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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#461

for part 19

wah wah kya song selection hai...perfect for the situation...dard bhi meri marz bhi...meri aashqui tu hi toh hai...

kehte hain na ".dard bhi tu dawa bhi tu..mera jeena ki har wajah bhi tu..."

.tujhse agar dard mile toh khuda se koi dua na mangoo...

tujhse agar dard mile toh khuda koi dua na mangu..

tu mujhe apni panah mein le...mein khuda ki janat bhi thukra doo...

zoya ke liye uski janat asad hain...chahe usne zoya ko kitna hi dard diya ho...use sakun...usi janat..uske har dard ki dawa bas asad hi hain...

i love the way asad is trying to sooth her making her comfort..as he himself knw...ki wahi hai jo usse wapis la sakta hain...

sleeping posture...loved it the way u describe...😳😳..

ayan-humeira scene...😆😆

asad ko hadiyan todni atti hain..ANDE nhi...

nikhat smart girl..steal imran's watch......

love the way he is loking at her...make her eat..on his lap...kiss her to make her more comfortable...wd his touch too...the way he looks at her...wd his one elbow down...ashiquo ke liye toh husan ka didar hi janat hain...zoya she is an angel...not jst by looks but by heart too..itna hone ke baad bhi ..uska dil usse hi phir se dillagi kr rha hain...usse hi khud pe hak de rha hain...oofff..YEH ISHQ...MITWA...ISHQ PE ZOR NHI...

the most pain full moment was...when asad feels the roughness on her back...HIS NAME...THT HE HIMSELF ENGRAVED ON HER...THT TOO WD KNIFE...

khud se bach ke kaha jayega janab..hum toh apka aaks hai jaha jayega humein hi payega...

asad is feeling like kill him self...for his monster act...but he knw he has to make her live again...make her happy again..make her again belongs to her...

love his dedication...YOU ARE MINE...ONLY MINE...

YEH LE MILLI...AAB KR DIYA REPLY...HOPE U LIKE IT...

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#462

Very beautiful .. update...

Very well written

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coolphool

@coolphool

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#463

It was ann aawww wala part 😳 ...awsome 😳 ...aur ye nikhat kya cheez hai bhalaa??mmm...main pata laga loongi 😆 ...agli update de do bus 😆 ...very nice part 😊

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princess101

@princess101

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#464

That was a amazing update waiting for ur next one :D

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Maryam Hassan

@mariam1368

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#465

Thank God she has started getting comfortable around Asad bt before i was like omg what will Zoya do when she wake up n saw him so close to her...
The way he was taking care of her was really fabulous
Great update dear

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Soumya

@Ceon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#466

Flawless updt jaan. AsYa scene ws sooo beautiful. Loved it.

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Milli bakshi

@MILII_BAKSHI

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#467

Originally posted by: ZUBIDUBI1
Razorvd 🤣

oh wow! MES!THS IS LIK WOW AMAZING!
Specialy tht fire effect! :)
finally bn hi gaya 😆STARTING FROM THE BEGINING!!! 😆those lines were a perfecctt hit to start wid... 👏👏👏👍🏼that was sooo beautiful ...d way u described zoya's sleeping posture...😳👏
after regret the spirited redemption from asad is worth reading...

a biiig applaud to asad for his audacity... 👏👏👏👏👏👏

awww NIKHAT DID IT PURPOSEFULLY..😲 ppooor girl...😭

RASHID is after her also ... gosh use grls se koi problem hai kya? 😡

sooo sweet he is cooking for her...😳

great going asad...👍🏼

loved his confidence...

haldi collar up scene was ... josh m hosh kho diye...

the way he fed her the way she responded was sooo serene SOOO BEAUTIFUL...

I was glued to it... it was really touchy filled with warmth n dhair saara love... 😳

MES u are really a MALIKA ... A FANTASTIC MALIKA OF WRITING ...😳👏👏👏👏

ACCEPT A BOW SWEET HEART...
MALIKA-E-SUSPENSE + MALIKA-E-WRITING
TUSSSI GREAT HO TOHFA QUBOOL KARO.. 😆

buhahaha...i love this three...😆

hmm so beuatiful comment ...

allah i messed up with word beautiful😆

anyways...sun i take my words back...i know u all luv me😳

athe aa jhappi paa🤗

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ZUBIDUBI1

@ZUBIDUBI1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#468

Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI

buhahaha...i love this three...😆<div>hmm so beuatiful comment ...
allah i messed up with word beautiful😆
anyways...sun i take my words back...i know u all luv me😳
athe aa jhappi paa🤗

dhanyavaad 😳 😆
*slow motion run* bg *duniya m kitni hai nafraten PHIR BHI DILON M HAIN CHAAHATEN!* 😆 😆 🤗
LOVE YOU HONEY! 🤗