Oye Chikni!!!
Look who's finally here and read your entire FF 😃 Kaan pakadke mein sorry bholti hoon for taking so long. I had promised you na that I will read it aur woh din finally aayi gaya 😃
At first, I started to read all your OS's and then the TS's. Last but not the least, I started with Meri Jashbaat. Now the last one is just one hell of a freaking good FF. The most beautiful thing is that I could clearly see the growth in you as a writer. Talented you are, but you have also developed this skill how to put feelings and emotions into words and how to chose and use the right words.
You make very sure that we, as a reader, get to know what the characters are going through and you do that with so much care. Very beautifully you write how they feel, what they are going through, whats on their mind and that is one of your strengths.
You take your time for that which is very good.
The turns of events in your story were sometimes quite shocking, especially the slap from Zoya to Asad. I did not see that coming! Sorry to say, but yes he deserved that. Aisa koi kehta hai kya?!
Mr. Khan going all the way to New York to pacify his Zoya was a nice addition the actual story.😊 Its good to see that Zoya itne asani se Mr Khan ko maaf nahin karne wali.
I also liked how you used Aapi and Anwar jiju, giving them more importance in your story than in the actual show. 😆
I am very eager to read more and more. I would love to see more romance, but I understand that will also come as the story develops with AsYa's relationship becoming stronger and stronger. There are actually some romantic moments in your other short stories, so I know you can pull off romantic scenes very easy and write them beautifully. So don't say that romance is not your forte! 😛
Keep up the good work Monica. You might not be in the right mood to update, koi baat nahin. Your personal life is so much more important. Take your sweet time. But be aware: kyunki meri nazar ab tum par hain...😆I am watching you😉 you can add one more fan to your list. Aapki European wali dost 😉
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