FF: Through The Monsoon #2 - Link to #3 on pg 1

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#731

Awww... Poor Zoya... I hope the next update will be soon too.. Love your writting..

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#732

are yaar ye asad bhi na- log pair pe kulhadi maarte hai ye kulhadi pe pair
aww poor zoya 🤔

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Zara

@~Palak~

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#733

Wonderful part! Do update soon :)

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#734

RES!

Ok seriously, you can't do this. You can't stop there. Pretty please? I beg you.. make it a double update... please please please please please please please please please!!!!!

Now on to the update at hand.

First of all, lemme recap for the other one, because I couldn't recover until now.

DAMN! Not only was it incredibly sexy and hot, but you managed to keep it flirty, light-hearted and funny. That's what I love about your writing. And excuse me... but who the hell said you don't describe enough!? Not that I'm complaining. It was one of your BEST romantic updates yet! But still. To me you ARE the queen of romantic comedy for Asad and Zoya .

The way they were casually kissing and Zoya was removing articles of clothing from Asad, was so adorably hot. His mock anger, and shock, Zoya's moans and the neck kissing session, literally had me reaching for my own neck. ☺️ I was actually shifting in my seat, taking in every little bit of their kissing heaven glory.

And their dialogues! Don't even get me started! My favourite was this one: "Aap kitne kapre pente ho." Hayeee Who knew Zoya was so naughty haha. But she's so cute. Ahh it was literally adorable, sexy and sweet and of course funny. The whole package!

OK. NOW on to THIS update.

HOW CAN YOU STOP THERE!? UGH!

Honestly I did miss you cliffy's but pretty please please please please please make it a double update. I BEG OF YOU! 😃

Asad's reluctance at stopping their make out session was so funny. And Zoya's position on his bed endearing. Their interactions before Ayaan climbed in the window were such perfection I wanted to be Zoya with my own Asad Ahmed Khan

But then he goes and ruins it!!! 😡😡😡 How can he still say it's nakli!?!?!?!?! He knew! He knew Zoya was in the bathroom!!! Well then Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan. Good luck explaining that one to your Ms. Farooqui. If you can still call her yours.

Once again, my plea for you to update NOW, if possible and if not, then in the next hour or so! 😃

Edited by mochhug - 11 years ago

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Nisha

@nisha150

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#735

Superbbb dear...ayan was cutee dng emotional blakmail to asad...loll

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Pasya

@Pasya

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#736

omg... Ab kya hoga????? Updte soon...!

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#737

OMG!!!imagine my happiness and excitement when i wake up in the morning and see that you updated and dedicated this update to me...thanku so much...i am so happy😳now i will have to do justice to your update and this dedication and give you another long comment...don't worry i will keep doing that...

Oh they are in mood to stop are they...damn you thunder you disturb them again😡thunder is never a good news is it?

"Miss Farooqui, Ayaan yahan aa gaya hai bina bataye. Aap please do minute bathroom mein chup jayegi? I'll send him packing in a short while,"...OMG our loving brother mr.akdu ahmed khan whose's world revolves around his little brother just wants to send him packing so that he can carry on his making out session..well zoya twirling her hair around her finger would have made thinking about anything else but her very difficult...zoya what the hell did you do to him😆and asking to hide her in the bathroom...he doesn't want to give zoya any chance to change his mind does he?

Such a rookha sookha welcome to his little brother...man and now he remembers he has OCD...bechare ayan to hug bhi nahi karne diya...

So ayaan knows the news about asad and zoya getting married...so mr.khan finally gave in to ayaan emotional blackmail...

There was nothing more real to him than getting married to Zoya. But he had to lie for now, just to make peace with Ayaan.Omg this is the first time that asad actually accepted that everything that was happening indeed meant something for him and wasn't just spur of the moment...so self doubts,no second thoughts just knowing what you feel good for you Mr.Khan..but lying to Ayaan like that must ahve been so diificult

Aww poor zoya her heart must have broken hearing that😭damn you ayaan couldn't you have come some otehr time...do i see another misunderstanding?well our cliffhanger queen is back so i guess we will have to wait and watch...please i know we are in for drama but zyada der tak door mat rakhna asya ko...

wonderful update...and thanku once again...m eagerly waiting for the next one😊

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DancingBell

@DancingBell

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#738

AWESOME PART.,...WAITING FOR THE NEXT.,..PLS UPDATE SOON...,,

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#739

Originally posted by: webuser7
I hate cliffys! 😡 How could you break my Zoya's heart? 😭 Yeah, yeah Asad is lying to appease Ayaan. Damn Ayaan! Yahaan bhi aagaya kebab mein haddi. Like we weren't already tormented with what will or will not happen next week!! 😭 😭 A small but dhamakedar episode. 👍🏼 Zoya better develop a stronger backbone now and give Mr. "I wanna Kiss Miss Farooqui" Ahmed Khan a run for his money. Taking her for granted, isn't he? Humph!! 😒 Mr. Akdu Ahmed Khan!

Kidding aside, oye hoye! What's up with Mr. Chuppa Rustom Ahmed Khan? He isn't done yet with Zoya but wants her to hide in the bathroom instead of sending her back to her room!! 😳 Iraada kaafi nek hai, Mr. "I am hormonal" Ahmed Khan! 😆

When he was "busy" with Zoya, he was fine being Mr. Mess Ahmed Khan. Ayaan shows up and Mr. OCD Ahmed Khan is back!! Then he turns to Mr. Impatient Ahmed Khan and then finally to Mr. Jhoota Ahmed Khan.

Oh, wait till he faces the sherni in the next chapter, I bet we'll see "Mr. Bheegi Billi Ahmed Khan. 😉

Mr. Khan ke kitne personalities hai? Shaayad Humeira se tip le rahe hain.

Great writing, once again Dear!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

🤣

I love you! You gave him 5 nicknames in one reply! Too good!

When he was "busy" with Zoya, he was fine being Mr. Mess Ahmed Khan. Ayaan shows up and Mr. OCD Ahmed Khan is back!! Then he turns to Mr. Impatient Ahmed Khan and then finally to Mr. Jhoota Ahmed Khan.

🤣 Too good!