AsYa FF ~ Mere Jazbaat ~ T#2 ~ NOTE PG. 123 - Page 41

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishnavi31

absolutely loved this chapter it was amazing, it was like a birthday gift to me kyun ki aap ne yeh chp update kiya tha on my birthday🥳!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃😃😃 so thanks and continue soon i just love your writing, and finally i got time today to catch up on this fantastic FF. you have a way with words that just makes the entire thing more enjoyable to read. and i love that you don't rush things, you take it at a slower pace which fits so well for Asad and Zoya. Keep up the excellent work👏, and pm me if you can for the next update please! take care, lots of love from vaish!😊🤗


AHH OMG *rubs eyes*

WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN LOST! 😲 😆

Yay! I'm glad it was like a bday gift for you 🤗 Happy belated birthday hun!

So happy you caught up and liked the last chapter 😳😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res for this update and I will read and comment now 🤣

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OMGGG!! THE DRESS FINALLY!!! SERIOUSLY THAT IT ONE HELL OF A SEXY DRESS. ELEGANT AND ALLURING AS WELL.. I LOVE IT!!!! IF ONLY SHE COULD WEAR SOMETHING LIKE THAT IN THE SHOW.. I SWEAR I STARED AT IT FOR LIKE 2 MINUTES .. IT IS JUST THE RIGHT THING. NOT TOO MUCH SKIN ON SHOW AND HUGS THE BODY JUST AT THE RIGHT PLACES.. ASAD YOU BETTER CARRY HER TO BED AS SOON AS SHE WALKS IN FRONT OF YOU IN THAT DRESS 🤣 I SCROLLED DOWN TO SEE THE DRESS AND I LOVE IT .. NOW I'M GOING TO READ THE ENTIRE UPDATE 😆

Yeahh Zoya.. You're so right! All he wants is friendship 😳

Don't worry Asad, I'm silently praying for you here that she wears the dress for you 😆

Pleaseee send me envelopes with that printed on them and I will treasure them for the rest of my life. Guarding them with my life 🤣

Wow Zoya, I swear you better do whatever he says after this night. He's you gulam?! I have an idea 😃 Let's trade places. You sit here and read Asad planning a date for me 🤣 and oh yeah.. Do me a favor and send me a Dilshaad in my house as well. She could come in quite handy at time 🤣

A limousine?! 😲 Zoyaaa!! I'm so jealous .. If only I could get someone to do all this for me 😭 I know it'll never happen but everyone has a right to dream 🤣 Yeah I've been into a limousine while going to a few weddings and also both proms that were held by my high school but never had someone like Asad send me a limousine to go to him 🤣

And now a horse carriage?! 😲 I've forever wanted to get on one of those and travel to a beautiful place with my beloved, linking arms.. *sigh* Keep on dreaming Annie 🤣 but seriously?! Asad, in this sort of avatar?! I would love it if Gul Khan actually read this and stole some ideas 🤣 would definitely be something worth watching as it is a treat reading it 😆

The little notes int he envelopes

I wonder why Asad keeps getting butterflies. Everyone who is asked out on a date with him should be getting butterflies and their stomachs should be doing somersaults and kick boxing in there! 😆

I want something like this to be done for me 😭 😭 roses and notes and horse rides and limousines

"Before she could complete her thoughts, she felt a warm hand encircle her waist, and pull her back" ☺️ ☺️ I have no words to describe this.. Sensuous maybe? ☺️

"Asad watched her as she came closer, and felt his heart stop. Time slowed, and the wind blew through her silky hair. It was just like the first time he had seen her. All dressed in red. Except this time, it didn't make his heart ache to watch her. It made it soar. He smiled broadly, as he drank in how beautiful she looked in the dress. A deep red hue, the dress hung effortlessly on her every curve, highlighting them, and hugging her dainty figure. The rhinestones on the haltered neckline sparkled along with her dimpled smile, and the small earrings she'd chosen to compliment the dress."

The way you described the dress, I could literally picture Zoya standing in front of me in that dress and Asad's expression is definitely something to watch. Asad's description of what he felt couldn't have been described any better. Reminded me of when Zoya chose the dupatta Dilshaad had chosen for her daughter in law and when Asad saw her walk in the hall, his expression was amazing! And your description made me picture that 👏

THE DRESS AGAIN I can't help but just ogle at it. Amazing! Such a beautiful dress 😆 Asad surely lost his senses .. Yeah I'm kind of trying to not picture the shawl in the whole imagination 😆

"He unconsciously drew circles on her stomach with his hands" *cough* Are you trying to kill me? 😳 anyone would turn into fire when he touches 😳

The way Asad made Zoya feel special just made me smile.. Literally.. They way you set out the scene and the descriptions .. A heart warming scene.. Finally! He knows about the scene.. I was very calm from the beginning because somewhere in my head a little voice was shouting that Asad would have nothing volatile to say about the scar and I was right .. Asad can never be so demeaning 😃

Ohh so kachorian was what he trying to find 😆 I had no idea .. I was literally trying to guess after reading the update before but all my attempts of thinking of something were futile 🤣

A WINK FROM ASAD?! HIS WINKS HAVE ALWAYS BEEN SOMETHING APPEALING.. I JUST FIND HIS WINKS SO EFFING SEXY!!!! ☺️ ☺️

And Zoya is definitely right about that! Asad is definitely dekhne layak cheez hai!! Anyone would fall flat after seeing him 😆

May you have this dance? Damn! you may have each and every dance 😆 Dancing under the stars with Asad .. Zoya you better feel like an effing queen 😭 😭 I get he's trying to make up for the mistake he made and the hurt he caused but all this?! I would for one night shove it into one corner and appreciate all of this and actually forgive him 😆

That kiss left me like ☺️ .. literally 😆

And finally!!! Something we've all been waiting for Asad to say 😳

Monica! You have risen the expectations of what I want from a man 🤣

I loved the update!! I think you can tell from the essay I wrote for you 🤣




Edited by x_Mishti_x - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x

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Res for this update and I will read and comment now 🤣


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x

It's about time you updated..


Made us wait a century for one update !!

RES .. I'll be back soon 😃

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1. Sorry for taking so long to actually edit my comment 😆

Anyway..

No problem. Still faster than I took to update this part 🤣

Firstly.. I couldn't help but giggle at their "kiss" 😆 Unique and very very enticing .. If I was Zoya, I would have also tripped after seeing him in front of me 😳

I'm so glad! I was wondering how it would be taken by people. If it was a little too ridiculous 😆 Glad to see it was "enticing"

Asad in sweats and a wife beater and bench pressing! OMFG!! I would kill to see this come true ☺️ ☺️

LMAO It reminded me of the time he was in a fitted white T, around the first few episodes, and I wondered since then what Asad would look like in a wife-beater ☺️

I loved the whole head banging and screaming in unison 😆

To be honest, I was actually scared that Asad might read the letter and maybe get the wrong meaning out of it.. Luckily that didn't happen 😆 I thought that it would lead to another argument between them that was cause Asad's plan to patao Zoya fail 😆

YAY! I was hoping it would make people doubt it 😆 But yeah I didn't want him to know so soon. He will know soon. But not THAT soon. 😛

Their argument about friends was so real!! Like seriously, it can easily be pictured like something that happened. The way you described it, I swear I felt like it was actually happening. Great job 👍🏼

Aww thanks! I'm so glad! I was hoping to make it like the show 😃😳

And then again ☺️ his breath fanning her neck ☺️ made me blush while just reading this description of their intimacy 😳 Woah! "Aaj raat ko pata chalega ki main kitna boring hoon".. Are you trying to kill me?! Picturing Asad saying these words ☺️ Hotness!! 😳

LMAO I know I'm evil. THIS, THIS is the Asad I was hoping to see after they confessed their love for each other, and Tanveer was out of the picture. But I guess the CV's had more cutesy stuff in mind 🤔😆

Thank you for getting rid of my nervousness! Nothing went wrong and Zoya managed to sort out her visa complications and please tell me that Tanveer will be exposed soon.. Pleaseee? 😃

😆 Yes now she has the visa. And it's totally up to her whether she goes back or not. As for the CAT. Well we shall see. Oh will happen. But when, how, and with what, stay tuned to find out 😆

If I could find Neeru and Kareena I would literally hug them! 😆 ahh the way I'm happy they're helping Asad is a huge relief 😆

Yay! I'm so happy people the friends playing cupid 😳 Their role is pretty much complete, but you'll see them again in the next couple chapters 😃

Well, now I'm going to read the next update and actually find out if she does wear the dress or not.. 😳


Now I'll res to reply cause I'm in class 🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mochhug


Now I'll res to reply cause I'm in class 🤣


Do feel free to reply whenever you feel like 🤣 ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unres on page 62 as well 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
aapne kaha tha ki aap diwali baad update karoge ...
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Originally posted by: sona_naksh

aapne kaha tha ki aap diwali baad update karoge ...



Meine aisa kab kaha 😲

😆

Meine kaha mein weekend pe update karoongi 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
i loved
so romantic
and coming date oh god!! it was faaab😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm so so so sorry for the late comment Monica but here I am!
Chapter 24:
Brilliant Chapter!!! Starting from Zoya and Asad "accidental" kiss till the end, aahhmazing!!! I'm glad Zoya's visa case has been settled. Asad miyan is totally head over heels in love, looks like! And Zoya is, too. Too good!!

Chapter 25:
The most awaited update, i think! Haayyeee, that dress!! I knew Asad's reaction would be similar to that of the show, and no disappointment there! I loved how you penned the whole thing!! Brilliant! And Bol na Halke halke revisited, maarrr gayi mainnn!!! And the dance and the kiss... you, have planned to kill me, haven't you?? And then came, the confession...

And now i wait for the major reaction!!

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