AsYa SS : Azal se Abad Tak !! PART 4 UPDT page 27

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blueflames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: s120
It is so adorable 😃 Loving it. But next time, give a longer update pls.

Shreya you turned RED 👏 m a bit J 😉

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blueflames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-
no fair !!
first you make us greedy by showing such nice ss! and then you are giving us nano chapters !!
please give long chapters next time !!
coming back to the update
lovely as always !!

M trying to give updates which don't bore people, so kept them short but if you all asking big then next one will be a long update.

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blueflames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: amruta04
hey dear
nice update
if possible pl post longer update next time
take care and thanks for the pm.

Thank you dear.

Next one is gona be long😉

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blueflames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Enchantress
wow.. That is something interesting. I love it. Zo.. Its Zoya.. Isn't it.. Umm.. That is cute.. The lil Asad is quite obsessed with his angel.

But, why so short updates.. Give long ones please.. At least not too short.. Seriously , loved it.

Dee

Thanks for reading DEE,

Will update long one soon.

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blueflames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Hey all the lovely people

M back with the 3rd instalment of this SS.

I am loving the love and praises that you all are giving to this SS, it's keeps me motivated, a Big THANK YOU to all of you who comment and like.

Silent readers, a smilie for a comment won't hurt me, just let me know you read it...

Part 3

He turned towards the children ward again. He was passing through the beds where kids were lying, he cringed at the sight of them, and thought why were they here, when they are supposed to be out playing. A little girl who was heavily bandaged at her arm, caught his eye. Her eyes were open but she didnt blink, she just gazed up.

She had dark eyes, black hair, she reminded him of his angel ZO again, but this girl was not chubby, but his heart struck different chord. He tried to imagine the angel face how it had grown up, but he had no clue. He stood and stared at her.

He moved to read her name on the file that hung on her bed, but there wasnt any name. "Ya Allah!! These doctors are so busy that they even forgot to write her name", Asad ranted his feeling to God. He was resolved never to be a doctor, although it was an honourable profession, but he couldn't live with this rigidity. He would learn to follow his passion and heart, just like his parents. Although his dad lived apart from them, for months at time, but they were a happy family. But the scene around him brought back to reality that, world was a bitter place to live and not many had the same privilege as him.

He looked sadly at the girl little girl again and left. He will visit her tomorrow.

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He placed the teddy in her arms, he had bought it only for her. For he knew how lonely patients got, but this little girl wrung out his childish heart for she still stared ahead lost in her own world.

He tried to inquire about her, but nobody knew her name or where she came from, and no family had yet come forward to claim her. Asad's heart was filled with compassion. He had no idea what to do, he was just a young kid of 10, he wanted to take the little girl home with him, and give her a family. He wanted her to come out of the reverie and be happy, for he was sure her eyes would twinkle with mirth.

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"I am back home dear God, it's heavenly to be home, ammi and Najma are being ridiculously sweet, ahh I so love them. I wish Abu had been here, then the ladies wouldn't have got upper hand on me.

Dear God, you know all about my angel Zo, you know everything about her. Just keep her safe, for one day by your grace, I will get her.

And lastly my prayer for the little girl in the children's ward. I wish she recovers soon and be happy. I gave her a teddy bear to keep her company, She reminds me of my angel again n again, she doesn't even have a name, I am confused. I will go to meet her again tomorrow, even if I have to bear mamu again ( m sorry I keep ranting against mamu, but he is a bit meany).

And thank you for everything." Asad shut his diary smiling and went to bed.

To be continued ...

Rocks and criticism are welcome.

Do let me know how is this story moving.

A big THANK YOU to all those who read.

And don't forget to hit LIKE ;)

Edited by blueflames - 12 years ago

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rosamale

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Me first

a beautiful update as usual. i love your SS Title😃 awe... my Asad, cutie pie😳 is the girl Zoya😭

Edited by rosamale - 12 years ago

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Soumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Its beautiful. Bt i want a long updt if u dont mind di

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Great update!!!

Its so cute that Asad keeps visiting the hospital and the children's ward just to get a glimpse of his angel Zo! That little girl without a name is Zoya... isn't it, isn't it??? *yes, i'm very impatient😆*

Continue soon again!

P.S: why are ur updates so smally?? *yes, i'm greedy too😆*