Asya in Shimla. . .! Part#6 Updated (page 27) - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it is awesome...loved it...waiting 4 more!!!
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so u want update??

really busy now-a-days!

havng entry test on 25 :( :( but ill try my best to update soon :) :)
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Scene-1: In Zoya's Car

Recap: she didnt noticed that while moving into her past she trailed off from the track she was driving on...and was about to hit HIM... Asad Ahmad Khan... who was busy on phone arguing with someone fiercely... When she again bacame concious..she was just 4 feet away from his Black Aston Martin... he was watching Zoya with vivid open eyes in shock...in terror!!!


Scene 1:

His Lumia dropped from his hand...Asad had just 1 thing on His mind... Accident... injuries...wounds... wounds of both heart n soul...separations...

After coming back into consious she managed to have a turn just at 2 feet from his car... her chevrolet stopped at few steps from the college bus...with a loud screeching sound,, tearing ear drums...jostling Zoya to the core,,,

He was still watching the car, who stopped at few steps from the bus...His mind stopped working for the time being, few events from the past glued his feet into road with a terror...

Zoya got a tiny wound on her forehead, which was now resting on the steering...People walking around started moving towards the car to rescue the driver...

Finally he stepped forward too...breaking chain of thoughts...he was first one of those who got to the car... there was no anger on his face... Care had buried the harshness somewher deep in the face... He wanted to save her...

He opened the door of driving seat hurriedly,, yelling a name in worry,, Tanveer!!! Tanveer!!! R u okay... Touching her head...Tanveer... lifting her head from the steering...and then all care was gone... worries were no more,, as this face was not the same he was expecting so far,, She was not his Tanveer... she was the new girl in the class who was irritaing him to the death... he nearly ran away from the car...

She could hear voices of people around her... She heared him too calling some name... Thanx God! He is saved...she thought...but then she was lost under some dark waters...she was sinking in the faintness... and she again trailed off...

Ami!! Ami can we go to Boookleyn brig some other day?? A girl of 4 said to her Mom...No Beta! we have to go to Brookleyn Bridge today... as i have to meeet your Abu... If u don't want to go, you can stay at Nida aunti's place... hugging her sweet child,... Ami!! Abu would be there too? Tey then i wil go with u too... and then she saw her Mom jumping off from the bridge...her Mom made her way to river... n then she sank...she was not able to see her Mom anymore...she was no where and it was dark...Too dark...


Scene 2:

He ran to his Aston Martin picking up his phone from the ground,,, he wanted to go away from this accident spot...he wanted to go far... leaving his another counter with the past far behind...
he didnt even worried about his important classes n orientations to be held in his business school today...



He stopped his car at the end of shimla...on a cliff...he had to push all of the frustrations out of his mind... he had to let his tears flow out of the eyes like a river... from last few days everything was reminding him about her,, Tanveer... no,,..noo... not everything it was just Zoya...who was trying to make him encounter his past every day,,...

he bent over his knees scrambling into a child crying on loosing his most favorite toy...


Scene 3:

Anwar was talking to some junior doctor...

Anwar: I want to see her...wo abhi kahan hai? Wo theek hai?
Dr: Don't worry Sir,, she is okay... she is in Dr. Khan's room.. just turn right on the end of this lane...


Anwar ran to Dr.Khan's room... Zoya with a small bandage on her forehead was sitting in front of a Doctor with age in late 40's.. who was asking her to hold her ears...

Anwar: Zoya! u made us so worried... what the hell???
Dr. Khan: She's fine Mr.??

Anwar: I am her jijju come father... Anwar Razaq

Mr.Khan: Okay,,, no worries,, bohat choti si chout hai... n she fainted might be due to some terror...

Zoya: Jeeju! I am fine now...

Anwar: Okay, thanku Mr.khan.. kia main zoya ko ghar lay k ja skta hoon?? or she has to stay over here...

Mr.Khan: No,..no..main nain pain killers likh din hain.. (smiling on anwar's deep concern for zoya)... make her eat the medicine for 2-3 days,,, n m giving an ointment too,,,

Scene 4:


Asad was still sitting on his knees,,...sobbing lightly

How he could forget his birthday,,,where his life took a turn making his all presents n coming futures terrible...

FLASH BACK:

Tanveer in a Black shalwar qameez came to him, when he was sitting with ayaan after cutting the cake...




Tanveer: Jammy! can u please come with me, mujhe ap ko kuch daina hai...

Asad: don't worry Tanu! u can give it in th front of Ayaan too...he's my...Okay... wait,, chalo main ata hoon...

n then happened something he never thought of...his best friend Tanveer confessed her love with him...gave him a red rose with a beautiful gift packed in a silver wrapper...

His mind was jostled... he never thought of her like that,,,

Tanu!!! Yeh tm kia keh rhi ho? Tm theek to ho?

Jamy...please jammy aisa mat kaho!.. i love u from the time when u left for South africa, 15 years back... and its my love who brought u back...


Tanveer!! plx stop this non-sense... tum janti ho k hum wapis kyun aye thy... Choti ami ki death ho gai thi,, that;s why dad decided to come back to Ayaan n his parents...

Jamy!! please... for God sake...

Tannu!! please dont spoil our frienship like this...

Jammy i Lu...

Asad showed his hand to Tannu to stop saying this whole non-sense...

She started crying...ran away fro the party...sat in her car...

Razia watched her going...asked Asad to follow tanveer,, as she was not in the state to drive...she could harm herself

Tanveer drove away... Asad followed her...

Tanveer was driving at a high speed to make her way back to her home...and then she banged her car into a crossing van,, Asad watched the car jostling, turning upside down,,, then making its way down the road on 1 side, throwing Tanveer out of the car,,,, Engine caught the fire...

Asad left the car walked to Tanveer yelling TANNU,, TANNU.R u okay??? Tanveer was lying on the roadside, Aankhein kholo. Tannu.PleaseTannupicking her up n took to the hospital

PRESENT

Tears were making their way down Asads cheeks

I lost my friend phir main nay sub friends ko chor dia If she is in comma, then how I can enjoy my life main khood ko maaf ni kr skta

Ab ye ladhki pta ni kahan sy aa gyi hai She is irritating me to the death. Pehle wo mere sath wali seat per Tannu ki jga per beth jaati hai,,, phir wo Tannu jaisi car ly leti hai,,, aur phir ouska accident mujhay Tannu ki yaad dilaata hai,,,

Tannu!! Please come back I need a friend I want to tell you k hum bouhat achay dost hain,,, na hi tum apni jga chor skti hona tumhari jga koi ly skta hai,,,Please

And then he realized the color of sky was changing,,, it was about to rain...he hated rains so he had to get back to his nest,,,his homewhere his loving Mom was waiting for him.

Scene 5:

Zoya in her bed-room



Allah Mian whats wrong with me main car chlatay huaey itna careless kaisay ho skti hoon... I cant believe,,,,
Thanx God!!! ous Akroo ko kuch ni hua his eyes,,, ouff lagta hai k zinda kha jayae ga,,, He was there beside me in the car, too,,,, koi ajeeb sa naaam b ly raha tha...Nam,,,.ughh!!! I dont remember the name,,...
phir kya hua??? Mujhay hospital kon ly k gya?? Wo??? Haaan shaid I dont remember after that.

But is accident ka 1 faida b hua,,, I got a new friend in Shimla Dr.Khan new Dost. She made her way to sleep n slipped into a wiered dream. About her ami jumping off the bridge she woke sweating n shouting, right in the mid of the night ending up in gathering anwar n zeenat around her,.

Scene 6:

He enters in the house..

Rashid Khan was sitting in loundge watching his favrte soccer match..

Asad: Asalam O alikum! (after saying this he tried to leave for his room.)

R.K: Asad! Ruko

Asad stopped n turned back: G

R.K: ayaan nain bataya you missed your college today.. tum kahan thay aj sara din? (muting the volume of t.v n stepped towards asad)

Asad: mujhe apnay aik frind sy milna tha...

R.K : friend???

Both turned around hearing a sweet feminine voice who invited them to dinning table

Asad: main fresh ho k ata hoon! Ap chaplain!

R.K: theek!



Scene 7:

On the dinning table

Asad came n got seated on left side of heading seat which was occupied by Rashid khan

Ayaan and Najma also made appearance on the dinning table ayaan got seated on left side of asad..

Ayaan opening his eyes in surprise

Ayaan: aj ap hamaray sath niklay thay par college kyun nhi aye?

Asad: woo main apnay aik frind sy milnay gya tha

Ayaan: bahi! Who is your new friend? Kahin yeh wohi sahiba nai hain jo ap ki clas main new hain?

Asad stopped his spoon which he was moving in his plate empty mindedly

Asad: Ayaan! I gues we are here for dinner!

Dilshad who was initially watching both brothers smilingly got surprised by the sudden change in the mood of asad. Asad got tensed and left the tabl...
Edited by geet7057 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update dear ! Do continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this was just beautiful and lovely hope to get more updates soon no offence but I wish tannu mar jaati but also asad pe guilt rehta so its okay she is in coma but he is blaming himself and now our sunshine beaming zoya will enter and throw all the dark out of his life asad be ready to be in love (fingers crossed) thnks for pm
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Nice update !!!!!
Tannu is the reason of his rude behaviour...
continue soon plz...
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