AsYa FF ~ Mere Jazbaat ~ T#2 ~ NOTE PG. 123

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Nisha

@nisha150

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#491

comments updated on pg76❤️

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Tanvi

@KulfiBai

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#492

Monica I just read the full one and a half threads of your story and it is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! :O

Girl you are a wonderful writer! I love how you've developed AsYa's story here, whilst also using the other characters in a clever way! And the character growth is amazing! I honestly started off HATING Asad and then now, especially after reading this last chapter, my heart broke for him!

I hope, at the very least, Zoe decides to head back to her Mr. Khan with Dilshad and Najma! 😃

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Revelio

@Revelio

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#493

Omg! U've got me on the edge of my seat! The update was fabulous! Although I had a huge lump in my throat when zoya said no to Asad's proposal. I so so so badly wanna read the next updt! Plz updt soon! Thnx for the pm. :)

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#494

OMG this is wat i didn't wanted & expected

So Zoya said no & Asad has gone back 2 India ALONE

i would have been happy if Dilu & Najma would have gone 2 but Alas!

I can assume wht can happen nxt so Now heartbroken Asad will go back home where billi will take advantage of this golden opportunity cuz nobody's home 2 stop her;mayb somehow Dilnaj convince Zoya or she herself will decide 2 come back but till then damage will b done.

In pt-26 i think Zoya 4 a sec suspected Tanveer but she is not so convinced i would love 2 see our Mobart will join hands & save Asad b4 all this shit happens.

But yes lovely updt do d nxt part sooner plz😊

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..Zainab..

@..Zainab..

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#495

I'm a woman with her words-I finally caught up! Balle Balle! 😆😆

DO you know how much i love the intensity of your work! that is one of the reasons i began to read and enjoy your work so much! It has so much intensity from the storyline to the characters! Man You are just such an amazing writer! Kudos to you!

IDK about others But i love your asad as much as he hurts zoya i still love him!❤️

He just sounds so hot man! I cant! but honestly ur an amazing writer! Please update soon! and i can believe i caught up!

I loved how asad went back to india alone cause zoya denied thank god there was not last minute love coming out of the blue and happily ever after!

Please update soon!👏👏👏

-Z

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#496

nice ..and emotional one..

update soonish..

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ARshubhiASYA

@ARshubhiASYA

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#497

Just finished reading all the chapters...The story is AMAZING!!
And you are a truly an AWESOME writer...what a brilliant story so far!
Thanks for writing! :)