#T1 ASYA ff:Vishwaas link to #T 2 given on page 1 - Page 69

Created

Last reply

Replies

779

Views

132.9k

Users

39

Likes

1k

Frequent Posters

EuphoricDamsel thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

zoya is piss to max ..😡 😡

she carry the heavy bucket 😲 😡


Asad saw what she is doing... he genuinely
angry she should not do that...


well zoya have a point... now he remember her..

but still cant let go the anger ... busted!!!


😡😳😆
EuphoricDamsel thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

aapko meri ... chinta krne ki koi zaroorat nhi
hai 😡 😡
... aur jab aapko doosro ki feelings 😡
ki kadra ho tho 😡 aap mujhse baat
kijiyega ... "
😡 😡

she left the bucket and went away 😭
with tears ... and swollen eyes ... 😭
that were red ...😭


😆
EuphoricDamsel thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie



for the next update...😆 😆


😕
EuphoricDamsel thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie


🥳
Congrats 100 pages already 👏 👏


:DDD

😃
Asya_KaJen thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
104 pages already LOL
update now PLEASE
EuphoricDamsel thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Asya_KaJen

104 pages already LOL
update now PLEASE


whats LOL fr ???
ritzksg thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
when did the hell u updated ???
till part 27 !!!

ritzksg thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
tumne mereko btaayaa nhi ki tum update kr rhi ho ...
mai forum pe aa jaati ..

ab meri ye halat hai...
ritzksg thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
i m angry !
EuphoricDamsel thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago
PART : 28 :~
she left the bucket and went away with tears ... and swollen eyes ... that were red ...

asad stood there in anger ofcourse and zoya ran towards the kitchen before she completely broke by this behavior of asad ...

what did he think of himself ? she loved him god damn it ! more than life more than herself more than anything in this world...

she quickly prepared dinner and as dilshad was going to stay near the dargah at her friend's house bcoz... it will be very late by the time she returned ... and ofcourse she knew asad won't allow her to come alone and she knew he'd be tired coz of his so called ... WORK !...

zoya sat on the bench in the garden she looked towards the stars and started to cry ... she cried her heart out ...

asad was in his room stuck in his own thoughts when he saw zoya from the window crying like she lost her life...

she looked defeated , defeated in love , defeated in trust , defeated care... guilt took over asad's mind he could take it no longer he grabbed a shawl and set out for the garden ...

but stopped in mid way he recalled that what zoya hadn't eaten a morsel since morning after her breakfast ...
he made his way to the kitchen and prepared milk coffee for her just as she liked with 2 and 1/2 spoon sugar ...

now he went in the garden saw her prepared himself he setted his hair dusted the dust from his kurta and went near her she was still crying silently...

he place the shawl on her causing her to look up her one look gave asad a heartache he saw her red bloodshot eyes that were swollen he felt more guilty seeing her in this condition ...

she looked away from him but did not throw the shawl he brought for her he was satisfied atleast she didn't threw him...

he went and sat beside her but she moved towards the left maintaning distance from him... asad sighed but he tried to be funny ... he spoke...

A:" aaida ! tumhe bhook lagu hogi na ?... par kya kre? ... aapki ammi jaan mujhse naraaz hai na iss liye wo khana nhi kha rhi... but u don't get sad mai ... unhe manaane k liye hi aaya hu ... n u know she'll forgive me... "

zoya's head shot up she smiled a littile during his conversation then got angry when he spoke the last lines ... she glared at him and said...

Z:" ye mat samajhiyega ki aap har baar galati kr ke mujhe manane aayenge aur mai ... binna kuch soche samjhe aapko har baar maaf kr doongi... aur ... "

A:" Zoya ! zoya ! zoya ! ... pehle ye coffee pee lo tumne subah ke baad kuch khaya nhi hai... baad me daant lena ... "

this irritated zoya to the core she snatched away the coffee cup and spoke to him...

Z:" meri tho koi fikar nhi hai aapko... jaan kr achha lga ki apni beti ki fokar hai aapko... "

A:" zoya... aap aisa kyu keh rhi hai ... aap jaanti hai ki iss bachhe ki meri zindagi me kya ehemiyat hai ... phir bhi... aa..."

Z:" Asad ! agar aapko meeri zarah si bhi fikar hoti tho aap kabhi meri baat bina jaane mujhe nhi daantate ... "

A:" zoya mujhe tumhari fikar horhi thi ... tumne mujhe btaya nhi tha i was really worried ..."

Z:" asad ! mai koi bachhi nhi hu ... mai jaanti hu aapko mera akele jana achha nhi lagta ... issiliye maine najma ko phone kiya tha...agar wo nhi aa pati tho mai nhi jaati..."

asad's head fell down he stared the floor for sometime and zoya started sipping her coffee ...

suddenly asad spoke ...

A:" i am sorry zoya ... mujhe aise tumpar..."

Z:" chikhna nhi chahiye tha... jaanti hu ! ..."

she smiled a little at him and said ...

Z:" its ok !... aap khana kha lijiye ... mujhe bhook nhi hai mai yaha kuch der rehna chahti hu ,..."

A:" what ? ... pagal ho tum ?... no comeon pehle khana khao tumne subah k baad kuch nhi khaya hai ...chalo.."

Z:" asad ! please ..."

asad knew she won't listen to him afterall she was zoya ...
so he setted the plate and took to her ...

PHEWWW ! done SORRY FOR A LATE UPDATE AFTER 8 DAYS PRECISELY ! SORRY BUT I WAS WAITING FOR THE BANNER ...

YES GUYS I WANNA INFORM U THAT EVERYDAY I HAVE A NEW CONSEPT FOR FF / OS /TS / SS SO I WANNA COMPLETE THIS FF SOON BUT STILL THERE IS TOO MUCH LEFT FOR THE STORY TO COVER UP AFTER THIS FINISHES I M GOING TO START A NEW FF AND AFTER THAT IN A DAY OR TWO A NEW SS... 😃

SO GUYSS MOTIVATE ME TO WRITE SOON SO U ALL CAN GET NEW NEW STORIES ... 😃

P.S. ONE CONCEPT CAME IN MY MIND FOR AN SS WHEN I WAS WATCHING YJHD :p
THE OTHER ONE WHEN MY FRND WAS READING A BOOK AND OTHER ONE WHEN I SAW A CLUSTER OF TEACHERS:p

ASYA4eveAAA 😃🤗
Edited by ASYA4eveAAA - 11 years ago

Related Topics

Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove · 2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 1 years ago

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: ExoticDisaster · 8 months ago

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".