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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

More mystery... to think no idea where it is going... but
continue updating...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mysticlover

I always love to read something from you!!
So bring the scary story onboard... :-)
Now this story became more interesting for me... Asad let go off some past memories for Zoya... Zoya should learn that... Asad is somewhere trusting her n she should give that trust back...
Ultimately, for me, this story is about blind faith people have on their relations...

shukriya😃...
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Posted: 12 years ago

sorry yar is baar sabko reply nai kar pai...yaar story likh di thi to socha post kar deti hu...please tum sab bura mankar specially pari jaan tu bilkul nahi bura mankar comment likhna band kar dena...

i m so sorrry frenz...maine sab padha..but my hands are itching to give update...so here you go...
PART 16
"dilshad aap..." he says as he feels his jaw droped ..
"haan main...itna chota kaam to nai kar paye tum...koi baat nai..do mujhe..file kaha hai?" dilshad says as she walked inside the room...
"zoya and humera are there inside...oh no!! now what will happen.." ayaan thinks as the door to asad room gets open and then the sharp sound echoed in the room before the immense silence...
"kaha kho gaye..." dilshad asked snapping her finger near his eyes..
"ah..no..nothing...y r u here?" ayaan asked as he got broked from his thoughts.
"the file...dumb!" a male voice answered from behind dilshad..
dilshad lips curved in to smile as she walked in the house pushing ayaan aside..followed my a male presence..
"aaap..." ayaan asked horrified...
without answering the poor guy this two new guest adujted themselves on the couch...

"what the..! aap yaha kyu aaye..." ayaan stood right beside with a worried and scared expresssion..he was annoyed it was clear..
"chill..dear my son called me up..." the male voice remarked..he was strong tall and heavy footy one..his voice low calm but damgerous ..his presence give you a feel of someone familiar whom we know..
"bhaijaan ?" ayaan raised his eyebrow and looked at the door to asad room in confusion...
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"haan plate lai tum...andar rakh do.." asad said as he was walking out of room in hurry, pressing few buttons on her phone he signed humy to feed her he will be back..
hummy turned to answer but he disappeared before that...
she looked at zoya who was still pale..she shook her a little and called her name "aapa..utho...have something to eat...then take medicine ..haan!" she said as she shook her again..
because of the cold water patti on zoya's forehead placed by asad ..zoya had now managed to get her little senses back..she looked around and saw humera sitting beside her caressing her hair and calling her name..
"asad..." zoya asked humera opening her eyes a bit ..the last time she got her sense was when asad tears were rolling down over her face..she looked at him once and then dozed off again...
"aapi...wo bahar hai.." humera smile as she answered...
humera helped zoya to get up and sit on the bed comforatbly , her back supporting the headboard of the bed..hummy placed a pillow on her lap and served the food..
" good work beta..m proud of you!" zoya was about to take her first bite when she heard someone saying this so loudly..
"this voice..." zoya shivered as she kept the plate with the pilow beside her and walked to the hall followed by hummy who was constantly asking her to rest and dont move..
zoya was about to open the door when she heard someone say again..
"I dont see why you both dont just move on ahead."the male voice remarked again..
"she is pregnant with my child, i cant leave her.." zoya heard ayaan saying...
not only this old lady dilshad was pissing both brothers off but this new gueest were irking them to no extent..
"dont be stupid...you wanted to calm your itching with her..you did! story ends!!...you dont need her anymore..."the male answered
"listen you want the file we have them ..take it and leave from here.." ayaan hissed bitterly
"oh boy ...looks like our kiddo has now grown up..." the male looked at him smirking.."but well u know...just droping your seed in some douche bag,..doesnt make you bigger than your daddy..."he said as he laughed ..
"ENOUGH!!" came a sharp command of Asad..."Not a WORD!"zoya heard asad voice in anger and rage...which definately burned more curiosity in her..she opened the door to take a quick look all the time humera supporting her form behind while zoya peeped outside..

Dilshad truned around to stare asd, seemingly missing the two girls standing behind the door.."cALM down. i'm sure they are good wh*re." the male winked at ayaan and then at asad sitting back on the couch he added.." give us the file...!"
"FILE...!!" zoya heard herself repeating it...she pulled her head inside and looked at humera..."do you know anything about file..!" zoya asked worried and panicked..
seeing her sister just made humera freak out..she chose to nod her head in yes...
"sh*t" zoya murmured beneath the breath..
"do you know where it is.?" zoya asked raising one eye brow..
"aha.."humera noded softly..."good ..get that file here to me...!!" zoya said looking at dot blank spot..
"but it doesnt have anything inside..its just a bundle of blank pages.." humera said genuinely..
zoya stood with a dumbfounded expressionon her face." i will get you out from here ..n you get that file to me now..before these two bro comes back to us...ok?
ok!" humera answered as zoya went to reach the broken window..she used her hand to break the small pieces off completely..the glass fell down to her feet which already had the blood stain of last night and few fresh drops added...
"careful.." zoya said as humera successfully managed to jump of the window as they were in ground floor and the hieght of the window was not much..
she turned her ear back to the door to listn to them more carefully..
"Mr.Rashid Ahmed khan...be in your limits.." she heard a sharp voice of angry asad..he sounded as if he would burst on rashid any minute..
"rashid? hubby of dilshad...dilshad works owner.." zoya found herself saying as her hands reach to cover her mouth and tears of unbelieve surfaced her eyes..
"you wanted that file ayaan will get you..you can burn all proofs to ashes..and then dilshad works will stand to first ..unbeatably..ayaan go get the file..." he said as he walked around the hall circling rashid and gesture ayaan to move out..
ayaan quickly moved out to the car to get the file while asad and rashid stood there alone..
"y dint you do what i asked to you?" asked rashid
"i will not do.."asad said lowering his eyes and then with a sharp gaze giving rashid a killer look..
"she is not at fault..." asad added..looking on floor again..
"doesnt matter...she is our enemy..story ends...kill her!" rashid orders..
"she is not our enemy..it gaffur who is our rival..m not gonna kill her and will not let any one do any wrong to her..you saved me ..i will always owe you..but i wont accept this order.." he said as her turned his back to rashid who was fuming in anger like anything..
Rgar was enough to set zoya on the edge.betrayal of ayaan was something she could bear but this was beyond her expectance her imagination...zoya got unsettled between new level of disturbing...
"does that mean ,...he was here only for that file...!" zoya broke from her thought as she saw ayaan and humera standing face to face and dilshad with the file through window..
"allah ...itna bada dhoka!" wo mission ...wo qubani..sari fake thi..." no ..no ..no!" zoya banged her head on the wall...she start to bleed and her head started to spin..

with that zoya collapsed on floor...
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"bachha...where are you?" rose called her out from the room...
a young girl walked through the door and stood right in front of rose..
"hmm..baji..m here..boliye kya kaam hai..or ye kya allah itni tabahi kisne machai.." nuzrat says while blankly staring at the bunch of papers who are murdered brutally...
" shoo...move out of my sight !" she said as she waved her hand..nuzrat walks away taking a piece of paper in hand...
"whats this?" she says...
"its a code.." rose responded without looking..
"no its our game... a very old one..which i and humera use to play..."
it took two seconds for rose to register the fact what just her dear sister said...its not like she was happy or sad but was like a fooled who had the key all the time hanging with him..still tortured to death...
"crap!" rose said as she stood up..she asked her sister to break the code and with in a minute it was out...
rose snatch the paper from nuzrat hand and read the lines.."sh*t i cant believe this? she found herself lost in the thought...
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"humera aap ye file ke sath kya kar rahi hai..?" ayaan confronted humera..
"a- a-ayan...wo main..wo m.." humera tried to search for word where her fingers were scratching each other ...she was nervous ..he understood..
"are you trying to lie me...well DONT" he said as he pulled her close to him..he passed the file to dilshad who was standing beside him..
"fantastic.." she said as she left him to enjoy..so what she thought!

"hmm..tell me ...you here...were you trying to steal it..haan?" ayaan retorted
"n..n.no.." she said not meeting his eyes..
"ayaan holded her hand and kissed on it.."whatever m doing is for you baby...i love you dont you forget that.." he said as he slipped his hands from her palm to her wait and leaned a bit to peck her lips..
humera dint felt something right ayaan pushed her more deepering the kiss and now her body was between car and him..
he pushed her on floor with a great force rolling there down when he saw few mens relection surrounding them ata distance with a gun in hand...damn they were attacked!
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dilshad came back with the file unaware of the attack which just took place...
"called nikhat off" was her line as she took her purse dug the file in it and stepped out of the house with rashid..
asad sighed in relief and locking the door after them ..he continued along his room..
the every memories of the mission mocked him till he felt obstacle behind on the floor..
he pushed a little and zoya's hand slipped a bit ...he could see her finger...what the? he thought...he pushed again this time carefully as not to hurt her again and as the door got open enough for him to enter..he picked up zoya in his arms heading towards the bed...
"zoya!" zoya!" he called her shaking her body under him...
as he turned to get her some water his eyes fell on the couple from the window who just stood there blank watching at something with fear and worry...ayaan had holded hummy's hand tight..and both had tears...
like something smell his nose and he quickly got back to zoya ...he picked her up again in carnaval style and moved toward the window..when he heard something..
"hello sir target is in front ..order to shoot.." the giant man said on walkie talkie with a gun pointing on asad and zoya..
"yes sir" the giant man again answered and slided the walkie under his pocket...he aimed asad and then the gun nose locked it over zoya in asad's arm...
asad turned to the window where now ayaan was holding hummy behind his back...and then he saw a white car brooming away not before a hand waving at him in a bye!
"rashid ahmed khan!" asad took his name in anger and disgust ..he looked at the man with whom a couple more mens had joined..
asad closed his eyes once...and then jumped on floor vertical making zoya fall with him.. they rolled to the left , behind cover."hummera!" asad heard a voice betweenin the air ..Gunfire errupted from every direction as the two couples themselves pinned to the spot by thirty or so Grinner...

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ok this was it frenz..i know its quite a long update..and phir se request lar rahi hu..dont sleep on lappy on mobile while reading it...
before leaving i would like to request everyone to wish my dear frend FIMMY AND AALOO for their bday...
fimmy i know its belated one..but dear aye durust aye...

zoobi dekhle aa gaya tera mangalpur...

lavlina thanks a ton...

milli😃
Edited by MILII_BAKSHI - 12 years ago
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Res :)
Unres

Ok! the file is with Dilshad and Rashid now
Nuzrat cracked the code in 1min??😲😲😲..What type of a game was it that they played in childhood???😕😕😕
I have started to like Asad now!!😊

So it were Rashid's men trying to kill the 4?? and Humeira is shot now???

p.s- did not sleep while reading😆😆😆
Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 12 years ago
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don't have words to say...
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res
unres...
gusssaa side coming to d update..😆
MILLLU MIND-BENDING UPDATE ISSE KEHTE HAIN...👏👏👏👏
this part was some sort of action update n I caaant tell you how much I enjoyed it...
it was like a reel playing infront of me...
ASAD IS THIER SON??
awww WATER PATTI!!! pure sign of care...
asad's tears... im sooo loving this... asad crying for her...
haaayeee
awww asad ... defending her... protecting her...
ohhh nooo she hit her head she must be badly hurt ni...
but how come ayaan betrayed her??
wooh d code is out... man rose kab se try kar ri thiii ... or is ne ek min me kar diya...
well obvio jab game khud hi bnaaya hai to ye to hona hiii tha...
aww ayaaan loves her dint he??
OMG!!! dishoom dishoom woow...
action sequence haan...interesting...
geeeks... mangalpur dahaaad ...
milllu love u 4 adding this...
wooowww im loving it...
ohh nooo did humera got shot? hope she dint !!!
kyun agar kise ke goli lage... agaarrr ... to wo srf zoya ke lagne chahiye... then asad will love her ool d mooree...
I know this is a weird thinking but I cant help it ... 😆
milluuu mere sar pe haath rakh ke kasam khaati hun... 😆
this was a
MIND BLOWING
WONDERFUL
ALLURING
GRIPPING
SUPPPEERRBB
FANTASTIC
EXCELLENT
OUTSTANDING
SPLENDID
A1
UPDATE... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
U R A GENIUS MILLU n mein MASKA niii maar riii I MEAN IT...
n haan wo horror story jaldi likh im waiting.. 😳
Edited by LuvUAsYa - 12 years ago
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ALLLAAAHH MIYAA I LOVE U MES... 😳🤗

MERA MANGALPUR...

mera mangalpur...MES thaaak youu...

haaaye im soo sooo happy sooo glad u gave me my mangalpur...😳

ooo MES thaaank u thaaank u thaaank u sooo much...❤️🤗

raaashid ahmed khan ? scoundrel...😡

haaye mein sadqe jaawan when he was shouting zoyaa.. zoyaa...

here i was shouting I LOVE U MES ... I LOVE U MES... 😳😆

woooww gun shots... 😃😆 i know tu soch ri hogi mein paagal hun...😆

waise sochna kya hai paagal to mein hoon hi... n IM PROUD TO BE A PAAGAL... 😆

yaaar i was sooo drowned in my mangalpur ke mujhe kuch dikha hi ni kuch anu samjh ni aaya kuch aur kya hai yah ni pta chala... mujhe to bas mera mangalpur dikh raha tha bas... ❤️

waise mein kya bole jaa ri hun?🤣

mangalpuri update ne mujhe OFFICIALLY PAAGAL kar diya 😳

BEST UPDATE EVER...

im seriously speechless MES... thaaank you loads this was an xcellent update ...


n yeah mere aaloo n fimmy...

wish you two A VERY VERY HAPPPY BDAY...
MAY U GUYZ HAVE A LOONG PROSPEROUS LIFE AHEAD WID LOADS OF FUN N ENJOYMENT... 😳🥳

MES waise this a gift for aaloo n fimmy but 4 me its no less than a most priceless gift.. 😳 thank you sooo much... 🤗
Edited by ZUBIDUBI1 - 12 years ago
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mera diya naam itna pasand aya ki official kar diya..😲🤣
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yaar just read previous two parts now... yaar, it was like reading a thriller novel, i could feel it happening in front of my eyes... it was jsut wonderful and most important was atleast both Asadand Ayaan turned positive and girls know they love them and will go to any extent for them...

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