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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

" I'm sure you didn't miss the subtle way in which I've been praising MY Zoya through YOUR Asad since the very first chapter. "

How much i love these LINES ❤️ 🤗 :')

mee tooo 🤗

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: Linsie
The explanation part was nice and the
understanding between them...

Asad listening to zoya... what a twist 🤣

waiting for the next update..

thanks! i wanted to take things differently! hope i'm doing justice 😃

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#363

Originally posted by: aashiqua
Perfect
Everything was so vividly
described
I felt I was right there
Hats off to you
Thumbs up

Aww thanks 😳😳

glad i could put it up well enough for you to visualize it 😃

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
oh this was mind blowing. lets start with the end, it was so perfect. it made me cry, thinking of all the emotions playing in their hearts.
it was a fantastic part. I couldn't believe that Asad had heard Zoe without a protest. it is commendable. i'm glad he let his guard down for a while and immersed himself in the moment.

I seriously love this part a lot.

cont soon.

love.

wow i love it when readers tell me exactly everything they loved

and i love long comments

glad you liked it, i tried to write the emotions well and im happy you could think all those emotions

thanks for the lovely comment 😃

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: nanand
Oh MY God! Am loving your take on Mangalpur! Update update update, and oh HELL NO can the night be over!

ofcourse it cant be over 😆

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa1
haaaye wt an updt!
Superb man!
Im olready a deewaani of mangalpur n u r making me love it more n more!
Yup u r r8 ths 1ns d best so far! 😳
olthough ol ur updts r awesm n pitch perfect bt ths 1 excellently sidelined ol d othrs!
Brilliant job!
Ths mangalpur is far far bttr thn d mangu v gt in d show!
Waiting 4 my fvrt grave scene eagerly!
updt soon! N ya tnx 4 d PM! 🤗

everyone loves mangalpur hence i thought of writing this 😆😆

thanks for the lovely comment

im glad i could write it well enough 😃

grave scene will come dheere dheere 😆

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-
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why??? WHY ??? WHY??? seriously WHY???? did this not happen in the show??? It was so heartfelt at the end...Amazing update yet again!!!

i swear it should've happened in the show as well

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: Meself
I so wish to crush you in a bear hug!! And a big Mwah!!! to Ankie for making you write this! I love it, the subtlety between the two is cosmic. Its beautifully etched out. It makes for such a wonderful read. Beautiful!!

awwliieee *takes you in for a sadie special hug*

thanks for the comment 😃

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amri123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#369

hey

that was simply fabulous

absolutely amazing

great job

i completely agree with you, this is some of your best work

i'm really enjoying reading this

loved the way Asad held Zoya's hand

Zoya's thoughts were so touching

the way you made Zoya thank Asad and his response was simply amazing

the ending had a tender feel to it so that was nice

i can't wait to see what is it you do next

continue soon and thanks for the PM😊

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JASLEEN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#370

That was truly a wonderful part by u... Loved d way Asad hold the hand of Zoya... Can't wait to read more of Mangalpuri AsYa...
Thanx 4 d pm n update nxt part soon...

~JAZ~