AsYa SS ~| Reliving Mangalpur |~ LAST PART on PAGE 123 - Page 65

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

hey tis is totally fabulous...

totally amazing...
totally imagine the whole scene n its so heart touching...
tis is superb...
its brilliant...
luv it...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon...


so many adjectives? haha

thank you so so much! glad u liked it! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: laks_vish

Hey Sadie...Brilliant update👏...Regarding the comments on your writing well she(ur aunt's friend)is not the only one in this world ..so keep trying bcoz there is to try rather than do nothing abt it..keep writing and thanks for the update!!

May I ask you when will update Woh Actually😳


hey thanks for the comment! it means a lot to me!
as for woh actually it will take some time since first i want to finish off this SS

plus i'm not updating until the pages for WOh actually reach 100 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --starstruck--


aww take care of ur kid! hope he gets well soon!

you are updating good girl? yippieee 😆

Yeah, like, right now! Woo HOOO!!!
Thanks! The kid is doing ok today. I can't wait to go back to work for a break ;-)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mariam.2187

That was SUPER AMAZING Update...👏👏👏Loved It..Loved It..Loved It..Loved It..Loved It..Loved It alot...❤️❤️Zoya's care for Asad-PhuPhi-Najma even when her life is in danger...👏Precap is interesting Hospital Romance...😳Continue soon..Thnx for PM...

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hey mariam thank you so much for such a lovely comment! I'm so happy everyone liked this part!

ill try to make the hospital scene a lil romantic but im not sure 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nanand

Yeah, like, right now! Woo HOOO!!!
Thanks! The kid is doing ok today. I can't wait to go back to work for a break ;-)


what do you work?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aashiqua

u r always too good..lov 2 read ur works..never mind what dat scriptwriter lady told..


thanks 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: manognasai

Awesome update...Finally the grave scene!Its my favourite scene in QH.U have written it very well👏
The best part was Zoya asking him to go from there and Asad saying "I.Dont.Care" wen the person said he wil also have to die if he wil not leave her!And he needed Zoya as much as he needed air!
Asad crying wen he saw Zoya lying lifeless...😭Asad kissing her wen Zoya wokeup⭐️
Waiting for next update.Update soon:)


yep finally the grave scene! haha after taking 8 chapters for a freaking night i finally write the grave scene 😆😆

thanks for the feedback hun, i'm so glad u liked it! thanks for mentioning the parts you liked the most means a lot to me!

ill update if the pages reach 120 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mysticlover

I just loved it when Asad said he won't leave Zoya... that he don't care if anything happens to him... I think I was stuck at that part for so long that it took me a minute to move forward to the later part... n I'm not exaggerating!!
I seriously don't know how to express my feelings about this part... it was beautiful... how Asad literally jumped out of the car n came running back to Zoya... it's the intensity of the person that matters...
N I'm so looking forward to the hospital romance... :)
About your aunt's best friend saying your writing is more applicable to a novel than a serial then I would say just take it as an incentive to publish your own novel!! :)


haha did u really stuck up at that one part? and i wrote it without any specific intention in my mind haha it was just a spur of the moment with me, i just went with the flow!

hospital romance may not exactly be what u r thinking, there won't be much romance here since zoe is yet to realize that she has feelings for asad!

as for the novel i dont think i write good enough for a novel!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-

WOW. 😲 That was amazing! 👏 👏 👏

You did an awesome job writing this part! 👍🏼 All the emotions and descriptions, wow! 😃
Thank you for letting us relive Mangalpur, I miss it so much. 😭 😭 This made me so happy! 😳
Simply fantastic!
-Fari 😳 ❤️


thank you so much fari! im glad u liked it! 😃
i miss mangalpur too! 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti

the very much anticipated grave scene finally written n truly it was awesome...way better than the original one!!!

congrats for writing it so beautifully!!!👏


thanks 😳

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