'the other part of me' an asya fiction part 14 11/11 updated - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
omg
lovely ❤️
plz plz plz update soon
cant wait to read next update plz
n thanx for the pm..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
lovely update ashi...😊
gud going...

.kill that tanveer
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Laddu bhi nahi..peda bhi nahi..
Awesome update.
Dilshad and najma plan through tanveer...
Hope zoya realised that she has fallen for asad. ?
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 10:- TRUE SMILE

In KV

Zoya was in shocked state its been hours and dilshad worried and requested her family doctor to visit them as it was an emergency

After few minutes:-

Asad arrived at KV and was worried as soon as he entered saw dilshad and najma sitting beside zoya and zoya was in a shocked state her eyes were blood red...dilshad and najma were busy with zoya and both were busy trying to distract her and talk to her but she did not respond and asad was worried asked "ammi!!najma!! what is happening here?"

Before dilshad and najma could respond zoya just ran and hugged asad, dilshad and najma were happy that zoya responded and prayed to allah "allah!! Thank you so much for keeping my zoya safe"..

Dilshad pov:-

"ya allah!! Lak lak shukar fr keeping my beti safe and please forgive me for doing such tricks and I promise I'll never do this again and thanks allah for giving my son his love and I'm glad that both zoya and asad love each other I just want asad to realize his love and marry zoya"

Najma pov:-

"thanks god!! I just now realized how much zoya loves my bhaijaan thanks for giving me zoya as my bhaabhi,thank you sooo much"

Zoya ran towards asad who was near the main door in a single breath and jumped on him and hugged him asad was about to fall because of the force of zoya but took support of the door, asad was shocked at zoya reaction but he too gave in to hug

After few good minutes of hug "how could you do this Mr khan? How could you?"asked zoya who was sobbing and asad asked "what did I do Ms farooqui?" zoya who broke from the hug hold his collar and shouted on asad "how dare you Mr khan asking what did I do? How dare you? Why cant you call home and inform that you are fine after an accident" asad was confused and asked "accident?" zoya who was angry at him started shouting "ha!! Accident I got a call that your car met with an accident outside bhopal, since then I'm not able to live Mr khan I almost died" zoya started crying "Mr khan I cannot live without you and if something would have happened to you I did not know what to do and I was praying allah to kill me because I cannot see my life with out you Mr khan" zoya holding his shirt fell on the ground and only sound they can hear was asad shirt buttons falling on ground and which is masked by zoya crying out loud

Asad supported zoya to stand up and was about to hug but then tanveer who went out came home and asad noticed tanveer, dilshad and najma standing staring at them

He moved away from zoya and asked her "why Ms farooqui?" zoya gave him a confused look and asad continued asking her "why does it affect you so much? It should be my ammi and najma who should be affected the most but why did it affect you?" zoya lifted her head and "Mr khan because I lo..." Zoya stopped in mid sentence she looked at everyone face and ran to her room

Dilshad and najma were happy that zoya realized her love for asad but tanveer who witnesed this was shocked and was cursing zoya

Tanveer pov:-

Zoya!! Loves asad omg!! I have to do something before things get worst I have to talk separete these love birds I have to send zoya away from this house before she takes away this money

Asad saw zoya going to her room he looked at everyone and left to his room

Once asad went to his room and tanveer went back to her room "ammii!! Zoya loves our bhaijaan" said najma and dilshad replied "yes they love each other in fact zoya would have confessed if tanveer was not visible to her but thanks to allah!! Zoya is fine and I'm never going to follow your idea again "

IN ASAD ROOM:-

Asad Was in shower and was thinking about everything happened few minutes back, every word zoya told was printed in his mind and all he can think about is zoya and her words..

Asad went to his ward robe took out his gold chain went and sat on the sofa with the sofa which was beside his bed staring at it and unknowingly was smiling at it

Dilshad enterd asad room and saw asad holding chain and smiling at it and dilshad was happy looking at her son "asad" called dilshad and asad immediately try to hide the chain but failed

Dilshad asked "what is this asad?" and asad looked at his mom and said "it's a gold chain which I got it in my childhood" dilshad was confused and asked "childhood? you got? I'm not getting you?" asad moved so that his mom can sit beside him "ammii do you remember we saved a girl in burning bus and it belonged to her and it is with me since then" said asad

"you have it still with you ? its been so many years"asked dilshad with confused look

"ammii!! I don't know why but I feel this chain holds special place and it reminds me of that innocent girl and something keeps me going" said asad and dilshad was proud and decided to talk to him about the reason she came to asad room

"asad I ve a question for you?"said dilshad

"ammi you can ask me anything"replied asad and dilshad hesitated but it was about her son life and his happiness and decided to talk to him

"do you love some one?" asked dilshad but she saw how asad was lost

Asad was thinking about zoya and every thing that happened few minutes back and a smile appeared on his face, dilshad coughed "ahem!!" asad broke from dance "ji amm!!" said asad

"so you love, who is the girl?" asked dilshad waiting him tell zoya name.."I mean nahi ammi!! I don't love anyone"replied asad looking away from his ammi

"then look into my eyes and answer me" said dilshad asad turned towards his ammi but

Closed his eyes and said "no ammi!!" dilshad had enough and she wanted her son to realize his love

"then why did you smile?" asked dilshad and asad replied ammi "I always smile and how can you consider my smile as yes?" asked asad

"you were smiling before it was just facial expression but this time It was different asad, since your abbu left you never actually smiled but today you smiled from heart and you know when people smile from heart? When you heart feels happy that is when people smile from heart " said dilshad and got up from the sofa and was about to leave but turned back "asad love happens with the people you don't expect and remember opposite always attract and asad people love from heart and not brain in your case your heart knows but your brain is not ready to accept it and what ever is stopping you from accepting your love just forget about it and think from your heart and you deseve happiness asad and you'll be happy when you listen to heart and not your brain" said dilshad and left

Asad pov:-

"What ammi told me is correct but zoya does not have tammez and she wears jeans how can she be bahu of this house ?" asad inner feelings started talking"but remember since zoya came to your home your ammi is happy and najma is very close to zoya and in fact you started feeling that your happiness is back, zoya makes you smile, she makes you go mad, she fight with you and she saved your ammi who is your life, she makes you do crazy things for her and you feel happy about her, every morning you wait for her and you want to see her smile and you want to fight with her"

Zoya room:-
Zoya was sitting on bed and was thinking about the events that took place today
Zoya pov:-
"did I just say all those things to Mr khan? Omg!! I love Mr khan,, I love the person I hate the most and oh god!! I'm in love with Mr khan, I cant believe myself allah miyan!! I'm in love with akudu"

Zoya started jumping in her room "I love Mr khan" dilshad was goin to her room and went to check on zoya

Dilshad was happy seeing zoya confessing that she loves Mr khan in front of mirror and dancing and dilshad heard asad door open so she went and hid behind the pillar which was near zoya room

Asad went near zoya room and knocked the door but their was no response so he went and opened the door and saw zoya sitting near mirror holding a photo of asad,dilshad and najma and heard zoya telling "I love you" asad was really happy

Zoya got up from her place took out dupatta which was on her bed and started running around room holding it and playing with it and zoya try to get on bed but lost her balance and was about to hit ground but then asad caught her and both were lost in each other eyes

After few seconds asad started moving his hands on zoya cheek and zoya lifted her hand to touch asad cheeks

Both were busy touching each others cheeks and asad moved towards zoya cheek and was about to give peck but zoya broke from trance

"what are you doing?" asked asad
"allah miyan!! What wrong with you? You came to my room and asking what I'm doing?"replied zoya and asad was about talk

"waise bhi!! You use to scold me always that I don't knock door and what about you?" shouted zoya

"if you were not so lost in mirror you would have noticed that some one knocked the door" replied asad

"allah miyan!! How long you have been in my room? Were you peeing in to my room?"asked zoya who was worried that asad might have heard her talking about her feelings

Asad understood that zoya was worried "what were you doing in front of mirror? It seemed like you were talking to yourself I did not know that you are so self obsessed" said asad with smirk on his face

Zoya was happy that asad did not hear anything "Mr khan its not me its you who is self obssessed and Mr khan I'm feeling sleepy can you please go" repliedzoya and turned away from asad and smiled

"ji!!good night" said asad went out of zoya room and smiled

I'll take another 3 to 4 days before next update and

Next few chapters will be asya romance, and ayan and zoya friendship, zoya ammi truth

After that is the biggest twist you'll see completely different zoya and asad the main story start from that twist

Precap:- ayan introduction
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
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wow!!!
awesome!!
i loved childish zoya!!
asad was flirting!!!
zoya was confessing she loves asad like a small child!!
wow!!
awesome!!
zoya was about to sai because i lo..
awesome!!
do pm me!!
want to read how zoya's past revealed😆
asad have zoya's locket😊
love it😳👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
m waiting 4 tht twist jb yeh Asya ko childhood ka accident yaad aaye
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
Awesome part dearAwesome Roses
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
I loved a lot dear.. Thanks for the Pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
awsume part

mangalpuri zoe...oyye hoyye

want asya to knw dat dey have already met in their chilhood

cont soon dear
😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
After the drama...the confession...
Tanveer grrr...
Asad has the gold chain...and it still does give him comfort. ..
Ammi trying to make asad realise his feelings. ..
Zoya happy in her room...
Asad happy...and the bout starts..
Waiting for ayaan...
Thanks for the pm

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