FAASLE II: QH FF. Links to Threads I and III pg 1 - Page 55

Originally posted by: webuser7

Sangeeta, mind blowing update! Loved it!! 👏

It was awesome to see Zoya stand up to her stuck up father! She finally met Ayaan! I am not concerned as he is married and having a kid! Hope she does not land into trouble due to their illegal shenanigans! Will she connect the dots regarding Rashid? Will Asad come back soon? Lots of questions and I know your answer! Wait and watch!! 😛 You know that's what I will say😊

You must have figured out by now that I am weird!! 😆 You know what really tickled me pink? The realization for Ghaffur that Zoya calls Dilshad Phoopi, effectively redefining Ghafoor's only love into his sister!! 🤣 🤣 Hilarious! How do you come up with this script and dialogues!

I was wondering if anyone would pick on this...I just want to see Ghafoor's expression on that one

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Originally posted by: cheezluver98

Amazing! Everything is woven together so well that I'm very impatient to read the next part. Ghafoor seems like a very depressed soul but his actions just make it worse. Very proud of Zoya for moving forward on her own. I hope Asad is ok though and that he will be able to help Zoya. Loving every bit of your story from plot to descriptions to the emotions of the story. Eagerly waiting for the next update! 😃

Originally posted by: -KSGsmitten-

You're a terrific writer I must say! My heartbeat was on a toll every now and then while reading this.

What happened to Asad's ship?? 😔 Rashid doesn't even know he endangered his own son. Tsk.

Great update! Absolutely loved it!! Please continue sooonish. 😊