AsYa OS: 16 Year Old Zoya's Last Three Wishes

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Nisha

@nisha150

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

superbbb...😊😊😊
vryyy sweeettt...⭐️⭐️⭐️
cuteee beautifulllyy writtennn...😃😃
u r an awesum writerrr...
loved it...fantastic...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
alll der swettt memoriesss wer vry welll writtennn...👏

Edited by nisha150 - 12 years ago

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

you got in ..each and every detail..

like he wanted to see her in their official engagement dress..

dinner at the meteor sight..

kachoris..

her mother earring..ya doesn't need it now..

since she will be with him..

their ring.

his proposing..he felt it was right..

the meteor shower..

and their ever lasting promise to be together. .

spellbound I was..

thanxs for the pm

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Aleena

@Asya_KaJen

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

that was a awesome awesome awesome OS

loved it

it was amazing

thanks for the PM

so cute Asya

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: mochhug

Fair enough :) i just really loved her in that outfit and felt they don't show her in red enough, even though he says he loved her in red. And he never gave her a red dress either. CV's lack of logic there lol.

And for the wishes, i just felt that they were kinda hand in hand. But i can see what you mean. I'm sure in the show they'll show them individually (here's hoping)

But thanks for your praises and honest opinion :) i was actually waiting for your comment :P

Yes, he loves her in red and hasn't gifted her a red dress yet. That's why I wanted to see him get her a red dress. 😆 To make up for the CVs oversight and budget control!

I love your writing style and try not to miss any updates!! I found an old one today and read it too! Along with your awesome writing, you are sweet, modest and down to earth, so I love writing comments on your stories. I have to say, other than a few other people's posts, I normally don't write much!

for your talent. 🤗for your sweetness!

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kiran khurana

@.Kiran.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

I LOVE SRK! I'm getting all these SRK feels again. SO don't mind me:$

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veenisha

@veenisha

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

this is superb yaar

loved it

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

you know what was awesome? i could see the whole thing especially the setting for the dinner with the tent and all-- wonderful writing👏

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: webuser7

Yes, he loves her in red and hasn't gifted her a red dress yet. That's why I wanted to see him get her a red dress. 😆 To make up for the CVs oversight and budget control!

I love your writing style and try not to miss any updates!! I found an old one today and read it too! Along with your awesome writing, you are sweet, modest and down to earth, so I love writing comments on your stories. I have to say, other than a few other people's posts, I normally don't write much!

👏 for your talent. 🤗for your sweetness!

Well I shouldn't say this, but what the helll. Keep an out for the next FF update. I think you'll be happy 😛 And thank you! Yes I always encourage constructive criticism 😛 I wanna improve and there's no better way than getting reader's opinions 😊

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago