FF: Through The Monsoon #2 - Link to #3 on pg 1 - Page 55

So amazing..loved the update. Can't wait for ur next update. Plz do update soon.

Kiss kiss ko kya kya chaiye ye muje nhi pata but muje Asad and zoya ka kiss chaiye.. 😆

asad😃 my boy you have grown up quite a bit in the past few episodes👏 openly kisses discuss kar rahe ho😆, and that too infront of ammi and najma..not that they understood wht exactly was going on😉...now just waiting to see what this thunderstorm is going to bring to their lives...i'm hoping for the unexpected...pls Suprise us with some gr8 Asya moments😛

Originally posted by: -Aswini-

wow yo updated so quick😃

i know yo are setting the platform fr the next turn of events, but i loved it nonetheless😳 loved their bickering😆 Can they kiss already pls😉

Haha you know how I am, when I'm quick then I'm quick :p But not at all quick about getting them to kiss hahaha. Glad you liked it!! (:

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

Surprising!! I was'nt expecting an update this early, that too in the morning..You are really really nice and sweet to give us such KISS-reference wala update😆😆

Loved Asad and Zoya's KISSiko-KISSiki lines😉😆

Dilshad is one smart Ammi😉..and Tanveer ko lagta hai KISSise bahut problem ho rahi hai??🤣

Best line of this update is Asad's

"Agar KISSiko KISSi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho, toh usse khud apne muh se kehna chahiye,"

Haha looks like Aswini broke your streak!! Glad you enjoyed the whole kiss kiss thing hahaha, and I see you've taken inspiration and made a pun for Tanveer yourself :p

Originally posted by: rutu83

you know the song my dil goes hmmm from salaam namastey? that's precisely what i feel after every update of yours for every story you write. i tend to end up with these huge banana-stuck-in-mouth-wide grins. honestly, it's a little embarrassing and i blame you for it 😆
i loved it! wah wah asad ne kya sixer mara to zoya ne bhi chogga 👏
and tanveer😆 - yes dilshad is a problem for you. jaane anjaane dilshad is perfectly foiling all the plans of tanveer 👏

i'm so looking forward to the next part😃

Haha aw that's so sweet! Yeah since you've read all my work, I guess I don't need to tell you that writing cute-sy stuff simply happens to be my forte :p Glad you liked it!! (:

Originally posted by: ava23

😆 kiss kissi ko 😆 lot of kisses in the sentence haha... nw asad has given her a hint that she needs to say what she wants uooohh😳 cant wait for the next chapter

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Haha yesss, Asad is a sneaky little one :p Glad you liked it!! (:

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

LOL all dat KISS wala bickering was jus awsum...dey were sharing sum secret joke...LOL..it was really funny!! Asad-zoya alone in house?? Hmnnn..lets see watz gonna happen nxttt!

Yes they are indeed alone hehehe glad you noticed :p And glad you liked it!! (:

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

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OMG...you are back to giving us very regular updates...thanks...
I loved the fuming tanveer...u really do hate her don't you?never giving her a chance to gloat but I love you for this...nothing better than seeing nothing going tanveer's way
Wen zoya used her lips to wipe off the coffee I was like did she really do that? 😳 and den asad held her hand and started drinking from the same cup placing his lips where hers' have been...so I guess no one on the dining table saw this coz else they wouldn't be able to meet anyone's gaze least alone each other's
Wow I loved the 'kissi' kiss wala teasing...dilshad momma is so mart...so duly and tanveer gone to market and najma to college so you have set the platform for the kiss already...the teasing and the foreplay is done will we get to see a kiss in the next update 😉 can't wait for the next part update soon 😊

Yup I sure am haha, hopefully I can keep the pace (: And yes I do hate Tanveer haha I mean who doesn't!! Anyway, really glad you enjoyed this part!! (: