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Mrinalini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
hope errors are fixed by morning

Did you get errors while posting CS? 😕 I will read that kal! 😳

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Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Did you get errors while posting CS? 😕 I will read that kal! 😳

yes quotes ones... but i write dialogues in bold toh i managed

but the single quotes.. i think i have missed few

tell me when you read it

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saku

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

nyc update

thax 4 da pm 😊

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
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Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

"Bunty! Change your clothes and come out!", he shouted.

Loved Asad's caring nature

"Why the hell are you behaving like a damn pregnant woman? Ek pregnant lady ke bhi utne mood swings nahi hote honge jitney tere hote hain Bunty! Stop fooling around with me!", barked Asad.

Asad's outburst... Surprising

"Damn you Chintu! It's my BIRTHDAY today! And you forgot!!!!", she shrieked.
"I forgot??? I had planned a surprise this evening and you have been just fooling around shrieking your lungs out at me, not bothered what I would feel! I have had enough of your mood swings Zoya!", he shouted and retreated to his room leaving a shocked Zoya behind.
Zoya plopped on the sofa and has a small mind talk cursing herself, "Allah miya! Ye maine kya kar diya? I shouted at Asad for this? He had planned a surprise! Shit shit shit!!! What did you do Zoya? You know na.. Asad can never forget your birthday! He might forget his own but not yours!"

Aah.. A small fight... Zoya drove Asad crazy

She pushed him onto the bed and sat on top of him.
"I'm sorry! Very sorry! Super sorry!", she said like a little child.
Asad smiled at her innocence and smiled. He said, "Pagal ladki!"
She fell on him and hugged him tight. "I love you!", she sqealed
He wrapped his arms around her, "I love you too baby!", he replied.

So cute this was

Suddenly Zoya felt something poking in her belly, her eyes shot up in shock. She rolled to the other side and fell on the bed. Asad realized what happened and got up immediately.
"What was that?", she asked nervously.
"Exactly what you think!", he replied.

Oyye hoyye... Abhi se yeh haal

"And what's my surprise?", she squealed.
"Wait till the evening! You'll get to know!", he winked as Zoya smiled.

Waiting

Want to know wat was my first reaction when I finished reading this part??

It was that's it

It is so short

This was amazing, superb, fantastic, terrific, awesome, fabulous and the list goes on

Perfect and Flawless update

I love Chintu and Bunty

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 12 years ago

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Ayra Nuzhat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#256

Res

lol..i had the chance to res 1st again..😆

Unres

Amazing Update!!

Thank you so much for dedicating it to me🤗..Main to itni khush ho rahi hun jaise maine hi update likha ho😆😆

What I loved -

Chintu trying to manaofy bunty in the beginning because he cares😊

Bunty cursing Chintu at first but then realizes why he said so.. because he is 28😉😆

Zoya and her mood swings like a pregnant woman😆 and their cute fight!!😆

Zoya's turn to manaofy Asad...with her 'Sorry Na' and 'I'm sorry! Very sorry! Super sorry!'

and ...and... and 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️

What was that?", she asked nervously.
"Exactly what you think!", he replied.

I just love their comfort level yaar!!

Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 12 years ago

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Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

Res
lol..i had the chance to res 1st again..😆

So sweet of you to wait ❤️

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

So sweet of you to wait ❤️

Done 😃

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-Prinky-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#259

Sooo sweet it was !!!!!!

loved their cute fight...

looking forward for asad's surprise...

continue soon...

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MsfairyCindreLa

@MsfairyCindreLa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#260

amazing
loved it..
do pm me ,wen yu update next part pls.

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