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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: webuser7
👏 👏

I loved it! I have been hoping that both will move on to 1st name basis. While Asad sometimes says Zoya, he slips back into Ms. Farooqui. Zoya on the other hand is stuck on Mr. Khan. Uff! Even I felt her thank yous seem a bit out of place when they are irrevocably in love. Especially the way she says it! Hope to see your version tomorrow.

Although, I think he's returning her earring!! 😉

Thanks so much for the lovely comment dear!!! Yeh hua toh nahi, par kam se kam Zoe ne kal ke epi mein first name basis pr aane ka question toh uthaaya... par yeh thank you kene wali baat par meri OS sach huyi na! Par direction ulta pad gaya... Asad kehta story maein, par Zoe kehti hai show mein! Par KaBhi toh hum dono ki prediction sach hogi!

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: niharikapriya1
awesome👏👏

Thanks!

Originally posted by: sweetnandu
Awesome..

Thanks!

Originally posted by: AAK0007
Very nice

😃 😃 😃

Originally posted by: shonajain
wow it was luvely...luved it kaash Aaj yahi Ho!!!!

Thanks yaar! Par nahi hua!!

Originally posted by: krishna_str
lovely..Superb os👏👏

Thanks so much!

Originally posted by: Asya_KaJen
that is a lovely OS What a wish hayye

Thank you dear!

Originally posted by: Shubh007
Awsome os... 😊

Thanks!

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Lovely thanx for pm do pm me for your next work

Thanks and welcome!

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: irock321
DAMN AWWW SHIT! I think I melted in a pile of goo! Loved this OS! Beautiful! I can't wait for tomorrow's episode! If this seriously happens then Damn ...you sho shmart! loll 😆

Awww thanks so much!!! Par yeh toh nahi hua... me not sho shmart!😆

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: lDirectionerl
*FANGIRLS* You are so awesome girl, this was freakin' fantastic!
I loveddd this part-
"Zoya blushed deeper as she realised the meaning behind his words. She took a deep breath before replying "Qubool hai... Asad."
Asad closed his eyes and inhaled deeply... and let the feeling of hearing his name from her lips sink into him. The way his name rolled off her tongue... his name had never sounded so beautiful before...
"Phir se bolo Zoya."
"Asad" She raised herself on her toes and whispered into his ears, just as he had done.
His breath hitched in his throat as he heard his name from her lips again. It was difficult to control himself anymore... he wrapped his arms around her and buried his nose into her sweet smelling hair. "Mujhe aaj se aise hi bulana Zoya..." he whispered." 😳

Please do write more!

And I'm fangirling on your comment!!! Thanks so much hun! And this coming from a such an awesome writer as yourself makes it all the more great for me!!

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: skavya
Ohhh!!!! sooo sweet...
I wish this will happen in episode..
anyways i feel like watching it all the way...
loved it !!!!
Thank u so much for pm

Thanks so much for the lovely comment dear!!! Par yeh toh nahi hua! KaBhi na KaBhi toh hoga... hopefully😆

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
loved it

Glad you did!

Originally posted by: arnav26
That's so sweet!! Hope this happens in the actual episode😊 Loved it!!

Nahi hua na yaar!!

Originally posted by: sasir
nice.

😃😃

Originally posted by: Linsie
That is super cute... zoya calling asad ... nice

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi
nice..

Thanks.

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: sohu_ksgian
Srija come let me hug you!!🤗
This is soo cute and romantic!!! I so so want this!!
This is the first time you wrote something romantic?? Like really?? Doesnt seem so!!😳
FANTASTIC

Sohu didiii!!!! 🤗

KaBhi toh yeh hoga... par ab toh nahi hua na!

Thoda thoda try kiya... looks like successfull ho gayi!!

Thank you sho sho sho muchhiieee!!!

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Pooja

@pooja_shineStar

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

superbly cute!:))

loved it:)

sorry for the late comment...

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: nknaini
nice os just luv it thanks 4 the pm

Thanks and ur wlcome!

Originally posted by: jazsidhu
hey tis is really superb... amazing... beautifully written... thx fr the pm...

Thanks yaar!

Originally posted by: srilu_123
amazing

Thanks

Originally posted by: DancingDiva.
LOVED IT SO MUCH Srija Fabulous work girl :D

Thanks so much Nisha!!

Originally posted by: sheilasandhu
Lovely thought and how i wish the stupid gutterwali writers read this and take on the idea.😆😆

Nahi liya re... par show ke writers itne bhi bure nahi hain yaar! the scene they gave was really great!

Originally posted by: Chipmunks.
Awesome :)

Thanks!

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: shraddha.m
mashallah.. sooo romantic yaar... mujhe nahi pata tha sirja itni acchi romantic post bhi kar sakti hai..😉 i mean tum toh mujhse bhi choti ho n still u can write verry well.. mai bhi shayad itna acha kabhi na liikh paau..👏👏👏 asad ki kitni cute si wish thi.. really loved it.. dil khush kar diya..😊❤️ thankk uuu... next part jald hi post karna plz..

Shraddha! 🤗 aap mujhse badi ho? yeh to pata nahi tha... ab se aapko didi bulaungi main fir toh!! I'm sho happiee aapko yeh achha laga!! Aur firse Sirja?! Chalo maaf kiya par ab se sirf Sriju bulana... okay??