you dropped coffee today?" with strict voice and asad took out tissue papers to clean
the coffee "wo...actually..wo"was stammering and najma turned towards zoya and asked "what happend to you?" zoya
replied "nothing najma"

both dilshad and najma smiled at each other after the way both reacted


tanveer slowly walked towards dinning table and suddenly fell on dilshad feet...dilshadwas shocked and got up from
her chair and asad to got up from chair staring at tanveer
najma turned towards zoya "inka nautanki phir shuru hogayi" zoya controlled her laugh
"kya hua tanveer"asked dilshaad and tanveer replied "khaala mujhey maaf kijye!! pls forgive me" dilshad replied
"you get up and tell what happend?" tanveer again replied "khaala i won't get until you forgive me " dilshad said
"i forgive you please get up" tanveer got up "khaala i'm really sorry i forgot that you are allergic to nuts and i
used them and you were admitted in hospital, please forgive me khalla"started crying costantly rubbing her eyes

dilshad replied "just forget what ever happened we are humans and not gods so mistake happens and from now on
no will talk about the incidence" dilshad did not want to spoil her happy moment as her son is in love with
someone she likes and she actually felt sad for tanveer to

asad replied "tanu never do this again and ammii is my life and i cant imagine life without my ammii, i knw
it was accident and was not on purpose"

zoya pov

Mr akudu khan when i said it was mistake you slapped me but when your tannu accepted it as mistake you are
forgiving her,, Mr khan how can you be so judgemental? how can you think that i don't do accidents but
what ever i do is accidents? how can you do this to me?


tanveer pov

i hoped this budiya dilshad died and i'm going to take revenge on you dilshad for making to fall on your feet
let me marry asad once and then i'll write all property in my name and send you out of this home




after breakfast asad left to office, zoya went back to her room, tanveer to her room
both dilshad and najma were kitchen planning how to make zoya and asad realize their love
and najma got an idea and shared with dilshad even though dilshad refused it but later aceptted it as they couldn't

find any other ideas and najma decided to not to share their idea with anyone and went to tanveer room

to implement their idea




tanveer room

dilshad and najma knocks tanveer room and tanveer opens door and invites them inside and they see tanveer is ready
and was about to go out "are you goin somewhere?" asked najma and tanveer replied "i have some work"


dilshad hesitated but then sat beside tanveer "can you do me a favor?" tanveer with happy smile "ha!! khala tell
anything for you"
najma replied "then call zoya and tell asad met with an accident in a different voice, zoya should not know that
you are calling her and this is our idea"
tanveer was shocked "khaala if jammy gets to know he'll scold me and he will be angry"
najma replied "bhaijaan also should not know that we planned this" but tanveer was confused and asked najma
"why are you doing this?" dilshad was about to answer but nama replied "wo...actually i want to fool zoya
she fooled us many times"

tanveer was doubt full about the plan but accepted it

tanveer pov
"what is khaala and najma planning but what if asad gets to know and he scolds me but if i do this i can score good
points and khaala will be impressed and anyways that zoya is going to be fooled so its worth the risk"



after few hours:-
zoya was in kitchen doing her experiments and dilshad signaled najma and najma immediately sent message to tanveer


phone rang
dilshad shouted "zoya please pick up the phone" and zoya ran towards the phone holding choclate sauce in her left
hand picked up the phone "hello!! who is this?...on the other line was tanveer
with strong femine voice spoke "is this Mr asad ahmed khan residence?" zoya replied "yes!!" and tanveer replied
"MAM this is a constable from bhopal police station we found a car outside bhopal on national highway and ID
of the person say that this car belongs to MR asad and i think he met with an accident..."before tanveer complete
her sentence phone was disconnected


najma and dilshad who were looking at zoya were shocked once phone and choclate sauce from her hand fell and then
zoya just fell the ground with teary eyes

najma and dilshad ran towards zoya and asked her "what happend?" but zoya did not reply them..najma tapped zoya to
get some respond but zoya did not move a single muscle

zoya pov
did i just hear that asad met with an accident oh god!! no way its a dream i just saw him few minutes back
what if it is real? allah!! please save my asad if anything happens i wont be able to live anymore and he is my
savior and its him who saved me when i was in danger...allah!! please give back my asad i cannot imagine my
life without him and i need him every day in fact every second...without him is like my ground beneth disappeared
its like i lost light and went in to darkness and i ve no idea what to do without asad


dilshad and najma worried about zoya since she did not talk or move from that place its been hours she is sitting
without moving muscle , dilshad could see pain in her eyes and decided to tell what happend
"zoya!! asad is fine its me and najma who planned this to fool you please forgive us and drink this juice"dilshad
brought juice infront of zoya but she was still


dilshad immediately called asad "asad!! come home now" asad was confused "ammi i ve meeting now" dilshad was worried
"i don't care asad but i'm ordering you to come home now"

asad just took is laptop bag and told his PA to postpone his meeting and left to his home


what will happen when asad comes back home?
will zoya be fine ?
how will this affect asad and zoya?

precap:-asad realization that he loves zoya
bill bitch plan to separate asya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
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unres

love it!!
waiting for next update
its cliffy but awesome!!
precap- asad realized😳😳
billi is trying to seprate😡😡but it qould be fun to see billi trying to seprate two soulmateswhich are made by lord😆😆😆
Edited by ....Asya.... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Beautiful update dear👏
Precap- asad realization
Excited.. Continue soon dear

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