SS:Reminiscing mangalpur. updated! ch5. pg29.(23/09) - Page 17

Originally posted by: Asya_Maaneet

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What you talking about "not up to the mark" are you kidding me? 😲

I loved this chapter! ❤️ It was so cute and lovely to read! Asya running from their thoughts and feelings 😆 then the whole speech thing! So sweet! 😳

I think you did a fantabulous job! 👏

You are such a good writer, and I for one love reading your work ⭐️ 🤗

Thanks for the PM and please do update soon 😃

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti

Beautiful update!!!

wow..Asad said all those thing..although rudely..he did say that! i love it!!!❤️

me too i was like screaming...kiss her asad! oh come on zoya kiss him!!!😆

very beautifully written dr!👍🏼

Originally posted by: zoas91

awww thank you thank you thank you so much!

i wrote the entire chapter on me cell phone, too many errors . dont even ask :P

yes, i love the speech thing as well! 😃

thank you for the love and comment glad that i have readers like you to motivate me! 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Asya_Maaneet

Yeah I know what you mean, sometimes I get an idea and all I have is my cell to type it on. Mistakes don't matter, all is good! 😃

And I will be here for each update! 😃

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

She was like a kid sometimes, and a woman of the world at others. He loved the contrast and the combination. He thought he wanted to be with her, thank her for the happiness she spread in his family and in his life, he wanted to tell her she was beautiful, but she had to have her ice cream first.++

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Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

wow i ovd it epe d last part he wanted to tell her she was beautiful, but she had to have her ice cream first🤣