AsYa FF ~ Mere Jazbaat ~ T#2 ~ NOTE PG. 123 - Page 40

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Posted: 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
OHMYGOSH. 😲 OHMYGOSH. 😲 😲 THAT WAS THE BEST CHAPTER OUT OF THEM ALL. ❤️ *Squeals and jumps up-and-down while fangirling*
The limo, the carriage, the dress, the dance, the scar-revelation, the song, the menu, the kiss, the confession, it was all SO PERFECT AND MAGICAL AND DOWNRIGHT AMAZING!!!! 👏 👏 👏 *Fans herself*
I wish they did this on the show! 😳 I love this romantic Asad. 😉 *Sighs dreamily* And Zoya is all blushy. 😳 Hayye. ☺️ I'm dead. *Swoons* ☺️
THAT WAS SO FLIPPIN' BEAUTIFUL. 😃
BUT WHY MUST YOU LEAVE US HANGING AT SUCH A CRUCIAL POINT?! 😡 😡
You'd better continue soon, otherwise...😈
-Fari 😳 ❤️
PS. I knew there was gonna be pizza! 😆
🤗 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-

OHMYGOSH. 😲 OHMYGOSH. 😲 😲 THAT WAS THE BEST CHAPTER OUT OF THEM ALL. ❤️ *Squeals and jumps up-and-down while fangirling*

The limo, the carriage, the dress, the dance, the scar-revelation, the song, the menu, the kiss, the confession, it was all SO PERFECT AND MAGICAL AND DOWNRIGHT AMAZING!!!! 👏 👏 👏 *Fans herself*
I wish they did this on the show! 😳 I love this romantic Asad. 😉 *Sighs dreamily* And Zoya is all blushy. 😳 Hayye. ☺️ I'm dead. *Swoons* ☺️
THAT WAS SO FLIPPIN' BEAUTIFUL. 😃
BUT WHY MUST YOU LEAVE US HANGING AT SUCH A CRUCIAL POINT?! 😡 😡
You'd better continue soon, otherwise...😈
-Fari 😳 ❤️
PS. I knew there was gonna be pizza! 😆
🤗 🤗


🤣 Fari I love your comments so much. But this by far was the best 😃😳

I'm sooo happy you liked it sooo much. 😳 😳 😳 😳

Hahaha I know I know chappals galore! But I had to! There's another twist coming your way! Yes I haven't forgotten my twists 😈😆

Love you!!! 🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Okay now I can safely say I have read your entire FF thus far hahaha. Or is there some other thread I don't know about or something?? Okay highlights!!

"Zoya..." whispered Asad, his voice husky and low. Zoya once again felt her insides melt. She slowly opened her eyes, and gasped a little, seeing his eyes darkened with desire. She let her hand travel from his neck to his chest, and gasped, a little more audibly this time, as she felt his heart. It was beating just as wildly as hers.

I was totally imagining Asad saying Zoya in that sexy voice of his, drowned in passion. Why did you let Dilshaad barge in at that point though?!

But he couldn't help think of one thing. They kissed. Sure there was a paper between them, so some would say it doesn't count. But others, others would argue it was a kiss. He couldn't stop smiling, and his smile grew more and more smug when he noticed a blush creeping up Zoya's cheeks.

Such a cute inner monologue omg hahaha Asad's thoughts are super hilarious in your story (:

She drew her face closer to his, her lips quivering in anticipation.

Can I just say that I LOVE how you made Zoya sorta take the first step in initiating the kiss?? The whole date was so cute, especially the part about them having pizza and kachori hahahaha unexpected but hell of cute!! And yes, finally after so long ASAD CONFESSED WOOHOO. Okay next part please??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goingreen

Okay now I can safely say I have read your entire FF thus far hahaha. Or is there some other thread I don't know about or something?? Okay highlights!!

"Zoya..." whispered Asad, his voice husky and low. Zoya once again felt her insides melt. She slowly opened her eyes, and gasped a little, seeing his eyes darkened with desire. She let her hand travel from his neck to his chest, and gasped, a little more audibly this time, as she felt his heart. It was beating just as wildly as hers.

I was totally imagining Asad saying Zoya in that sexy voice of his, drowned in passion. Why did you let Dilshaad barge in at that point though?!

But he couldn't help think of one thing. They kissed. Sure there was a paper between them, so some would say it doesn't count. But others, others would argue it was a kiss. He couldn't stop smiling, and his smile grew more and more smug when he noticed a blush creeping up Zoya's cheeks.

Such a cute inner monologue omg hahaha Asad's thoughts are super hilarious in your story (:

She drew her face closer to his, her lips quivering in anticipation.

Can I just say that I LOVE how you made Zoya sorta take the first step in initiating the kiss?? The whole date was so cute, especially the part about them having pizza and kachori hahahaha unexpected but hell of cute!! And yes, finally after so long ASAD CONFESSED WOOHOO. Okay next part please??


YAY! I was waiting for this!!! Hahaha I'm glad you like his inner monologues! I wanted to show his change more in this. Glad it came through 😃

And yeah I wasn't sure if that was a good idea, but I guess it's a good way to show that she does want this, but is afraid and confused. And we shall see why in the next part.

Which will be this weekend! 😃

Thanks for the lovely comment hun! I can't believe you took the effort to quote your favourite parts 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG !!
so he finally confessed !
what will be zoya's reactions !
she hasn't realised that she has feelings for him right ?
i think she'll say yes !
well " fingers crossed "
i can't wait to read the next chapter
plz plz plz do update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

This weekend, I promise! I would tomorrow or Thursday, but my mom is leaving in a couple days so spending time with her. But this weekend for sure!

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey
gr8 ff
plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: akshiankita

hey

gr8 ff
plz add me to ur pm list


Yay! I love getting new readers! Thank you! Just accepted your buddy request
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Posted: 11 years ago
absolutely loved this chapter it was amazing, it was like a birthday gift to me kyun ki aap ne yeh chp update kiya tha on my birthday🥳!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃😃😃 so thanks and continue soon i just love your writing, and finally i got time today to catch up on this fantastic FF. you have a way with words that just makes the entire thing more enjoyable to read. and i love that you don't rush things, you take it at a slower pace which fits so well for Asad and Zoya. Keep up the excellent work👏, and pm me if you can for the next update please! take care, lots of love from vaish!😊🤗

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