AsYa OS: 16 Year Old Zoya's Last Three Wishes - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
superbbb...😊😊😊
vryyy sweeettt...⭐️⭐️⭐️
cuteee beautifulllyy writtennn...😃😃
u r an awesum writerrr...
loved it...fantastic...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
alll der swettt memoriesss wer vry welll writtennn...👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
you got in ..each and every detail..
like he wanted to see her in their official engagement dress..
dinner at the meteor sight..
kachoris..
her mother earring..ya doesn't need it now..
since she will be with him..
their ring.
his proposing..he felt it was right..
the meteor shower..
and their ever lasting promise to be together. .
spellbound I was..
thanxs for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
that was a awesome awesome awesome OS
loved it
it was amazing
thanks for the PM
so cute Asya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: mochhug



Fair enough :) i just really loved her in that outfit and felt they don't show her in red enough, even though he says he loved her in red. And he never gave her a red dress either. CV's lack of logic there lol.

And for the wishes, i just felt that they were kinda hand in hand. But i can see what you mean. I'm sure in the show they'll show them individually (here's hoping)

But thanks for your praises and honest opinion :) i was actually waiting for your comment :P

Yes, he loves her in red and hasn't gifted her a red dress yet. That's why I wanted to see him get her a red dress. 😆 To make up for the CVs oversight and budget control!
I love your writing style and try not to miss any updates!! I found an old one today and read it too! Along with your awesome writing, you are sweet, modest and down to earth, so I love writing comments on your stories. I have to say, other than a few other people's posts, I normally don't write much!
Clap for your talent. 🤗for your sweetness!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
I LOVE SRK! I'm getting all these SRK feels again. SO don't mind me:$
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
this is superb yaar
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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you know what was awesome? i could see the whole thing especially the setting for the dinner with the tent and all-- wonderful writing👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: webuser7

Yes, he loves her in red and hasn't gifted her a red dress yet. That's why I wanted to see him get her a red dress. 😆 To make up for the CVs oversight and budget control!
I love your writing style and try not to miss any updates!! I found an old one today and read it too! Along with your awesome writing, you are sweet, modest and down to earth, so I love writing comments on your stories. I have to say, other than a few other people's posts, I normally don't write much!
👏 for your talent. 🤗for your sweetness!


Well I shouldn't say this, but what the helll. Keep an out for the next FF update. I think you'll be happy 😛 And thank you! Yes I always encourage constructive criticism 😛 I wanna improve and there's no better way than getting reader's opinions 😊
Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Beautiful !!!!!!! superb creation !!!!!!

love u dear for made my day with ur writting
u r such a talented... all the emotions, hesitations,shyness,love, care ...just feel it all in ur writting

Thank u so much for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Kirann..

I LOVE SRK! I'm getting all these SRK feels again. SO don't mind me:$


Heeey now I'm bored LOL

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