SS:Reminiscing mangalpur. updated! ch5. pg29.(23/09) - Page 18

Originally posted by: rads73937

Wonderful part.

Loved it.

Thanx for the pm. Take care.

I just read all four parts and they're all excellent! I love how you describe exactly what Asad and Zoya are feeling; it's like they're so close and yet so far. it's beautifully written and of course it's up to mark! in fact it's beyond it 😃 thanks for the pm and continue soon!

It was nice!! Wonderful actually!!
Loved how both Asad n Zoya are trying to stay away from each other n couldn't...
Zoya is really like a child n Asad is fascinated by this child...

This was so beautiful...both asad and zoya fighting their inner desires was facinating and i was amiling throughout this update...😃

Originally posted by: Love-AsYa-4ever

I just read all four parts and they're all excellent! I love how you describe exactly what Asad and Zoya are feeling; it's like they're so close and yet so far. it's beautifully written and of course it's up to mark! in fact it's beyond it 😃 thanks for the pm and continue soon!

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

This was so beautiful...both asad and zoya fighting their inner desires was facinating and i was amiling throughout this update...😃

their conversation was so beautiful and the way zoya stopped asad and spoke her mind was amazing and asad thanking her was beautiful and zoya asking for icecream😆

great update

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

Super duper awesome. ..

Originally posted by: mysticlover

It was nice!! Wonderful actually!!
Loved how both Asad n Zoya are trying to stay away from each other n couldn't...
Zoya is really like a child n Asad is fascinated by this child...

Awesome update! What an anti-climax with Zoya insisting on icecream! She is such a cute child-woman! 😆