|AsYa TS| We Met Again! ~ *Completed*

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

akaswan

@akaswan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Awesome love it continue soon and please pm me😊

Quote

Ayesha

@Aye12345

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Aw, this is too sweet yaar, honestly it's really good!! I love how they are so comfortable with each other and they said it so easily as if they have already said it 1000 times before (which they probably have over the phone) anyways, it's really good, looking forward to part 2!! Please update soon and if possible please can you pm me? Thanks a bunch!! x

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

That was too cute... Good work.. Looking Forward for the next part 😊

Quote

shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

No prob..tk ur tym ...dear

Quote

Tanya

@OceanicHeart.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Awww that was a really sweet OS

Continue soon

loved it !

Quote

SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

nicely written os cont. soon

they are quite freindly or rather cormfortable

lloved their closness

Edited by cutiesanya - 12 years ago

Quote

sonia555

@sonia555

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Nice start continue soon plz

Quote

Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Woman you frustrate me!!!

why don't you ever pm me any of your work!! I have to stalk to find your work .. if you have an index then send me the link now!!

Yeah I pressed the like button without reading because I know it will be an amazing piece of writing as usual..

I shall comment later when I read it 😃

--------------- EDITED ---------------

Omg how can you call that bakwaas??

See I was right in pressing the like button with reading the story.. 😉

You know when I was reading it .. It really reminded me of mujhse dosti karoge.. But to say the truth.. Obviously this was much better.. 😛

Using Asad's POV worked great!! The whole trip and his thoughts was just amazing.. The bond between Zoya and Afreen was beautiful.. If only there was a kid like that in the show.. 😆

All characters played a great role.. The girls teasing Asad reminded me of the episode when Zoya was back in the house and they were talking about Asad and Zoya's wedding 😆

A blushing and embarrassed Asad is a great sigt!! Especially she I can imagine it 😳

Then as usual the favourite has to be the AsYa moment 😳 To be honest I didn't really expect Asad to slide a ring onto Zoya's finger.. Was a great treat 😛 And Asad openly saying I love you.. And Zoya as well.. Hayeee

Amazing piece of work.. Now weagerly waiting for the next update 😳

Edited by x_Mishti_x - 12 years ago