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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved this update!!
And I love the concept of this story too! It's different!
I'm excited to see where the story's heading :))

As annoying as it is to hear, please update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Such an interesting concept for these characters. looking forward to see where it's headed next. Nice update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok this story is getting intresting and intresting
But i hope you wont abandon this SS like your previous ones
Im loving this story and its pace
Thinking of what asad had told zoe that she married him
It looks like she came to know everything after marriage
So what excatly happened in their past ?
And of course Asads own deep dark past
I so want to read more now
Continue soon
Edited by Starrydee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update...the way u write things is wow!!!
thoigh i hate Asad for wat he did to zohar...but mostly to Zoya!!! 😡

he is trying to care more but i guess its not enough!!!
His father is back!😲...the reason why he became wat he is! well eager to kne the reason behind his comeback"!
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Posted: 12 years ago
😆😆😆 GERM! I just cracked up at that

It was a great update. I hope he gets to do something for her birthday.
Edited by Drea_QH1fan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay i've always wanted an FF where Asad was a murderer, someone in the mafia and Zoya a troubled girlfriend or wife! I finally stumbled upon this today! Im so glad i did, i absolutely love this SS. i hope to see more of the anguish! Loving it.

Continue soon! :D


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Posted: 12 years ago

Ah!! Firstly I was not able to comment and now I'm not able to hit the like button. Beda gark ho iss internet connetion ka!!!

Okay by the way that was a fab update. Your Asad bears a strong resemblance to Christian Grey of FSG. Strong, tainted, flawed, devilish but still likeable. There's something serious going on, something big enough to pull apart everything and that is precisely what I'm beginning to love. Zoya is tormented and maybe running away would be good but I fear that might aggravate the already existing problems. There's a lot that's hiding from the surface, the way he remembers his father...it doesn't give me a picture that he loves or respect him. But still he agrees to his visits and that is indeed strange and then GERM? I guess I'll have to wait for the next installment and I'd try to be patient...well if I can!

Edited by Meself - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
plz do continue.. fab idea.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
GERM??????????
Whats that??
Anyway loved it.
Plz pm me the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Damn you write well! Absolutely loved this update!

Hope Asad gets to do something for Zoya's birthday!

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