Asya in Shimla. . .! Part#6 Updated (page 27) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ahhh...amazing...
loved the concept...
smwhat similar to twilight...
if its to be,, then do add smthng difrent to line too...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ahaan,, thnks to alll 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

n maliaa! thnks for the complement

n snehalparab thnks,,, karan tacker is awsome choice...
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Nice update..:-)
But to be frank don't knw why i got reminded about twilight's first part...
No offense dear...:-)
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Its intresting update ...😊
Looking forward for nxt part and try to use english little more...😊
So update asap and pm me when u update... 😊 😊
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thnks to alll... 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

n twilight twilight... wait kr lo... thora sa... 😒
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Scene 1: In Business School

Zoya Prov:

"Allah Miyaan! yeh jesy bell ka hi wait kar raha ho, strange man he is.."

I was standing near my bench, n then started packing up my bag, a girl in black tights n yellow shirt came and started introducing herself..
"hey, u Zoya Farooqui?"
"yeah!... n you?"
"hey, I am Pinky..!"
"hello!.."
"would you like to go to cafe with me?"
I became somewhat astonished 😕
"yeah.,, why not?"
she smiled..😊 n we started walking towards cafe..!

"so You are from New york?.. yahan kis k pas ae ho?"
I gave her a suspicious look, "Jeeji our...ummm... jeeju hotay hain...!"
"oh woww... shimla ghoomi?"
her frank behaviour was very doubtful for me...
"nooo...! I'm up here last month and due to some reason.. I could not "
"ohh!... acha.. this is such a nice place...late kyun join kia?"
"what?" now she was teasing me..😡
"2 months o gye to main pooch rhi hun.."
"aisay hi, jeeju nain kaha k BBA kr lo, phir main ghr py bore oti thi is liye..."
I wasnot looking at her, cox she was annoying me..
she stoped.. n came infront of me... N stoped me... "look Zoya!"
"aaa... haan?"
"I know I am annoying you, but I love to make new friends, so Can we b friends?"
"umm...yeah" I gave her a smile😊
"dont b confuse.. Zoya!"
we again started walking..

"You know what ZOya? Thanks God!,, kuch problem nhi hua.." 🥱
"wo Kyun?"😲
"you Were sitting with Mr. Akroo Ahmad khan!"
"who?"
"Asad Ahmad Khan!, who was sitting with you in the lecture, aj tak us kay sath koi nahi beth paya.. But Zoya Farooqui nain kar dikhaya..he use to be sitting alone on that bench after... ughh leave...!"
she gaggles...
"koi nahi beth paya kyun?"
"I have listened.. do saal pehlay us ki life main kuch aisa hua, tab sy wo kuch aisa hi ha, apnay pas kisi ko nhi anay daita, infact akeilay hi bethta hai.."
"par jab apni family k sath o ga, to khudi daikh laina...!"

We entered in cafe, n he was sitting with a girl n a guy, I don't knw who was that guy n a girl...!
we went to a table of pinky's friends...
Pinky was literally shouting...
"guys, meet my new friend, Zoya farooqui," 😃
I was so nervous.. every body started welcoming me, n they were behavng like there is some party, 🥳 lots of hooting n clapping for me,, oH God! that was amazing, i was smiling.

"wait, wait, wait! Zoya!..." she started introducing them one by one!
"zoya! this is Fahad,!"
"dnt worry! Pinky! we met before!.."
"yeah!" I whispered..!
"oh great! n Zoya! this is Tia.. fahad's friend...i mean something more than a frend not to be mentioned !"😉
"hey Zoya!.." "hey!"
"This is Rohan!.. tasha, n Nadia!"
"helllo!" I smiled n fahad arranged a chair for me, n I sat down with them!...

I was not comfortable with them,😕 but Pinki was such a nice girl, I felt today, i will get bore, if i would b alone.. but they were so nice ppl.. they gave me such a nice company!...
I was not paying attention, cox they were doing their usual jokes n fun xtra xtra... 😆 😆
😆
"Zoya! so tell me.. Would you like to eat something?" pinki pointed me! n tried to involve me in their jokes..
"yeah!.. I am feeling hungry!."
Fahad interfared.. "zoya! ao kuch lay k atay hain!,,"
everybdy started laughing.. n i was watching their expressions..
"ummm..."
Tia: "fahad! mje tm sy kuch kaam hai, tm ruko, pinki jati hai na!"
"han han main hi jati hun," pinki leaves the chair, n comes near to tia n smashed over Tia's head... "dont be overpossessive..!" 👎🏼

then pinki n me went to the shop n buys something...
"Pinki! aik baat poochun?" 😵
"haan poocho na!"
"yeh Mr. Asad Ahmad khan!.. is k sath aesa kia... I mean... ummm.. aesa kia hua jo wo aisay behave kr raha tha?"
"yeh janny k lye ap visit karain www.mr.asadahmadkhan.com" she giggles...😆
"hahaha, nhi aesy hi poocha.."
"Zoya, he is mad, I mean he is a pshyco person, dont even think about him.."
"oh. nhi, pinki! bus aisay hi poocha!..."

Pinki, fahad, tia pictures...

Pinki:


Fahad:



Tia:




Scene-2:
Outside of School

I was waiting for my jeeju! 😕
aftr 20 minx he arrived, firstly I was so angry with him.. but aftr sometime, he told me there is some surprise at home...
n then I started telling him, that how was my day!.. n then I was very excited for my surprise...
we reached home.. I saw a new shiny silver chevrolet in porch...😛



"jeeju! kon aya hua ha?"
he smiled "khudi daikh lo.."
that was suspense for me, 😕

I entered in home.. jeeji was in sitting room.. n reading some lifestyle-cooking magzine..
"jeeji!..."
"aray zoya tm aa gai?.." (closing mag)
I threw my bag n placed I-pad on table...
"aj boht thak gai..!" I laid down on sofa..
suddenly I get up.. "jeeji! kon aya ha?"
"koi b nhi kyun?"
"wo bahir gari khari hui thi..shiny car??" I whispered sleepishly 🥱
"ummm... nhi to koi b nhi aaya.."
"acha.. mje lga new york sy koi mere liyae..." I stopped..

"Yeh catch kro zoya!" Jeeju entered in room n threw keys n I catched the bunch.
"yeh kia ha?"
Zeenat: "kia Anwar?? aisay dain gain?"
jeeju came n satdown with me..
"jeeju? whats this?"
he was smiling n that was very really annoying 😕
"bahir jo car ha na?" Jeeji startd telling me
"wo Tumhari hai!" jeeju interferd 😉
I literally shouted and jumped out of mae seat...



"oh My God!...jeeji woww,,,! awsome, superb..."
they both were smiling, 😊
jeeji gave me suggesstion
"ab yahin khari rho g? ya bahir ja k check bhi kro g?"
"ofcourse check kroon g!"

i reached back to the porch,, watching my brand new amazing car awaiting for me..
"Jeeju! thank you so much for this. I luvd this surprise..! thnks alot"
"ur jeeju was asking a suggestion to give u a welcome back gift...then main nain anwar ko bola k zoya ko is ki zurart hai, ab roz roz tmharay jeeju thori na tmhain chornay lainay ja saktay aj b late o gaye.."
I hugged jeeji! "thnk you so much"
"acha ab chalaany b aati ha ya nhi?" jeeju tried to cover this emotional moment! 😳
"umm.. newyork main to drive kr laiti thi yahan ka nhi pta"
"then lets go for a ride...!"
"yeah why not!.."

we left for a ride.. n there was amaazing ride.. in shimla I was driving,, huuh it scared me, but really awsome.
It scared me, but jeeju was with me, he helped me.. n jeeju gave me permission for taking car with me..after applying for a driving license in India!


Scene-3: Zoya's Room

zoya was on bed, in her casual night dress, her I-pad was with her,...
tears scrolled down her cheek, 😭
she placed I-pad on side-table..
she threw herself onto the bed. She wept,
the salt of her life soaking the pillow below,
hot torrents of grief coursing out her eyes, like they will break a dam or may shatter the sky into flakes,
mingling with the uncomfortable softness of the sheets,
her racking sobs shaking her thoroughly with the knowledge that she had been betrayed...
that nothing would ever be same again. Gasping for air, she turned her head and sobbed some more...


the door knocked...
she wipped her tears, n started pretending to be sleeping.. 🥱
"zoya!" jeeji entered in room..
"oh so gai ho zoya?"
she gives her blanket, n turns off the light n she was leaving the room..then she heared zoya sobbing silently,, shaking and shivering under the blanket...
Zeenat turned back to her... sitting on bed beside her...caressing her...

Zeenat: Zoya!! mera bacha!! why are u crying... (setting zoya's hairs aside of her forhead)
Zoya: jeeji...(sat on the bed and hugged her aapi tightly...trying to let out her pains and fears)



Zeenat: bacha!!! u are so brave... u have always faced worst scenarios so well... to phir ab kyun??
Zoya: Why always Me aapi?? hamesha Zoya hi kyun??? Pehle meri ami mujhay chor k chali gyi.. phir mere abu ny b mujhay chor dia... aur ab...
now they were going to talk about the recent casuality in zoya's life... they both hadn't talked about this since zoya was back to simla
Zeenat: zoya... God un logo ko hi ziada problem may daalta hai, jin sy wo ziada pyaar krta hai... (trying to calm down zoya)
Zoya:pr aapi!! why not a human love me?? am i only left for God... to test me n love me?? (sobbing in zeenat's dupatta)
Zeenat: zoya...
Zoya: Aapi!! ous ny mujhay kyun chor dia??? we were friends from last 15 years.. since the time we shifted to newyork after Ammi's death... 4 sall pehle we realized that we both can be something more than friends... i gave everything to this relationship... and look whats the end?? here i am sobbing in his memory when he even don't cares about me, my tears and our relationship flown in these tears. 😭
Zeenat: zoya... zoya... i don't know why he did like this to you... he was son of a good friend of anwar... we all thought that he's also in love with you... and then,,,,
Zoya: and then... then he ditched me... moving ahead in his life...(zoya being louder) moved to new love of his life... leaving me there... on the bridge... to sob..to throb... 😡
Zeenat: bacha... mere khayal may he don't deserves a loving girl like you... he deserves to be with a girl like Sarah... who changes boyfriends like trendy skirts... n dump them after using them like a toilet paper. (calming down zoya.. by rubbing hand on her back)
Zoya: per aapi... (warm tears flowing down her red cheeks due to the temperature). I don't want to live anymore... i am...
Zeenat: (separating zoya from her embrace.. facing her) you are not going to do that all with us again... me and anwar approximately lost u... you are not going to pay the debt of his selfishness with your life ZOya!!! main aur anwar ab tmharay beghair ni reh sktay,,, hum 2 saal pehle sirf anwar k buisness ki majboori ki wja sy tmhay newyork may akeila chor ayae thay...n look how we paid for that...
Zoya: aapi!! (clearing her tears from cheek with hands) aap log ab mujhay chor k to ni jayein gy...
Zeenat: ni mera bacha... (kissing on Zoya's forhead and again hugging zoya)...

they kept on sitting like this for another 10 minutes.
Zeenat: u are having temperture.. i will bring u medicine,, so that tomorrow you don't need to have an off from college...
Zoya: thanks aapi...i love you... ❤️
Zeenat: me tooo... (and leaves)


Scene-4: In Zoya's Car

Zoya left for the college in her brand new silver chevrolet.. putting her bag and i-pad on the back seat...
Zoya felt amazed with her new car yet missing her black porsche in USA... which was gone missing after she tried to commit suicide from the Brooklyn Bridge...a bridge famous for its view and beauty... but for her this bridge had always remained a sign of misery... disappointment...

ZOya smashed her head to throw out alll the foolish and old thoughts out of her mind... they were neither foolish nor old... coz each paasing day revived back these memories...

she was just 20 meters from her college gate...when she saw him... another black face of her life... which didnt told her that how he can utterly ignore a harmless newbie in class..no how he can hate her so much...when she's nothing more than a harmless girl... deprived of all the hapinesses of life... her Mom..her Dad.. and (she could see images flying in front of her eyes)

she didnt noticed that while moving into her past she trailed off from the track she was driving on...and was about to hit HIM... Asad Ahmad Khan... who was busy on phone arguing with someone fiercely... When she again bacame concious..she was just 2 feet away from his Black Aston Martin... he was watching Zoya with vivid open eyes in shock...and a terror!!!






Edited by geet7057 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the update... waiting for more clear view...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsome dear do continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesomeee... Najma, aayan and Asad sitting together in cafe...sab se alag... it remindedme of Cullens siblings in Twilight...wish they are nt vampiresss🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome... update soon... thanks for pm...

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