FF: Through The Monsoon #2 - Link to #3 on pg 1 - Page 53

you know the song my dil goes hmmm from salaam namastey? that's precisely what i feel after every update of yours for every story you write. i tend to end up with these huge banana-stuck-in-mouth-wide grins. honestly, it's a little embarrassing and i blame you for it 😆
i loved it! wah wah asad ne kya sixer mara to zoya ne bhi chogga 👏
and tanveer😆 - yes dilshad is a problem for you. jaane anjaane dilshad is perfectly foiling all the plans of tanveer 👏

i'm so looking forward to the next part😃

😆 kiss kissi ko 😆 lot of kisses in the sentence haha... nw asad has given her a hint that she needs to say what she wants uooohh😳 cant wait for the next chapter

u are simply superb...👍🏼

KISS KISS ka mamla hai😆 sooo cute man!

Hahaha it was such a rofl-wala update 🤣
Mind blowing Asya are 😃

Nice update. Loved the teasing between Asya.
Would love to see such a scene roll out in one of the future epis. Sure would be hilarious to see asad tease zoya after their first kiss.

Nice update. The kissiko kissiki part was hilarious and Asad taking sip from the same point of the mug was really nice. Continue soon.

i loved the update! it was so funny how the word kiss was stressed. it was damn funny! plz update soon!

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OMG...you are back to giving us very regular updates...thanks...
I loved the fuming tanveer...u really do hate her don't you?never giving her a chance to gloat but I love you for this...nothing better than seeing nothing going tanveer's way
Wen zoya used her lips to wipe off the coffee I was like did she really do that? 😳 and den asad held her hand and started drinking from the same cup placing his lips where hers' have been...so I guess no one on the dining table saw this coz else they wouldn't be able to meet anyone's gaze least alone each other's
Wow I loved the 'kissi' kiss wala teasing...dilshad momma is so mart...so duly and tanveer gone to market and najma to college so you have set the platform for the kiss already...the teasing and the foreplay is done will we get to see a kiss in the next update 😉 can't wait for the next part update soon 😊