AsYa/KaBhi SS:Never Letting Go [06/04/2014 #KaBhi-VM &Note pg37] - Page 24

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi All 😳

Please read till the end of the post, there is a video treat there for you to watch, this video mix is my first one.

I hope to update this story in June ... nonetheless the VM serves as a video teaser/trailer for this story and also it serves as a memory treat for those of you who are KaBhi fans ❤️

The point of the video mix is to give you a hint of what is to come in my story.


Forthcoming story prologue/teaser:

So far you are up to the wedding/birthday flashback and what the video is showing is that after the wedding, Zoya goes missing. How and why will be revealed later but it involved a woman, that is all you need to know.


Following Zoya's disappearance, Asad searches high and low for Zoya and in doing so 11 months pass ... he feels her presence everywhere yet she is no where to be found. She was rescued by a certain Doctor (Armaan) 😳 This Doctor keeps Zoya with him as she is severely injured, they live in Lucknow.


Asad feels guilty that he wasn't there to save her after their wedding from a callous revenge act (well in the story he won't be aware of this just yet), he feels unworthy that he could not save Zoya like he has always done in the past but somewhere deep down he wishes that she is alive and that he'll find her soon.


In chapter 4 I have written that eleven (11) months after Zoya's missing - Asad sees Zoya at a bus stop, which in fact is her but he isn't sure of it.


In the coming story you will see that Zoya has indeed returned but she has memory loss, her name is now Zaana and she remembers very little of her past but because she wants to clarify her past (she's been seeing visions of Asad in her dream but doesn't know who he is and she found something that makes her want to go to Bhopal). The only way she feels she can move forward in life is by finding her past.


Zaana (a.k.a Zoya) applies for a job at Dilshaad constructions. On the day of her interview Asad declines seeing anyone including her for interviews because he doesn't need a personal assistant, all he wants is to be alone in his despair as nothing is worth living for without Zoya ... so he doesn't see Zaana's face, well had he seen Zaana's face he would have found his Zoya.


Asad is putting his full attention into the project that Zoya had pitched back in chapter 5 to the Mehta's, in particular he is working on the fire-resistant aspect of the architecture of the apartments he is constructing for the Mehta's and so he leaves the office to go to the fire simulation tests.


Asad's employees and Prasad on the other hand see Zaana and are shocked to see how she looks exactly like Zoya and so Prasad sends Zaana to the fire-simulation test however there is an evil person lurking around who overhears this and doesn't like that Zaana/Zoya is alive ... so this evil person ensures that when Zaana reaches the fire-simulation test that Zaana enters the actual fire testing area instead of the protected personnel area. Zaana/Zoya gets trapped in the fire-simulation testing area and is surrounded by fire.


Asad and the Mehta's are watching and analysing the fire-simulation tests area and are shocked to see that there is a woman (Zaana/Zoya) stuck in the fire.

Asad manages to see Zaana a.k.a Zoya, he recognises her as Zoya and for fear of losing her a second time he rushes to save her not caring about his life.

Asad manages to save Zaana/Zoya however due to the fire she has now collapsed. She was injured 11 months ago and now the fire has added to that injury.

Asad takes her to hospital and learns that his Zoya has a previous injury to her head and she has amnesia. When she awakes she refuses to acknowledge him, she says she is Zaana and that he is mistaken.

What happens from here on till his birthday and ' their ' 1st wedding anniversary is something I will not reveal as you will have to read that.

From here on it's a rekindling of their relationship with trials and tribulations.



I hope that this video captures the idea of my story. Enjoy for now. ❤️

Ps: this link will take you to the video, let it buffer for a few seconds:

Edited by MissReadingFaye - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love the VM and the little teaser!!
Can't wait for the next update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
The VM was awesome! 👏 ❤️


Great job on the background audio! 😎
Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I love the VM! Luking forward to the story
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautifully make VM & nice teaser
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow

This was beautiful

Superb work

Totally loved it

Awesome job

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Posted: 11 years ago

That was honestly so good,

I began to read the FF couple months ago and instantly feel in love with your writing

The way you describe people's feeling, very nicely written


Don't even get me started on the VM,


It was so beautiful, I bookmarked it

Seriously you NEED to update FAST


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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi All 😳

Thank you all for the lovely and inspiring comments.

I have just deleted my VM because I have since edited the VM and the edited version is available now - I'll post the link here Never Letting Go VM (the link is also on page 37 of this SS and in my writing index too).

P.s. if you are new or haven't read my previous post then please do read the prologue to upcoming chapters at the bottom of page 37 to get an idea what the VM is about. 😳

The VM now has an in text-narrative added to it which adds to the trailer/VM and well I tried what I could in terms of editing given my limited skills and time but I have to say I like the way it has turned out so pretty please do have a look at it now 😳

I will make the audio music I compiled for this VM available, simply keep checking my writing index for that update soon.

Enjoy my lovelies 🤗
Edited by MissReadingFaye - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
After editing, it's more beautiful
Amazing work
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: p_s05

The VM was awesome! 👏 ❤️



Great job on the background audio! 😎


Thank you 😳 and p.s. I love you signature, I simply love that dialogue so much & I used parts of it in my VM. x

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