OS: A Weird Suhaag Raat UPDATED Part 3 on Page 7

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A little contribution from me, I enjoy all the stories and have been inspired by the talented writers to writre something, aplologies if it looks boring.


Part 1

Zoya exclaimed, " Mr Khan," took a deep breath while munching on slice of pizza, " you are lucky for me," sauce oozing down on to blouse.

Asad stood up with a napkin, "I can see that" and gently wiped the sauce.

"Mr Khan, today is my nikah and today I will meet my Abu."...the munching had stopped, reflection had begun, " You know what Mr Khan, I am so excited and so scared." Asad worrying that his fiance may get emotional, quickly held her by the shoulders, " And I am the luckiest man, Khuda mere upar meharbaan hai, " as he pecked her on her foreherad.

"Mr Khan, do you think Abu will come to Nikah? she asked innocently, " By the way, what should I say to him, I am so nervous." Ms Farooki, please get ready, remember your Abu called to meet you at 3 pm, and Mr Siddique is very punctual.

"Oh I am ready, dont you think so?, " For Asad, Zoya looked perfect, hair loosely flowing, emerald top, light makeup, her mom's earings and blue jeans. JEANS. " Ms Farooki, how can you be so foolish, go and change, " but I am comfortable" came the reply

"ok fine, but if he chides you are being batameez, I will not tolerate"

Zoya quipped, "Ok this is the end of my freedom, first my husband against jeans now my Abu." Asad could understand Zoya's anxiety and mood swings were due to nervousness in meeting her father. " You look too hot, and I love it, but..."

"Ok" Zoya interrupted,

And quickly changed into a white kameez, and was unusually quiet. Elsewhere in the house very light decoration was done for a simple Nikah.

Shortly Asad parked his car next to Mr Sidiquis, and he could see his aristocratic figure seated on the park bench, with back facing them. Asad loving took her dupatta and covered her head, she looked so angelic. He squeezed her hand reassuringly

"Go Zoya, meet your Abu," were his last words. He watched Zoya walk slowly and look back to him at least a dozen times. As much as he loathed Mr Sidiqui, he loved Zoya more, and was confident that Mr Sidiqui will reciprocate.

Asad looked up and prayed that Allah give him strength, no matter what the outcome.

He was proud of his strong and brave Zoya, and in a few hours they would be united as man and wife.

From a distance, he could see Zoya approach Mr Sidiqui and she offered him her respects.

Asad could only see Zoya's face. And it was not a happy one. After two minutes she was crying. Asad had enough, he made his way to them, and saw Mr Sidiqui wave his finger to her accusingly. Zoya looked broken, and did not say a word, Mr Sidiqui stormed out not even acknowledging Asad who glared at him.

Zoya was deeply broken by the conversation, her feet seemed to slip away and she slumped into Asads' arms. " Asad, I ', and she started to cry piteously.

"What is it, he doesnt approve of our nikah," he demanded, she shook her head, "he does not know about the nikah, he said I was, I -I am" he consoled her. Kissed her head soothed her hair, " Its ok Zoya, he doesnt know what he has left behind. Dont worry, dont let your past stand in your way, especially if its so horrid, and lets go to our future, Maulvi sahaab will be there and we need to get ready. " asad helped Zoya to her feet and led her to the car. He clenched his fists in fury, and wished that Zoya had no relations with that awful man. Throughout the way, she kept sobbing, Asad asked' : do you want to talk' " No she sniffled.


Part 2 on this same page!


Part 3 on Page 7 link:

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice... continue soon ❤️
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Aww this was very very very nice :)
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part 2


Soon they arrived at Khan Villa, but it took Zoya a lot of effort to get out of the car, and Asad could sense she was really shattered. He helped her and could feel her very cold to touch and pale. As he led her Najma came running, "Zoya Bhabhi- oops Zoya, you are not having cold feet, are you", She joked.

Zoya put up a weak smile, Asad instructed Najma to get Zoya ready.

In an hours time, Zoya and Asad had a beautiful nikah although Zoya was a bit lost. Asad had explained everything he understood to Dilshaad and she was very thoughtful and supportive. Aapi could not make it.

Najma seeemed to have forgotten Imran and was her bubbly self.

After the Nikah, Asad went to his room, and waited. Nazma came in and started decorating the bed with roses. " Not like that give them to me. " With precision Asad made the most amazing bed for suhaag raat. Najma's teasing was not distracting him, Bhaijaan, aap Zoya bhaabi ko miss kar rahe hai nah? " No am busy, I have a lot of work to do, he started doing the flower curtains, " Najma was assisting and was impressed with Asad's handiwork. After an hour she ran out to see what was taking so long.

Zoya was not in her room...

Najma screamed Ami, and Dilshad called out, Najma went to Ami's room where she was massaging Zoya's head on her lap.

"Bhaijaan appko miss karrahe hai, she said cheekily. Dilshaad said that Zoya had a headache.

" Mr Khan!, Phupi I better go, otherwise he will get angry" Dilshaad kissed Zoya's forehead and bid her farewell.

Meanwhile, Asad was worried about Zoya's condition, she had not eaten and was unusually quiet, he had to think of something to distract her


"Idea!"

Zoya made her way to Asad's room, mind very disturbed from the afternoon. AS she pushed the door open, the room was decorated with candles, and Asa'ds bed was the most beautifully decorated with flower curtains reaching the ceiling.

She exclaimed in joy. "its so beautiful. Mr Khan! she did not see him, Aha, there he was in the middle of the bed, she pushed aside the flower curtains to see him. But he had his head down, his arms around his knees, Zoya was worried, was he sick?

Mr Khan, ... Asad, are you ok? She touched his shoulder, he looked up and even in the dim light, it looked like Asad was blushing. Zoya was delighted." Mr Khan you are shy.

" No I am not. Najma went out of her way to make all this silly arrangement, flowers and candles," he scoffed, " how childish. "

Zoya was back to her old bubbly teasing mode. " Mr Khan, you have to admit, you are shy, Asad nodded slightly and Zoya jumped up on the bed, with shoes and all.

"Yeah Mr Khan is shy.!!!!" Asad stood up as well, their heads touching the roof of the flower curtain.

"Ms Farooki what are you doing, get down now!"

she jumped down and did a weird dance," I am not Ms Farooki anymore!".

"Enough, too much!" Asad showed her the couch, there, your pillow is there, I want to sleep."

It was incredibly hard for Asad to maintain this act, as she looked incredibly sexy in red ghagra choli, but it was working, he knew she could have been otherwise remorseful, and he was ready to do anything to get her happy.

Zoya's eyes widened in disbelief as she saw Asad lie on the bed. " Alla Miya whats wrong with you?! Aap kaise insaan hai. You dont want to share your bed with your wife, I am going to tell on you to Phupi

On her way out, she saw two glasses of badaam milk and all this commotion made her hungry. Asad smiled as she gulped down one and she hungrily eyed the other one, then she drunk it too!

She was going out of the room when Asad shouted, "Well ok, enough nonsense suit yourself."

As Zoya came towards the bed she saw him take all the pillows and divide the bed, there thats your side, he instructed, she was not amused, and took a pillow and hit him with it.

"Allah Miya whats wrong with you. are you having cold feet, "

" I dont think I am ready to take this relationship forward, said Asad with shyness.

Zoya was over the moon.By now she was cracking up and this pleased Asad.

"Ok I better not tease you." she said playfully, but you know what, phupi told me she wants grandchildren, and I cant do it by myself, she added naughtily.

" They will have to wait for few years,Khudha haafiz Good night" said Asad turned his back to her.

" Few years," Zoya was by now ready to do anything to get Asad's attention. ( Maybe he had a bad experience with Tanveer) she thought, well I better do something about it.

" Mr Khan, get up, those clothes are so uncomfortable , how can you sleep in those, it was a gold sherwaani with plenty of buttons around the neck. And he didnt even remove the cap from his head!

" Its ok the buttons are hard to take off, I am tired," said Asad sleepily but Zoya helped Asad sit up and took off his cap and unbuttoned his top, he smirked to himself, what a lousy excuse. As she helped him, his well toned six pack was revealed, he quickly grabbed a pillow to cover his chest.

Zoya was really laughing heartily. " This was the laughter Asad wanted to hear.

Asad appeared to be upset and got up to wear a kurta. Zoya was besides him and huskily asked "tell me the truth are you nervous, because you have never done it before", Asad looked down and nodded

Zoya jumped on the bed with glee and said, That makes two of us, but dont worry Mr Khan I have done research on this, and in fact for the past one week I have been searching on the internet on all the difference types of love making and I have the beginners guide for honeymooon in bliss .

"Really Miss Faroo, I mean Zoya, you know all about it?" asked Asad in an OTT surprised look, in his mind he was happy as the distraction seemed to be working.

"TRUST me!," I know all about it, come here she took him by the hand and recalled what she had researched.

Part 3 coming up soon.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome 👏
hahahaha... Asad Playing Shy Wife n Zoya Husband 😆 Update Soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haha only Zoya can do this.. So cute😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Simply sweet! PM me for the next part! Thank youu :)))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: irock321

Simply sweet! PM me for the next part! Thank youu :)))



Thank you 😳

but I have difficulties in writing passionate romantic OSs
I like suspense and mystery

but the recent turn of events changed me a bit 😲

but i dont know whether I can write something HOT and steamy


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Originally posted by: B3ll321

Haha only Zoya can do this.. So cute😆



certainly 👏

thats why we love her so much 😆
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Originally posted by: Santhu.The.King

Awesome 👏
hahahaha... Asad Playing Shy Wife n Zoya Husband 😆 Update Soon 😃



Thanks, after I saw QH the last time, I kinda dreamt about them, found it weird so thought of giving my weird dream a name 😳

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