AsYa/KaBhi SS:Never Letting Go [06/04/2014 #KaBhi-VM &Note pg37] - Page 20

Originally posted by: Linsie

zoya is very mischief. ... keep dragging asad in circle. .. poor asad

Originally posted by: Ambreen83

Apologies with the long update I got carried away with chapter 5 in general and chapter 5 B is almost complete so Zoya has a lot more mischief up her sleeve.😳

Thank you for your appreciation :o) xxx

Originally posted by: Linsie

chapter 4... leap into the future... i got confuse with the chapter. ... so chapter 5a... is a flash back.

please don't tell me. .. something is going to happen. .. and asya separated. ...

seriously not a fan of her sad story ..

Originally posted by: rajnid68

I was confused by the 3rd..

So I reread them again..

And lo behold now I am relieved. ?

Going back and forth put a toll to my grey cells..

the grumpy and over protective asad..

The caring zoya..

I got through so far into the story..

Thanks for the amazing updates and for the pm

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

Nice update :)

I loved how you showed how worried Asad was and also the AsYa moments in his office

Originally posted by: Ambreen83

Hi Linsie :)

Chapter 1: Zoya's busy preparing the night before his birthday - his birthday surprise.
yup... with his family...👏

Chapter 2: Birthday breakfast and a flashback into the promises she made to him.
Flash back

Chapter 3: Continuing his birthday story ... so car drive, coffee house and a note but I ended chapter 3 a bit on the sinister side, as though she might have ran away... okay now i understand...his like asad pov...

Chapter 4: takes a leap, a leap of 11 months, Zoya is no where to be found and yes sadly (so so sorry ASYA are separated, but hopefully not for so much longer, they will meet in he forthcoming chapters and it'll be about experiencing that first-time-in-love-feeling all over again but with a twist!!!) okay...

So Asad sees her one day at the bus stop but he isn't completely sure if it's her so he runs home, take her note/letter from his drawer and begins to read it, so chapter 4 ends with "Asad enters a flashback" whilst he's reading the note.

Chapter 5A: Flashback, so Birthday moments

And yes you are right chapter 5 A deals with the flashback ... so showing you, the reader what happened on his birthday, what was written in the note and a little on how she went missing but from Asad's point of view.

Chapter 5 has at least another part and at the end of the flashback Asad will wake up in the present moment and promise himself he will try every possible route to find her before his next birthday which is in 4 weeks. He has been looking for her since she went missing but with no success.

He'll try and remember what he saw at the bus stop. And he goes to a balcony in his house because he can't sleep and he will see the girl from the bus stop.

I hope that helps :) xxx