|AsYa TS| We Met Again! ~ *Completed* - Page 5

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

Sis

Finally 🤗

The most awaited TS ❤️

I'll post my fav lines in this post and comment on the other

It was a great opportunity for a quick family trip. There are many reasons that I planned this trip.

Uhh.. 'Them'.. I mean Zeenat Aapi and her younger sister. The Love of my Life.
She is the Sole reason that I planned this trip. I had to meet her.

I knew a long time back that we had something between us.

I'll tell you another secret. Zoya doesn't know that we are coming. I informed Zeenat Aapi to keep it a surprise for her.

"Chill Aapi! I'm fine! Don't overreact!", came a sweet honeydew voice. I looked up and found HER completely drenched, wearing a bright red top and dark blue denims sticking to her body. She looked ethereal.
"CHILL??? WHAT CHILL?", barked Aapi.
"Aapi.. My Afreen baby should not get a cold. Main to waise bhi bheegti rehti hu! What's the big deal?", asked Zoya looking at Afreen and winking at her.
Afreen giggled.
"Haan haan.. Tu aur teri Afreen! Pagal ho tum dono!", barked Aapi.

Aah.. Hearing my name from her mouth felt heavenly.
I smiled and the next moment she flung her arms around my neck and hugged me tight. I wrapped my arms around her waist and pulled her into me.
The feeling of her being in my arms, so close to me after 8 years was something I can never express.

"Waise iss baar main soch raha hu.. I take you back with me!", i said.
Her eyes popped open and she gave me a wide smile.
I went down on my knees and got out a ring from my coat pocket.
"Will you marry me?", I asked looking up at her eyes which got teary.

I got up and pulled her to me. My hands went around her waist and her hands were on my chest.
"Now.. You don't have a choice!", I replied.
"I don't want one!", she replied and hugged me.

"Thank you Phupi.. Bala mere sar se to tali!", said Aapi with a smirk.
"I hate you Aapi!", said Zoya.
"Awww.. I know tujhe bhi jaana hai.. to zyada acting mat kar!", said Aapi looking at me.

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

Girl this was so cute

I could actually imagine it

It was breath taking



Asad was so perfect

I loved his character

They way he blushed

And the way he was so in love



Zoya was amazing too

Loved her rainy avatar

And of course they way she instantly recognized Asad



Can't wait for part 2

Originally posted by: Aye12345

Aw, this is too sweet yaar, honestly it's really good!! I love how they are so comfortable with each other and they said it so easily as if they have already said it 1000 times before (which they probably have over the phone) anyways, it's really good, looking forward to part 2!! Please update soon and if possible please can you pm me? Thanks a bunch!! x

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x

Woman you frustrate me!!!

why don't you ever pm me any of your work!! I have to stalk to find your work .. if you have an index then send me the link now!!

Yeah I pressed the like button without reading because I know it will be an amazing piece of writing as usual..

I shall comment later when I read it 😃

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Omg how can you call that bakwaas?? Can't I? 🤔

See I was right in pressing the like button with reading the story.. 😉 LOL 😆

You know when I was reading it .. It really reminded me of mujhse dosti karoge.. But to say the truth.. Obviously this was much better.. 😛 Hahaha.. Glad it was better coz I don't like that movie! 🤣

Using Asad's POV worked great!! The whole trip and his thoughts was just amazing.. The bond between Zoya and Afreen was beautiful.. If only there was a kid like that in the show.. 😆

I wish too... I have a feeling Zoya would be good with kids.. Just like she is with Tamatar! 😳

All characters played a great role.. The girls teasing Asad reminded me of the episode when Zoya was back in the house and they were talking about Asad and Zoya's wedding 😆

A blushing and embarrassed Asad is a great sight!! Especially she I can imagine it 😳

Ummm.. I agree.. I love blushing Asad too! A sight to see for sure! ☺️ ❤️

Then as usual the favourite has to be the AsYa moment 😳 To be honest I didn't really expect Asad to slide a ring onto Zoya's finger.. Was a great treat 😛 And Asad openly saying I love you.. And Zoya as well.. Hayeee

Amazing piece of work.. Now weagerly waiting for the next update 😳

Aww.. will update Part 2 next week... I mean sometime in the coming week! 😳 Love you! ❤️ 🤗

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

Why bakwaas? It was not bakwaas at all!! It was really sweet...I liked the love smitten Asad in this update 😳

pm me for the next update!!

Originally posted by: Applef

this is such a cute one..

I really loved the conversation between zoya and aapi..

they sound more like friends..

and very cute proposal it was..😳

update soon..

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Wow ...👍🏼
only world come out of my mouth after reading the ts ...😊
now waiting for the nxt part so update soon... .😊

Originally posted by: ABBY92

AWWWHHH, I loved how Asad and Zoya have not seen each other for the past 8 years and the moment they did, Asad proposed to her to make sure that this time she will go back to India with him and his family. Looking forward to the second part !!

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti

ur kidding me??? this is not bakwaas at all!!!😆

its BREATHTAKING!!!!...sooo different n yet sooo beautiful!!!👏❤️

Originally posted by: ara_000

awww dis is sooo sweet...! ❤️

i am in love wit this asad nd d way he was blushing was simply adorable

nd he is sooo much in love ❤️

zoya,awww she also recognised him instantly ❤️

lovely update mrinu 👏

loved it totally ❤️