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Posted: 12 years ago
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For me the most weird thing is that Zoya had 2 glasses of almond milk

Rumored to have aphrodisiac effects
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3

Shy Asad, Naughty Zoya...


Asad looked at Zoya who clasped her hands with joy, she was about to share her one week research with the man she loved. Asad on the other hand hoped that it wasn't some cheap po*n, stuff his employers used to drool over at during lunch break; stuff he considered sinful and banned from work.

For Asad, making love was a special moment, a moment he had dreams of a very beautful dream where two souls become one entwined with love, he was not ready to jump on the back seat of a car and have hot sex like a teenager. Asad wanted it to be special moment, where he and Zoya could have mutual attraction, what was happening here was distraction, to make her forget her past.

She got her iPad, " Mr Khan, you wont believe it, this App is called Beginners Guide to Marital bliss, its a good title nah?" Asad nodded doubtfully. They were both seated on the couch, side by side with ipad on either's lap. " You know Mr Khan, this App cost me only $4 and it is 8 GB, it took me 3 days to download," she complained

Asad glanced at his watch- 10 pm, and 8 GB of marital bliss, he stroked his forehead, if they were lucky they could sleep by 4am. Asad was careful to keep his hands to himself, as he knew that it took only one touch of his to get Zoya aroused. And that would foil his plans for a perfect honeymoon in the future, as opposed to this weird honeymoon.

He decided to play along with her fantasy, and lo and behold as the app started, teddy bears were dancing along with birds. Zoya let out a confused laugh, and peered at the screen as to make sense.

But as usual she was positive, " Mr Khan how do you like it, look dont they look cute? " Asad wanted to be sarcastic but humoured her," Zoya its beautiful, what is it? have you watched it before?

" Allah Miya! whats wrong with you Mr Khan, couldnt you see that for the past week I was so busy, had so much preparation to do, I did not have time for this, but dont you think its nice that we can see it together, please consider it a wedding gift?" she added with a puppy face.

Asad nodded and smiled with satisfaction, at least he was not going to see some distasteful cheesy po*n, as this App was developed by a Christian fellowship who portrayed God's creation and how we living beings are part of His big world and could live in harmony and experience marital bliss by following His commandments.


The graphics were lovely, water trickling down, flowers blossoming, and most of all Zoya's non stop commentary, " Look Mr Khan, look! isnt that pretty, Mr Khan what do you make out of this, Mr Khan, look this is a cute puzzle- questions and answers on whether your marriage was made in heaven, we have to play." And play they did, and they scored high scores,


Asad was actually enjoying himself. He realized that not a moment can be dull with Zoya, no matter how boring it may seem. He felt blessed having her in his boring and dull life.

She snuggled up to him and he was so content, when suddenly she became quiet, he looked at her she had fallen asleep with her mouth open as if saying something. Beautiful butterflies were fluttering on the ipad screen, Asad joked to himself that maybe the love making demo may come in the next 2 hours, and closed the App. He was fiddling around when he went to settings:

safe browsing for Children was turned on,

"Oh so thats why Zoya could not access any adult sites, " Asad thought

He brushed off the hair on her forehead and kissed her, " My bholi Zoya"

Actually Zoya had turned safe browsing on when she gave the ipad to Najma to use 2 weeks ago but forgot to switch it off. As a result every internet search on love making was unadulterated , like a child's mind. He switched ipad off, and recalled how shattered and broken she had been after meeting Mr Sidique few hours ago. SHe looked so peaceful now

As he got up, he got a scratch on his hand by the heavy work of her ghagra. He decided to change her in something comfortable.

the room was dark as he did not want to disturb her sleep, therefore with difficulty he unbuttoned her choli, and undid her gahgra, and finally got her limp body into one of his pyajamas and kurta. He placed her on the bed and lay besides her.

Zoya was restless in her sleep so he took her in his arms and cuddled her, that seemed to settle her.

Asad felt that he might have to fill in the void left by Zoya's Abu, so she does not crave for a father's affection.

AS he recalled she was very innocent and child like, as children drink milk before sleeping, , so did she, and as children hear bed time stories and sleep, so did she, and as children are put into their pyajamas so was she, and as children are tucked into bed, so was she.

Asad lovingly spoke to her," Zoya I will be there for you, however you may need me, and I will make sure that all your anguish and pain is totally gone". Only after he could make her forget her father, will he get intimate with her, he decided. He wanted to help her transit from her trapped childhood fantasies, and it will take time. Otherwise a sudden transition may lead to abandoning responsibities, a major cause for couples to split and making lives havoc for their children he reasoned.

Saying this, Asad closed his eyes and slept with Zoya in his arms.




Thanks for reading and commenting 😊


Part 4 the real honeymoon 3 weeks later, coz gutter mode is difficult😆

my other writings

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3591388&TPN=4

this was my most graphic and nasty piece of work, with a twist at the end😲


Edited by rakshaanra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Ok this one was cut!!!!
but what do you mean by 3 weeks later????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved it.
Best part - He was fiddling around when he went to settings:
safe browsing for Children was turned on,
"Oh so thats why Zoya could not access any adult sites, " Asad thought
He brushed off the hair on her forehead and kissed her, " My bholi Zoya"

AS he recalled she was very innocent and child like, as children drink milk before sleeping, , so did she, and as children hear bed time stories and sleep, so did she, and as children are put into their pyajamas so was she, and as children are tucked into bed, so was she.

Gosh this is so QHian 😳 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww so sweet...

Very much beautiful
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its cute and nice
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part as well
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWWHHH, Zoya is so like a child and I love how Asad's main concern is to make sure Zoya comes out of this turmoil first before moving forward in their relationship.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dis was amezing. I like the part where Asad cuddle her in his arms. Grt work. Updt asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was just superb... Loved d whole part... Pls pm me when u update n continue soon...



~JAZ~
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

I loved it.

Best part - He was fiddling around when he went to settings:
safe browsing for Children was turned on,
"Oh so thats why Zoya could not access any adult sites, " Asad thought
He brushed off the hair on her forehead and kissed her, " My bholi Zoya"

AS he recalled she was very innocent and child like, as children drink milk before sleeping, , so did she, and as children hear bed time stories and sleep, so did she, and as children are put into their pyajamas so was she, and as children are tucked into bed, so was she.

Gosh this is so QHian 😳 🤗




thanks, you are so kind

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