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blueflames

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: WhiteDuck02
This is fabulous.
Do update soon😊

Thank you duck for the support

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blueflames

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
hey dear why aren't you updating?? please continue the story.

Updating real soon😊

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blueflames

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: Hophop1456

Why havent you updated this yet

this is the most cutest story I have ever layed my eyes on,

first you were being a meanie by giving short updates and now not updating at all, who does that😭

Please update this it is tooo cute just to leae it hanging

I mean we need to read whether Asad ever found his Zo angel and what ever happened to the little girl

Please have some mercy on your readers and continue this

PLEASE😭😭😭

I will still be a meanie n give short update 😆

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blueflames

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: parakshi
When will u update?
itna lamba wait!
plsss continue soonnish soon.

Updating soon. Just hang on a little while more

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blueflames

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Hello hi people..

Remember me ???? Some one say yes

Ok its fine you dont remember me but still you might know this SS, as i believe words are mightier than just mere person😆😆 ( nautanki is something i cant stop doing😆😆 )

Anyways i got a tremendous amount of pm's all askking for an update to this SS, and waise tou ab mera dil pathar ka ban gaya hai, as i dont watch QH anymore. But phir bhi for those people who really stuck to this SS. This one is for you all.

Part 4

"Why are you crying ammi?? Ammi please Najma is getting scared seeing you like this, say something ammi", tears rolled down Asad cheeks as he tried to shake his mother out of her reverie. But he was unsuccessful. He had just seen his father storm out, while he was entering the house, he had run after him, but his father did not hear or stop for him. His father had returned from Dubai last week, they were having gala time, but today things were havoc. His mother was was not responding to his pleas. He ran to call zahoor mamu, he was hysterical on phone.

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"Ye sb Kya hogaye dilshad?, zahoor asked holding his sisters hand.
"Sb dokha tha, jhoota tha..bhaijan " dilshad was hysterical.
"Tum itne yakeen se kaise keh Sakti ho??, zahoor inquired.
"Mey ne APNI Ankhon se Dekha bhaijan... Rashid ne Dubai mey Dosri shadi ki aur unke bache bhi hain... Unhone mujhe aur mere bachhon ko Dhoka dIA,.. Mey ye kaise bardasht karon..Asad ye bardasht nahi kar sakta, Uska dil nafrat se bhar jaye ga... I won't leave him, bhaijan. He will have to pay for his sins ", dilshad sobbed unaware of her son standing just out side the door.
His world came crashing down. His picture of happy family cracked under the weight of his father's betrayal. He moved away front the room, each step weighed like a ton, someone had punched out the happy soul and replaced it with a vacuum.

"Bhaijaan," Najma tugged her brother's hand "mujhe dar lag rah haai,can you put me to sleep?"
Asad looked down to her tear stricken eyes, he was devastated to see the fear in them, he lead her to her room and made her lie down. Najma held his hand and he sat down by her side lulling her to sleep. "Bhaijan ammi ko Kya hua hai??" He could not answer.
"Bhaijan Abu kab aye in gey?" Najma questioned relentlessly.
Asad was lost on his own agony, what was a suitable reply to a 4 year old kid's questions. He did not know. He brushed his hand on her head and made her sleep, as he wouldn't let his sister suffer, they won't suffer anything they didnt deserve.
Making sure Najma was asleep, Asad made way to his room.

"You know it all..." He scribbled in his dairy and stood watching out if the window. Life was like a mirror, once shattered it held cracks for ever.
It was a choice for him to make a life of wrath pain and agony in which he burned himself for revenge, or be a God fearing who loved all creation and accepted life as it came to him, until he had the power to write his own destiny. What was he supposed to do, a choice which would stick with him for a lifetime, and also affect his family, his world his mother and sister. Thoughts of angel Zo which ere on his mind for years were buried by the weight of his present circumstances. He looked over the horizon which was black, but thence he had made up his mind.

To be continued...

Rocks and chappals 🤗

Updates will be like once a week only, so bug all you can, maybe i give in to the response ;)

IMP MSG : my asad will always be KSG, so just have a flash back of those initial episodes which got us hooked on to the show😳

And the one imp person who made me post it is Sonny aka hophop1456.

Ankiewa aka humptydumpty you arethe one without whom i could never have the courage to post in this forums, you are always in my mind while writing . Thank you

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Miss-Appy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Asad is so cute 😳
Loving this story 😉

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Dear its an interesting concept,

I love this story,

Pls continue soon,

Pls pm me when u update,

I love this cute wala Asad & his angel Zo,

Pls pls continue soon😳

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

awww asad is so cute

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SimplySmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

holllaaa😃

YOU FINALLY UPDATED

#happydancing

although the update was sad😭😭😭

poor happy and loveable Asad has turned into the akdu and pattar dill Asad now😭😭😭

he's not even thinking about his Zo angel anymore😭😭

well at least this time they have dilshad's bhaijaan who may help them😃😃

it was a very sad and angst sought of update😭😡😭

but at least you updated😃

please update soon and please make it a happy one, and pretty pretty please make Zo angels entry come in faster

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ABI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#180

I kinda forgot the plot of this SS but I always love stories in relation to the Asad I loved as well. So, will definitely be looking forward to your next update.